一人之下：数值才是纯粹的美

Under one person, fan fiction is considered awesome. I've read a lot of those that were given two stars, and there are a few common faults. One is that they commented after not long after watching, one is that the protagonist can't stand the slow pace of cultivation, and one is that the protagonist is said to have traveled through time but doesn't know that he is inferior. Others say that the protagonist's IQ is not enough. First of all, how many months did it take between the appearance of Zhang Chulan and the end of Biyou Village? The story line is inherently short. In fan fiction, most authors just write without knowing what to write. They are afraid that the subsequent plot will be different with updates. Another issue is Feng Baobao's life experience. Various authors have written about it being related to Wugensheng. The key point is that Mi Er didn't mention it. Everyone guessed that Wugensheng had a daughter. It would be so embarrassing if it wasn't right. And when everyone reads the Under One Person fanfic, do they want to see Zhang Chulan, or the setting of Under One Person. If you want to read the setting, this book is already top notch. He started writing in 1905 and has been able to write for more than a hundred years. Some of them are stories, stories about the older generation, and there are also anti-Japanese plots and how the alien world turns the tide in a war environment. These test the author's IQ. At least the author must have a complete story line of his own. So those who gave it two stars really read too much shit on Tomato. In the eyes of old bookworms, this book is already of high quality. Currently, there are no surprises, the settings are perfect, and there is no situation where the settings are temporarily patched. There are many books that I give two stars, and they are all really shit. I only give them five stars when I get really angry after reading them. But I only give them five stars when I see some good ones that I really recommend reading. I have read a lot of books under one person. Many of them are written in such a way that they are divorced from the characters' personality settings. Others write books that tell you what will happen next and follow the anime completely. So I might as well just watch the anime. Some people write that Feng Baobao wrote it inexplicably. When he first met Zhang Chulan, he would accept him as a slave. The animation will explain it, saying that it was taught by Xu Si. It's outrageous that those authors don't explain it at all. This book brings a completely new perspective into one person's worldview. At least it won't make people think, "I might as well just read the comics." Just calm down and watch it slowly. I also like to watch the ones that are invincible at the beginning because they don't abuse the master. But the protagonist of this book has never been abused, and the occasional injuries are very minor. The description is light and understated, so people won't mind. Moreover, the world view of this book is written very clearly, a bit like "The Patriarch of the Demonic Way", it feels a bit like a micro-group portrait, and everyone is written as if they are real people. You won't have to come from thousands of miles away to add experience to the protagonist just because he wants to level up. Personally, I feel like this book could be another anime. The author should write it slowly. It's so fun to watch.

7.8 Points worthy of the name At first, I wondered why it was so low, until it reached more than 250 chapters. The protagonist was already able to kill anyone in a few minutes alone, and even tied with Zhang Zhiwei, who was in his thirties. The sect was a branch of Longhu Mountain, and it had become a community of interests with four or five major forces including the Lu family and the Lu family by relying on its systematic prescription. It stands to reason that the protagonist doesn't need to rely on anyone anymore, right? But here comes the problem. The protagonist's sect has a wonderful method. In the second stage, it can open up the eight extraordinary meridians, increase the upper limit of a person, and can also take the initiative to help others open it. It is a unique skill and should not be spread to others. Zuo Ruotong of the Trinity Sect has arrived and wants the protagonist to directly help him open up the Eight Extraordinary Meridians. (According to the setting in the book, the help of the second stage of the protagonist's sect's magical method is the only way to the third level of reverse rebirth.) But what about the reward? The Trinity Sect has formed an alliance with the protagonist's sect, and the information in parentheses above can only be known by the previous leaders. The disgusting thing is here, it is obvious that the Trinity Sect's path to enlightenment depends on the protagonist's sect's magical method. Not to mention the useless thing that the reward is only one ally. The author's original words are: I seem to be thinking, but it's a pity that this person has become a person, otherwise such a wonderful method would be in the hands of others, and it would be necessary... Don't worry, it would be fine if it was just this, but before this plot, the protagonist's master was helping a master of the Trinity Sect heal his injuries. He knew how to practice the third level of rebirth, but because it belonged to someone else, he was determined not to practice or pass it on (the protagonist's sect's magical properties, true energy are in other places) You can know how to practice kung fu by turning around in the human body) At this time, Zuo Ruotong knew it, and made a vow with the protagonist's master (if he said it, he would die) that the two of them could not reveal the characteristics of the protagonist's sect's magic, and the protagonist's master could not teach or practice Nisheng. Let's go back to the front, and then when Zuo Ruotong asks for help, he tells the protagonist's master alone, which means that you can learn the reverse life, but you can't teach it. When it comes to the protagonist, even this is gone, and he directly asks: Do you also want to practice reverse life? With the unique skills of my sect, your family can have prostitution for free as long as you become the sect leader? You're such a picky person that you're a reborn person, and you didn't even publicly say: "After reborn, the protagonist's lineage can be trained"? (Not to mention this means that even if the protagonist's sect knows how to practice Nisheng through the magic method in the future, it will not be able to practice it. Once it is used, it will be stealing the teacher) It's disgusting, it has four stars. Like above, this score is high.

