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You! Go and give me a guide to the reborn heroine of Wuqingdao!
I? Me? I'm just an ordinary person!
[Single heroine] [Hell Beginning] [Rebirth] [Time Travel] [Ruthless Road] [Cold Face Cute] [Villain with Brains] [Non-Routine Cool Article] [Micro Group Portrait]
My name is Ye Xinglan.
The first sect, Qiongtian Sword Pavilion, the fifth direct descendant.
I am born again.
Back to an era when the tragedy was not yet irreversible, but the seeds of partiality had long been sown.
Returning to this life, Ye Xinglan is dead.
From today onwards, there are only seekers who are alone on the path of spiritual practice.
——
My name is Chen Yu.
An ordinary person who is unlucky and somewhat lucky in the 21st century.
Unfortunately, when he was only twenty, his mother was seriously ill and he was burdened with hundreds of thousands of dollars in debt.
Fortunately, the strategy system is activated.
As long as the tasks are completed, the finances will be paid off.
Just when I thought I was lucky, the situation after traveling was beyond my expectation.
What does it mean that my strategy target is a super talented senior sister who has been reborn in the ruthless way and has an innate sword body? !
But fortunately, I have also read some stories about this type of rebirth.
The villains are usually silly and the plot is cliche, so there should still be a chance...
What? How come my identity as a time traveler was discovered!
Ah? ! You even discovered my system!
No! What do you mean I was in the game from the beginning!
Why can't I see through this villain?
…
Reader comments
It's okay, but the downside is that there are too many supporting roles. The author is advised to be more detailed.
I'm giving it four stars for now, it's not enough. Let me give a brief evaluation. The first eight chapters gave me a sense of immersion and allowed me to understand cause and effect. From the ninth chapter, the male protagonist appeared and his logical thinking was clear. But the previous time travel was a little flawed for me, but the title of the book is to return to Blue Star, and then the female protagonists will follow the male protagonist. (I have a question for the author here. Do you want to write back to Blue Star at the end to end it, or do you want the main story to be on Blue Star?) I hope the author will update more [Top post][Top post][Top post]
Adding a comment, I hope the author can write more detailed and delicate emotional lines that are not written later (purely my personal thoughts). For those who are not well-read, you can take a look [learned]
After reading this book so far, I can only say that it is unsatisfactory. I personally think that the relationship between the male and female protagonists can be handled better. The past life chapter has a big problem, and in my opinion, this problem comes from the author's eagerness for quick success and quick success in shaping the relationship between the male and female protagonists and the heroine herself.
It is extremely bad that the male protagonist does not appear in the entire past life chapter. If the male protagonist is allowed to enter in advance and every time the remnant soul guides painful memories, the male protagonist will appear to break this depression. The pain of memories gradually increases, and the male protagonist's understanding of the female protagonist gradually deepens, and every time the pain is broken, the relationship between the male and female protagonists deepens. Then after the heroine woke up, the heroine's goodwill came naturally.
Why is it said that it is a bit quick and easy? The heroine's past life does not need to be told in one go. It is divided into multiple important small scene narratives. Each different memory appears at the key emotional node of the male and female protagonists. Especially if the female protagonist has practiced the ruthless way, it can completely become an obstacle for the male protagonist to conquer the female protagonist, trigger the core contradiction of the crisis of trust (for example), conflict, and then resolve it, and then deepen the relationship.
Although the way the plot is handled is slightly lacking, the author is still trying hard to make the characters in the book more three-dimensional, which is worthy of praise. I hope the author can perform better [Learned]
A masterpiece, Laolao. The subject matter chosen is a bit old-fashioned, but the things written are very novel.
It can be clearly seen that the author has put a lot of thought into character creation and plot design, and did not choose those routine writing methods. Many villains are also set up with great thought. They are not just pure bad guys, but a confrontation that inevitably occurs under the conflict of interests of multiple parties.
Some conflicts also show that the author is thoughtful about the theme of the story. The author does a good job of describing the struggle of human nature and the flash of thoughts in the conflict, such as the part where the protagonist breaks through the Nascent Soul and the part where Su Da tries to reconcile the conflict.
I think this is good. The logic of online writing does not have to be particularly strict, but it will always be better if it can make people think.
The creation of the protagonist is what I particularly want to praise. The author does not let the protagonist become the mouthpiece of the theme of the work. The protagonist is not always great and invincible. The design of "defeating" the protagonist at the right time makes the protagonist more vivid and makes people want to read more.
Finally, the plot will give you big surprises from time to time. This is a very interesting "anti-routine" design. In this way, even if the protagonist has a system, it can increase the suspense of the story and will not make other characters become the protagonist's cushion. This is brilliant.
The writing style is acceptable, there are no major mistakes, and it reads smoothly.
