Lin Wan, an ordinary social worker, died suddenly and traveled to Haruno Sakura in the world of Naruto, and was bound to the [Redemption System]. Her ultimate mission is to become the "white moonlight" in this world full of tragedy and fate - to redeem the core characters who are destined to perish and reverse the disappointing ending.
Reader comments
The story is quite interesting, but there are some errors in the plot. For example, Sasuke had a single magatama when his clan was wiped out when he was a child. When he became a genin, it was already a two-magatama. Orochimaru was not part of the Akatsuki organization at this time. I remember that the hospital pharmacist, the director of the field, was gone when Kabuto was a child.
It is a very unique way of thinking. There is still room for improvement in the writing style. There are more psychological descriptions. I could write more details about the original work and improve the word count [heartfelt]. Anyway, he is a super potential author!
The story is quite interesting, but there are some errors in the plot. For example, Sasuke had a single magatama when his clan was wiped out when he was a child. When he became a genin, it was already a two-magatama. Orochimaru was not part of the Akatsuki organization at this time. I remember that the hospital pharmacist, the director of the field, was gone when Kabuto was a child.
It is a very unique way of thinking. There is still room for improvement in the writing style. There are more psychological descriptions. I could write more details about the original work and improve the word count [heartfelt]. Anyway, he is a super potential author!