Mortal*************

This is a good novel about a heroine cultivating immortality. Although it is a fan novel, the control is good. However, I feel that the heroine has experienced many deaths and needs to grow up. If every simulation is participated in from her true perspective, she is still pushed to death so smoothly every time, and the heroine is tenacious. There is also the simplicity of modern people, which is generally relatively empty. They are young, do not have much human emotions such as loneliness, and have a difficult journey to fight monsters and upgrade. After experiencing pain and disaster, their character does not have much obvious growth and ups and downs. Their spiritual roots are incomplete, but they feel firm after suffering a little. The future can be expected.

Wonderful! Come on, big brother, hurry up and write, waiting for the heroine, Piao Xuan Gu, Wen Tianren, the handsome guy, to go [laughs]

I quite like the heroine's character. She is hardworking and ruthless. She works hard and cultivates from the bottom step by step. The plot is quite interesting. The simulation part is not repetitive. She talks about sleeping for a long time without being pretentious. Lightning points: The man the heroine sleeps with is unclean; Swearing words that are degrading to women; Male characters account for the vast majority (probably due to the influence of the original plot). Personally, I don't like the female protagonist to call others "old brother, big brother" and the like. I think she is more flattering to the male characters.

It's beautiful. It's really beautiful. The heroine has her own opinions and sometimes gets confused, but she can quickly find her target. The pace of this article is also very good, and the plot is very attractive to read. The disadvantage is that there are too few of them now and not enough to watch. Big cheers for the author! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The author is very good at writing battles. The battle scenes of cultivating immortals are richly and excitingly written. The protagonist's battle has two levels, the level of martial arts and the level of spiritual power. Equivalently, the protagonist has two theoretical weapons. The opponent only relied on instinct to fight with spiritual power. During the battle, you can see the protagonist's two levels of fighting ideas, which complement each other smoothly. However, the protagonist's mentality is not adapted to the world of immortality at first. It is lawful good, not a player's mentality. In the simulator, I was beaten to death many times. It hurts every time. After reaching the halfway point, I changed my mind and started using the simulator to do black things. Readers who like to watch evil spirits and the fourth natural disaster should consider this. Sympathize with the man and give him the opportunity to fight desperately. The heroine can have plan B. But it's so embarrassing for readers who have watched the heroine die countless times along the way. I followed nearly a hundred chapters all the way, just to see the heroine earn a living. The description of the heroine's suffering is full of details, and it feels light to give up the opportunity to a passerby. Okay, you are noble. All we can say is that the huge disparity between men and women mentioned above is a warning.

The latest chapter is about fighting and it's so exciting! Come and see, everyone, although the previous fight scenes are also very exciting, they are still crushed easily in the public, crazily breaking the hearts of the geniuses, and showing themselves as saints in front of others (simulated many times, many powerful enemies, it is not easy) (... But looking at the simulator, the capital has repeatedly manipulated the game, and in reality, all kinds of tricks are made for the genius, and the appearance is invincible. The name is now Roadside Ichijo (if you win, you will use your head cone to be humorous, and you will get 50 snacks. The heroine, you are so full of humanity, I love it. The author has grasped the essence of the simulator. In short, he has made the male partner look like a dog and turned into a dog in a super handsome way. Liu Ruyan from Wuhu is so cute. Now I see this name with a cunning, confident and arrogant look.

Nice! It's a simulator story, but the heroine has a strong sense of initiative. There is a golden finger, but it is not a brainless novel. The heroine has no master's inheritance, no magic elixir, and even the lowest level elixir has to be exchanged with her life. The heroine struggled all the way and tried countless times. Fortunately, her hard work finally brought about equivalent growth and rewards. The danger is not the plot cycle, but the ladder for her to reach the top. The heroine is sober, rational, and even cold. She knew that casual cultivators were just consumables and could only continue to plunder resources and arm themselves. The growth line is very well written [note]

It's very, very good-looking. It's different from other mortal fanfics. It has the feeling of an upgraded and refreshing novel, with a little bit of broth. It's not like those pure sweet novels. It has its own path. It makes me very excited when I read it. Sometimes it's very funny and makes me laugh (●°u°●) "I've been hammering [laughs]

The heroine had just traveled through time and was struggling to make ends meet. She didn't have enough food at home and was almost sent to be a child bride for Han Li. After running away from home, she worked hard to practice martial arts. She came down the mountain after becoming a master of martial arts and discovered that the world is not martial arts but cultivation. The heroine who has just come off the mountain is still a passionate and righteous girl. After several hardships, she understands the dangers of the world of cultivation and the strong predators. The simulator helps her survive many crises and she becomes cautious and knows how to carry out crimes. The heroine is gradually growing up, and I am very much looking forward to subsequent updates.

Memories can be retained after simulation, and the plot is not so mindless, showing various possibilities worthy of consideration. But the heroine is very happy in every sense of the word! Be bold when faced with problems, have the ability without internal friction, and have a good personality that is not "dark". The current plot with Pharmacist Lin is really unexpectedly good. What should the heroine do if the plot map changes to a puppy in the future? Looking forward to the follow-up.

Five stars out of five [heartfelt], it is rare for a heroine who is decisive and decisive to practice fairy writing, and the fighting scenes are also well written. It is rare to see such a smooth writing style in female videos. The simulator setting is also well balanced with the advancement of the real plot. The heroine who does what she needs to pretend is so handsome [admiration]. And it really made me feel like I saw Dianjia's kind of immortality writing, which was very refreshing.

I enjoyed watching it. The heroine changed her mentality and wanted to participate in the Immortal Ascension Conference. It was super hot.

It's pretty cool, but I'm worried. Fans can easily be blocked. It's best to take it easy and change the name later to avoid it.

The fried chicken looks great! ! ! In the early stages, the heroine was a little frustrated in the first few chapters of the simulator, but she became really beautiful later on! ! ! Once you train your dog, you will become a queen! ! ! Are you really playing with people's hearts? ! !

The author, has the protagonist read the legend of mortals cultivating immortals?

It's so good, support it with 5 stars [face covering] It looks so good, why isn't it updated?

Oh my god~ How could the author bear it! This baby with only 190,000 words has gone out to work. Hurry up and add another 100,000 words [laughter]

The author will update soon. I want the protagonist, the old demon of Hehuan, to fight against the second demon fairy.

It's good to read. The author has written down my expectations for mortals to become immortals.

Very pretty

Come and see all the good-looking things

It's so beautiful. Why is the score so low?

It's good to watch, I love to read it, but there are too few, not enough to watch, please give it a big boost from the author [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The writing is okay, the heroine's growth is slow, but now she is getting better, and she feels a bit like a refreshing heroine. The current writing has little to do with the fandom, so if you haven't read it, it won't affect your reading.

The writing is good, but the heroine was too naive in the early stage and only started to change after seeing the cruelty of the world of cultivation.

It tied the knot in one breath. The author's writing style is very good and the rhythm is well grasped. There is no watering.

Not bad, can be used as food and fodder

Good-looking, the heroine's mother level

The heroine has a very cute personality and her teenage vibe is very cute

It's so beautiful, the author will update it soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !