I, Yue Buqun, have a system for recruiting disciples, and I only accept the protagonists who are destined to be disciples!
Linghu Chong? Get out of here! You are the only one who still wants to be my apprentice!
My eldest disciple Shi Potian, one year of cultivation is equal to your ten years!
The second disciple, Guo Jing, is invincible in his diligence, and his Dragon Elephant Kung Fu + Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms can smash Ling Xiao into pieces!
Third disciple...
Who put Ren Yingying in my house! Aren't you afraid that your wife will be angry?
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Many years later, Yue Buqun sat on the top of Huashan Mountain, looking at a group of peerless geniuses below him, and sighed helplessly:
"I really don't want to be this martial arts legend, but my disciple is so ambitious that he is invincible just lying down!"
Reader comments
To be honest, the book is not bad, but the title of your book needs to be optimized.
The characters in your book, Yue Buqun, Guo Jing, Di Yun, all are more popular than Shi Potian.
The setting of binding Shi Potian first at the beginning is still good. After all, in terms of qualifications, Brother Gou is indeed incredible and can help the protagonist grow up quickly.
As a 20-year-old reader, I can't give you full marks for your writing style, but you have one advantage: it's not clumsy at all, and the plot progresses very quickly, which is very enjoyable.
Five-star reviews for encouragement. I hope the author will not be ashamed of his pen name. It has been added to the bookshelf and I look forward to more updates.
Cut?
Have you gone to the palace to enjoy your blessings? [What]
Well written. I like it. I hope the author will finish it.
Not bad!
It's "too short" [fear]
The writing style and the plot are very smooth
This book is very enjoyable to read
Come on, boy, it's okay
It's really good. Come on.
It's pretty good, but it's a waste of time.
It's okay, but it's a bit uncomfortable to suppress the combat power.
Countdown to go home
Very good, I read it in one sitting, not bad
Very good, but a bit short and has some pitfalls in return.
Grafted very well. Disciple recruitment system, comprehensive martial arts.
To be honest, the book is not bad, but the title of your book needs to be optimized. The characters in your book, Yue Buqun, Guo Jing, Di Yun, all are more popular than Shi Potian. The setting of binding Shi Potian first at the beginning is still good. After all, in terms of qualifications, Brother Gou is indeed incredible and can help the protagonist grow up quickly. As a 20-year-old reader, I can't give you full marks for your writing style, but you have one advantage: it's not clumsy at all, and the plot progresses very quickly, which is very enjoyable. Five-star reviews for encouragement. I hope the author will not be ashamed of his pen name. It has been added to the bookshelf and I look forward to more updates.
Cut? Have you gone to the palace to enjoy your blessings? [What]
Well written. I like it. I hope the author will finish it.
Not bad! It's "too short" [fear]
The writing style and the plot are very smooth
This book is very enjoyable to read
Come on, boy, it's okay
It's really good. Come on.
It's pretty good, but it's a waste of time.
It's okay, but it's a bit uncomfortable to suppress the combat power.
Countdown to go home
Very good, I read it in one sitting, not bad
Very good, but a bit short and has some pitfalls in return.
Grafted very well. Disciple recruitment system, comprehensive martial arts.