Return for Taking Disciples: I Take Shi Potian as My First Disciple

To be honest, the book is not bad, but the title of your book needs to be optimized. The characters in your book, Yue Buqun, Guo Jing, Di Yun, all are more popular than Shi Potian. The setting of binding Shi Potian first at the beginning is still good. After all, in terms of qualifications, Brother Gou is indeed incredible and can help the protagonist grow up quickly. As a 20-year-old reader, I can't give you full marks for your writing style, but you have one advantage: it's not clumsy at all, and the plot progresses very quickly, which is very enjoyable. Five-star reviews for encouragement. I hope the author will not be ashamed of his pen name. It has been added to the bookshelf and I look forward to more updates.

Cut? Have you gone to the palace to enjoy your blessings? [What]

Well written. I like it. I hope the author will finish it.

It's okay, but it's a bit uncomfortable to suppress the combat power.

It's really good. Come on.

Come on, boy, it's okay

It's pretty good, but it's a waste of time.

Very good, I read it in one sitting, not bad

This book is very enjoyable to read

Grafted very well. Disciple recruitment system, comprehensive martial arts.