To summarize, this book:
Plot design: ram
Character creation: ram
Writing style: Top notch
Recommendation index: five stars (manual dog head)
I hope the author can live a good life
"Previous Life" is a bit too long, but overall it's okay. There are a lot of additions to the shaping of other supporting characters. It's quite enjoyable to watch it.
But what to say? It's just a bit too long, and I'm not talking about it. I'm a semi-reader, so I may not feel that serious, but I'm afraid that those who follow it will be scared to death because of the long content [face covering]
But it's quite complicated to say it. After all, some things can't be written if they're not long enough, so I suggest the author finish updating the previous life in one day [laughing evilly] (No). In short, I hope the author can find a rhythm that suits him
I'm not a big reader, so I won't judge myself. Pursuing this book now feels like playing The End on January 22). Anyway, it's to my liking, so I'll try my best to support it.)
In the first chapter, everything seems to have been cleared up, and then a big villain parachuted in to make everything happen. The protagonist died in order to protect the heroine. This villain may be the mother of the little fox demon, or it may be something else.
I'll give it four stars first and wait and see, and then I'll die. If I can clear my name, I'll give it seven stars.
Compared with similar works, there are many supporting characters and villains in the small world. They are not just tools for the protagonist to show off, but also describe a lot of the protagonist's psychological activities. The immersion is relatively strong, but there are also a lot of foreshadowing and pit digging. If the characters and pits can be coordinated well, it will be very interesting.
I have watched almost half of it now, and I still feel quite good about it. This kind of group portrait is interesting to watch when there are many strong people who are not weaker than the protagonist, checking and balancing each other, instead of the protagonist crushing everyone alone. Keep up the good work
The heroine's previous life is a bit too much. Also, how many female protagonists are there in this book? The introduction says there is one, but the title of the book and the "Shura Field" mentioned by the author in the comment section make it sound like there are multiple female protagonists.
Give a five-star lesbian rating, and then talk about your feelings. The plot is right there, and you can roughly guess it by looking at the name. The male protagonist is credited very quickly, and the female protagonist is also foreshadowed. There are some chapters in the middle that I skipped directly. Maybe I don't like emotional dramas, but the writing is good. Come on, author, I hope you don't become a eunuch [Like][Like][Like]
The little foxes written by the author are quite cute, but they all turned into corpses [smile]
The part in the mid-term in the ancestral land of the demon clan weakened the protagonist a little too much. The story is generally good, but the feeling of being led by the nose is really not good, and this part is too long. If you want to promote, you should suppress it first, which will directly suppress the readers to death😭.
It's good, good, not stupid, and the male protagonist improves his level very quickly. I still like to watch the emotional development of the male and female protagonists. I feel that the plot descriptions of other supporting characters are a bit long, and the past life chapter is too long. I wrote nearly 60 chapters, but I just skipped them. , Because there is no male protagonist π_π, in short, the better it is to get to the back, I want to see the change in the heroine's attitude towards the male protagonist after she wakes up˙ᗜ˙[smile][smile][smile][love][love][love][like][like][like] Finally, the author, please come on! [Like][Love]
It's a very good book. The male protagonist is innocent and slow-paced. The female protagonist is very cute, silly and cute. She cares about the male protagonist, but she is cold on the surface due to her skills. The content is detailed and the characters are lifelike. It is a rare good book. But why do you have to write more than forty chapters about the female protagonist's previous experience? After reading that, I just felt bored (I was angry) and I am very curious about the follow-up development.
The setting and everything are very interesting. Although it may be a bit abrupt at the beginning to suddenly become a genius from the bottom, but the plot is not mentioned, and the beautiful world view is also very big. There is only one. The author will update soon. My reading speed is very fast [exploration]
It's quite good. When I first read it, I thought it was a classic novice novel, but after reading it for a while, I realized that the author's writing is really good. He takes into account every character and does not only highlight the protagonist, especially Zhuge Mingjin's characterization. It is quite good, not brainless, and has an online IQ.
I don't know why the rating is so low, but this book is indeed a very good book. I originally came here for the cool articles, but ended up being fed a mouthful of chaff. The character creation is extremely well done, and the emotions are particularly delicate. Everyone is not a stereotyped character, and is closer to real people, but when you see it later, you will feel a little uncomfortable (because the bad guys are not bad).
Although the shortcomings are obvious. For example, the past life chapter is too long and the protagonist feels a bit naive and unscheming. It feels like the first time he kills someone and encounters a crisis, the protagonist's character can grow a little. But it can also be seen that the author is really serious about writing. It is much better than the pile of fake-looking AI hydrographs now [Like] [Like]
After reading the first seven chapters, it's quite good to read on. Mainly because there was too much foreshadowing of the supporting characters in the early stages and it dissuaded most of the people.
The emotional drama is well written, but I like the little fox, so just give it a try.
It's still very good to watch, but sometimes it's all about supporting characters.
Very interesting book
It's beautiful, good luck to the author💪
The quality is very good, recommended
It's beautiful, cheers to the author [blowing kiss]
Come on, come on, come on
Very delicate. I hope you stick to it.
Looks good, Abba Abba, looks good. Hehehe [make a face] [make a face] [make a face]
Come on! It's pretty cool. If you keep updating it, it should become popular.
Love that suits my taste, pure among the impure
The characters are delicately created, and every supporting role is flesh-and-blood. Come on, the author.
It's so good. I stayed up late for two hours to watch half of it, and the other half during the day😄
It's really good-looking, but the knife is so uncomfortable to look at. Also, the past life chapter is too long.
It's okay, but the downside is that there are too many supporting roles. The author is advised to be more detailed.
I'm giving it four stars for now, it's not enough. Let me give a brief evaluation. The first eight chapters gave me a sense of immersion and allowed me to understand cause and effect. From the ninth chapter, the male protagonist appeared and his logical thinking was clear. But the previous time travel was a little flawed for me, but the title of the book is to return to Blue Star, and then the female protagonists will follow the male protagonist. (I have a question for the author here. Do you want to write back to Blue Star at the end to end it, or do you want the main story to be on Blue Star?) I hope the author will update more [Top post][Top post][Top post] Adding a comment, I hope the author can write more detailed and delicate emotional lines that are not written later (purely my personal thoughts). For those who are not well-read, you can take a look [learned]
After reading this book so far, I can only say that it is unsatisfactory. I personally think that the relationship between the male and female protagonists can be handled better. The past life chapter has a big problem, and in my opinion, this problem comes from the author's eagerness for quick success and quick success in shaping the relationship between the male and female protagonists and the heroine herself. It is extremely bad that the male protagonist does not appear in the entire past life chapter. If the male protagonist is allowed to enter in advance and every time the remnant soul guides painful memories, the male protagonist will appear to break this depression. The pain of memories gradually increases, and the male protagonist's understanding of the female protagonist gradually deepens, and every time the pain is broken, the relationship between the male and female protagonists deepens. Then after the heroine woke up, the heroine's goodwill came naturally. Why is it said that it is a bit quick and easy? The heroine's past life does not need to be told in one go. It is divided into multiple important small scene narratives. Each different memory appears at the key emotional node of the male and female protagonists. Especially if the female protagonist has practiced the ruthless way, it can completely become an obstacle for the male protagonist to conquer the female protagonist, trigger the core contradiction of the crisis of trust (for example), conflict, and then resolve it, and then deepen the relationship. Although the way the plot is handled is slightly lacking, the author is still trying hard to make the characters in the book more three-dimensional, which is worthy of praise. I hope the author can perform better [Learned]
A masterpiece, Laolao. The subject matter chosen is a bit old-fashioned, but the things written are very novel. It can be clearly seen that the author has put a lot of thought into character creation and plot design, and did not choose those routine writing methods. Many villains are also set up with great thought. They are not just pure bad guys, but a confrontation that inevitably occurs under the conflict of interests of multiple parties. Some conflicts also show that the author is thoughtful about the theme of the story. The author does a good job of describing the struggle of human nature and the flash of thoughts in the conflict, such as the part where the protagonist breaks through the Nascent Soul and the part where Su Da tries to reconcile the conflict. I think this is good. The logic of online writing does not have to be particularly strict, but it will always be better if it can make people think. The creation of the protagonist is what I particularly want to praise. The author does not let the protagonist become the mouthpiece of the theme of the work. The protagonist is not always great and invincible. The design of "defeating" the protagonist at the right time makes the protagonist more vivid and makes people want to read more. Finally, the plot will give you big surprises from time to time. This is a very interesting "anti-routine" design. In this way, even if the protagonist has a system, it can increase the suspense of the story and will not make other characters become the protagonist's cushion. This is brilliant. The writing style is acceptable, there are no major mistakes, and it reads smoothly. To summarize, this book: Plot design: ram Character creation: ram Writing style: Top notch Recommendation index: five stars (manual dog head) I hope the author can live a good life "Previous Life" is a bit too long, but overall it's okay. There are a lot of additions to the shaping of other supporting characters. It's quite enjoyable to watch it. But what to say? It's just a bit too long, and I'm not talking about it. I'm a semi-reader, so I may not feel that serious, but I'm afraid that those who follow it will be scared to death because of the long content [face covering] But it's quite complicated to say it. After all, some things can't be written if they're not long enough, so I suggest the author finish updating the previous life in one day [laughing evilly] (No). In short, I hope the author can find a rhythm that suits him I'm not a big reader, so I won't judge myself. Pursuing this book now feels like playing The End on January 22). Anyway, it's to my liking, so I'll try my best to support it.)