Among Tomatoes, I like it the most. The protagonist is a young man who is high-spirited, not childish, and is mature and steady in his work. However, he can write about the high-spiritedness of a young man. It is refreshing enough, but not ink at all. It should be pushed to the death, but it has a fly in the ointment. The story is not coherent enough, that is, it lacks enough emotional response. After all, the protagonist is too experienced in doing things. He is the same from the beginning to the present. He has a little lack of growth, but he still writes the spirit of a genius very well. It is very enjoyable to watch. It's worth reading, and it's not toxic at all. What I like most about this book is that not only does it not have a childish plot, but it also depicts the attitude that young people should have, and it also has goals and plans for doing things. It's not lacking in some cool points, but it's also not toxic at all. It's worth a read.

It's full, the rhythm is right, the cheats aren't too strong, and I'm pretty good at dealing with people. There's also a foreshadowing for the war of resistance. I hope it can change the fate of some people.

There is no impetuousness of ordinary system flow, and the writing style is more down-to-earth. The origin of the protagonist has little to do with the protagonist. It is more like telling the story from the perspective of a bystander. There are a lot of things that are difficult to reconcile, but it has achieved a better balance with the main plot, and the story has not strayed. I started writing it before Jiashen, and basically included one person's story. The overall story framework is complete and self-contained. It's a very good book, but I don't know why the rating is so low.

It is much better than the one that revolves around Luo Tian Dajiao at the beginning.

Very good book The protagonist is from the early 20th century. He is of the same generation as the Master, only a few years apart. Currently he is fighting against Japan. The protagonist is decisive in killing, attaches great importance to love and righteousness, and has no love for children. The plug-in is relatively new and is a combination of proficiency and the mall system. Then, although the protagonist passes under another person, he does not know the plot, and the story begins in childhood.

I have read more than a dozen books and one person asked me, this one is not the best written, but it is the one that appeals to me the most. The male protagonist is not too serious, and his character is very straightforward. He kills when he needs to, not indiscriminately, he is very sensible.

To be honest, this book is an excellent one. Fan fiction written based on unfinished comics makes it difficult for the author to control the direction of the unknown plot. There are many fanfics that have no choice but to discontinue updates and eunuchs because they don't know the setting and plot direction of the comics. I read the bad reviews, and they were roughly divided into three points. 1. It's not a cool article, it's not invincible at the beginning, and the system plug-ins are not strong. 2. The protagonist is an aboriginal time traveler and does not know the plot. 3. Smoking. The pace of this book is slow, and the protagonist is not invincible at the beginning, but grows up slowly. There is no problem if you don't know the plot, but if you know the plot is difficult to write, on the one hand, if you know the plot, make friends with future bosses everywhere, or seize the opportunity to kill the villain in advance, then it is no different from a cool article, and it is easy for some readers to coerce, why not kill so and so, why not seize such and such opportunities. It's better to take things as they come and explore the whole world bit by bit as the storyline develops. There are also so-called gifts of good things. There are some things that the protagonist cannot keep with his current strength. Only by giving them to others can the benefits be maximized and a good relationship can be formed. It's okay to take out some things to thank others and give them to friends. There is also the so-called Shen Nong in the comment area. In fact, many comments are mixed with personal views and opinions. In many cases, you need to look at them yourself to judge. Including my comments, what I think is good may be toxic to others. Some things need to be seen and appreciated by yourself. If you don't read them, you have no right to speak. If you want to judge the quality of a book through the comment area, then please read more other comments. If you listen to one side, you will be dark, and if you listen to both, you will be enlightened. If you're still not sure, read on.

Gold found in tomato pancakes! If you like the same person, you can eat it with confidence! The author's writing style is definitely the best on Tomato! @Don't touch my army line

So far, the story advancement and plot organization are pretty good.

I have never read a fanfic of Under One Person before. This is the first one. It looks pretty good, but it is a bit too everyday. I have read a hundred chapters and feel that there is no climax and it is a bit bland [code hold] [code hold]

It is a rare masterpiece among fan fictions under one person. It does not follow the Eight Wonders. It has its own cultivation path. Although it has a system, it is more like a panel and cultivation resources. There are no necessary tasks or punishments. The cultivation path and growth are well written.

Average level, not as good as other reviews say, not that bad either, about 8 points is more reasonable. There are two poisonous points. First, the author is an old smoker, and the protagonist in his novel is also a smoker. He wastes important early resources to buy cigarettes. Second, when helping Sanyi's left door leader to break through, there was a wicked boy who was knocked unconscious in the room. An analogy is that when a doctor performs a major surgery, the operating room is not closed and allows other people to enter directly to watch. Does such a big Trinity Gate only have one house? Both the practitioners and those in retreat have to be crowded together. Overall, I can only say that it is average and average. Others in the comment area exaggerated and it is not that good.

It's okay. The biggest satisfaction in reading this book is to see the beginning of the plot. I found that after chapter 300, the protagonist of the plot has already started to be behind the scenes. I don't know how to write the rest. I think most of it is from other people's perspectives. I guess I have finished writing the plot of the TV series, and then I will write the plot of Biyou Village. It will be almost complete.

It is much better than most fanfics that follow the plot after Zhang Chulan appears. At least they have their own plot. I hope it can be maintained well.

It's great to read. It's different from other System Invincible novels. The protagonist is practicing steadily and the anti-Japanese plot is also very good, which changed the ending of some people. More than three hundred chapters all have their own stories. Later, the plot starts around the great-grandson. The protagonist is the hardest background. It's so cool behind the scenes.

The characters are three-dimensional and the writing is smooth. It is worth reading.

Not bad Just a bit bland But why are you talking about things without knowing the plot? It has no impact on reading in itself, and if you read the later part, you will know that it is all for a reason, so I won't write any spoilers. The shortcomings also come later. I know that I want to write about the kind of people who have a sect and a family. How can they do everything personally? However, the main perspective is switched to the younger generation, which greatly reduces the sense of immersion in the protagonist's role, and the look and feel will be much worse. The book is out of stock, so you can read it, so it's not a strong benefit, but you can read it.

Let me summarize my thoughts after reading the 300 chapters. The time begins around 1900. The protagonist, a transborn baby, goes south to avoid the limelight because he is still too young to learn skills from his apprentice. After his wings were full, he went north to kill the enemy bandits. Until now the Jiashen Rebellion. The protagonist has a hook, but it's not too big. The writing is smooth. If you are tired of the same old beginning of other books, you can give it a try. The author has his own story. Some people find it a pity that the 300 photos were all taken 49 years ago. It is not a big change for the pattern changed by the war of resistance against Japan. Everything else is on the good side personally.

Overall, I think it's pretty good. The negative comments in the comment section are basically that the protagonist doesn't know the plot, and the time travel is too early. To be honest, if you don't like reading these things, just leave. This book is considered very good among the one-person fanfics I have read. [Please update]

It's quite possible. After reading more than 160 chapters, I feel that it is an original story written by one person's world view and individual characters. Although it is very interesting, I still hope that I can get to the beginning of the original plot as soon as possible.

It's pretty cool to watch, but it's just a slow game, but it can still be considered invincible at the beginning. It's considered invincible even if there are no enemies, and it's still invincible when there are enemies who can defeat it. Moreover, he still has feelings for family and country, and he also hates everyone, which is a normal and alien character. It's not that bad. The character design is considered top quality.

I finished reading it in one go and found it to be a pretty good fanfic. It started in the late Qing Dynasty and is of the same generation as Zhang Zhiwei. Moreover, the protagonist's golden finger is not very open. It starts with the proficiency panel and grows to the top of the world step by step. This part is more interesting. Later, at the beginning of the plot, the protagonist becomes a bit invisible. Still recommended though!

There are eleven good books in this book. The writing style is actually above average in Tomato. The author's creation is relatively smooth. The fan fiction plot is both original and consistent with the original work, and there are no very obtrusive places. It is considered a high-quality book in Tomato. I look forward to the author's second book. I feel very good that a novice author can write this.

First of all, the book is very consistent with the world view of One Person. Under One Person, there is no division of cultivation realms. There is only the accumulation of life and the wonder and diversity of skills. It is restored here very well; Secondly, Lao Tianshi is the number one genius among the people and has the ability to block and block. The protagonist's ability to avoid the attack is in line with my expectations. After all, the protagonist's ability is only the completion and expansion of skills and the increase of energy; Finally, the original plot is rich and the intersection with the original work is logical. If Weixia only has such great influence as the protagonist branch, modern original characters can still be born and have the same name. But as a fan, this is understandable and not a big problem. In general, there is no mentally retarded plot, Long Aotian, smooth plot logic, and a perfect work of double rebirth and peak perfection.

Personally, I think this is the best humanistic film in Tomato. I enjoyed watching it and the system settings are also very complete and clear. The protagonist also becomes stronger step by step. The description of the characters is also very good. But there are too few people watching it now. It is at least a masterpiece with a score of 9.5.

It's a very objective novel, it's not too ridiculous, and the plot progression is moderate. It's quite attractive.

It's steady and steady, the characters are not stereotyped, and it's nice to watch.

I was very happy to finish watching it. I was a little overwhelmed by the male protagonist's fighting ability at first, but every time I swore I wouldn't watch until this guy died, he killed the other guy again. I really like the descent down the mountain at the end, I want to see the river of blood! ! The male protagonist has a good character and the ending is complete. I like recommending it!