In the first chapter, everything seems to have been cleared up, and then a big villain parachuted in to make everything happen. The protagonist died in order to protect the heroine. This villain may be the mother of the little fox demon, or it may be something else. I'll give it four stars first and wait and see, and then I'll die. If I can clear my name, I'll give it seven stars.
Compared with similar works, there are many supporting characters and villains in the small world. They are not just tools for the protagonist to show off, but also describe a lot of the protagonist's psychological activities. The immersion is relatively strong, but there are also a lot of foreshadowing and pit digging. If the characters and pits can be coordinated well, it will be very interesting.
I have watched almost half of it now, and I still feel quite good about it. This kind of group portrait is interesting to watch when there are many strong people who are not weaker than the protagonist, checking and balancing each other, instead of the protagonist crushing everyone alone. Keep up the good work The heroine's previous life is a bit too much. Also, how many female protagonists are there in this book? The introduction says there is one, but the title of the book and the "Shura Field" mentioned by the author in the comment section make it sound like there are multiple female protagonists.
Give a five-star lesbian rating, and then talk about your feelings. The plot is right there, and you can roughly guess it by looking at the name. The male protagonist is credited very quickly, and the female protagonist is also foreshadowed. There are some chapters in the middle that I skipped directly. Maybe I don't like emotional dramas, but the writing is good. Come on, author, I hope you don't become a eunuch [Like][Like][Like]
The little foxes written by the author are quite cute, but they all turned into corpses [smile] The part in the mid-term in the ancestral land of the demon clan weakened the protagonist a little too much. The story is generally good, but the feeling of being led by the nose is really not good, and this part is too long. If you want to promote, you should suppress it first, which will directly suppress the readers to death😭.
It's good, good, not stupid, and the male protagonist improves his level very quickly. I still like to watch the emotional development of the male and female protagonists. I feel that the plot descriptions of other supporting characters are a bit long, and the past life chapter is too long. I wrote nearly 60 chapters, but I just skipped them. , Because there is no male protagonist π_π, in short, the better it is to get to the back, I want to see the change in the heroine's attitude towards the male protagonist after she wakes up˙ᗜ˙[smile][smile][smile][love][love][love][like][like][like] Finally, the author, please come on! [Like][Love]
It's a very good book. The male protagonist is innocent and slow-paced. The female protagonist is very cute, silly and cute. She cares about the male protagonist, but she is cold on the surface due to her skills. The content is detailed and the characters are lifelike. It is a rare good book. But why do you have to write more than forty chapters about the female protagonist's previous experience? After reading that, I just felt bored (I was angry) and I am very curious about the follow-up development.
The setting and everything are very interesting. Although it may be a bit abrupt at the beginning to suddenly become a genius from the bottom, but the plot is not mentioned, and the beautiful world view is also very big. There is only one. The author will update soon. My reading speed is very fast [exploration]
It's quite good. When I first read it, I thought it was a classic novice novel, but after reading it for a while, I realized that the author's writing is really good. He takes into account every character and does not only highlight the protagonist, especially Zhuge Mingjin's characterization. It is quite good, not brainless, and has an online IQ.
I don't know why the rating is so low, but this book is indeed a very good book. I originally came here for the cool articles, but ended up being fed a mouthful of chaff. The character creation is extremely well done, and the emotions are particularly delicate. Everyone is not a stereotyped character, and is closer to real people, but when you see it later, you will feel a little uncomfortable (because the bad guys are not bad).
Although the shortcomings are obvious. For example, the past life chapter is too long and the protagonist feels a bit naive and unscheming. It feels like the first time he kills someone and encounters a crisis, the protagonist's character can grow a little. But it can also be seen that the author is really serious about writing. It is much better than the pile of fake-looking AI hydrographs now [Like] [Like]
After reading the first seven chapters, it's quite good to read on. Mainly because there was too much foreshadowing of the supporting characters in the early stages and it dissuaded most of the people.
The emotional drama is well written, but I like the little fox, so just give it a try.
It's still very good to watch, but sometimes it's all about supporting characters.
Very interesting book
It's beautiful, good luck to the author💪
The quality is very good, recommended
It's beautiful, cheers to the author [blowing kiss]
Come on, come on, come on
Very delicate. I hope you stick to it.
Looks good, Abba Abba, looks good. Hehehe [make a face] [make a face] [make a face]
Come on! It's pretty cool. If you keep updating it, it should become popular.
Love that suits my taste, pure among the impure
The characters are delicately created, and every supporting role is flesh-and-blood. Come on, the author.
It's so good. I stayed up late for two hours to watch half of it, and the other half during the day😄
It's really good-looking, but the knife is so uncomfortable to look at. Also, the past life chapter is too long.