Peeping System? I Visualize Ten Thousand Immortals! Enlightenment and Enlightenment

There should be two golden fingers, one bright and one dark. One is the visualization system, and the other may be the great power behind you. Generally speaking, the plot is a bit cliched at first but not cliched at all. I can only say that he handled it very well. I really feel like the way things are done in Xian Xia. Later, I was also confused and confused. When I revealed a corner of "reality", He was confused and struggled, but the people and comrades who accompanied him along the way made him more and more aware that his "heart" was still there even if they were not around, because each one of them lived in his memory. He has also grieved the lives of "mortal" people, whether immortal or mortal, but the "love" in his heart cannot be let go, but as time and things are passing by, he can only say "see you tomorrow" and maybe they will meet again in the distance. ---------------------------------------- The combat logic is reasonable and nothing outrageous. __________________________________________________ Don't worry and watch it. If you finish watching it, please give it a like👍[Sneaky smile]

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Okay, okay, you can see fairy tales of this quality on Tomato. The setting of Goldfinger is novel, the protagonist is neither strict nor troublesome, the beginning is very good, there are conflicts and it is refreshing, and I also like the behavioral logic of the protagonist to deal with things. Some of the details of the fight are quite fun to watch. The plot can be seen that it is not a brainless text. In some cases, you can see some in-depth processing by the author. The quality is very high on Tomato, but it is a bit unreadable. Come on, author!

Overall, it's a pretty good book. I feel that the fairy tale style is much greater than the system style. Generally speaking, it has the flavor of a traditional fairy tale. The system will change, and in the end it will be completely suitable for practice, which is very different from the early stage. The values ​​​​will not always expand. Generally speaking, it is maintained within a framework and will not give people the feeling of a collapse in combat power. Some plots are fun to watch, and some subplots are quite interesting. It feels like the author wanted to make this book long and dug a lot of holes. As the story develops, some of the holes are slowly being filled. The setting of Daoyun should be quite interesting. I don't know how it will develop in the future. I'm looking forward to it.

It's beautiful, no need to say much. The author's writing is delicate and heart-warming, the humorous plot makes you smile, and the difference between immortals and mortals is amazing. The descriptions of scenes and appearances are even more detailed, and there are many foreshadowings that are enjoyable to read. I didn't expect that the master would also teach love experience in the book. Some of the plots in the back are so sad. The swords are very touching, and there is a difference between immortals and mortals. If it weren't for the fact that people nowadays are too impetuous and like to read mindless and fun things, the performance of this book will definitely be much better than it is now. It's a pity that these people can't experience the content behind it. I really like the characters and plots written by the author. Yes, it's really good.

It was really fun to watch. The 8.1 Rating is really low. The world view is great and the writing is also very delicate. But the front part is a little bit poisonous. Lin Yue, a passerby, couldn't bear to see Lin Yue and the male protagonist being close, so he deliberately tried to gain a sense of presence, and then was slapped in the face by the male protagonist for pretending. It really should be deleted, and I was almost persuaded to quit, but I patiently looked back, and the foreshadowing and writing became better and better towards the back. They are all quite online. I still hope that the author will use less formulas. The emotional scenes between each supporting actress and the heroine are also quite poisonous, but they are inexplicably abrupt. It is all about the hero saving the beauty and secretly developing feelings, and then the girl takes the initiative to push the emotion to a climax. If this book does not have a heroine, I think it is quite interesting. If I really want to write it, I can change the way of writing. However, there are many advantages. Every opportunity and improvement in realm are relaxed and relaxed, and the writing style of the person beside him also adds a touch of vitality to the haggard life of cultivating immortals, highlighting the character of the protagonist, which feels a bit like an immortal. I don't want to write a book review anymore. I'm tired of writing. Let's read the plot of one of them for yourself. It's up to you to decide whether you want to follow this book or not. "Meng Yao stood there, looking at the back of Xiao Yun Shengxue in white clothes, her fingertips clenched slightly. She originally thought that she would never see Xiao Yun again in her life. Unexpectedly, it would be nearly thirty years before the two met again. However, as time goes by, her hair has become stained with frost, but he still looks like a young man, and there are people who are traveling with him by his side. Really... Things are different and people are different, immortals and mortals... Are different. "

The biggest highlight of this book is the description of the character's appearance. I finally found an appearance description that doesn't say "like a big reader" or "sword eyebrows and starry eyes". God knows how this appearance description made me feel redeemed. I will give you five stars based on this. I don't know if there is a female protagonist.

It looks great, the writing is good, and the setting is easy to understand. But what I don't understand is, why is it only rated 8? I feel like it's at least 8.5. I've been watching it since last night. I don't think there's anything wrong with it. It's just that the paragraphs and comments are a bit sparse. I'd like to take a precaution in advance. I have an ambiguous partner at the moment. I don't know if the author is going to take him offline or develop a single female lead. Currently, there's only one girl from the second volume onwards. The girl at the beginning of the first volume seems to be just a passerby. At most, it's just a passer-by with too many shots. Anyway, this book is still very readable. It's a high-quality article. I'm not very good at talking. I hope the author can give it a thumbs up [Blow a kiss] [Flow a kiss] [Flow a kiss]

This novel is okay, but it's a bit short. The author can speed up the progress. Maybe it's too short so the rating can't go up. I'll write a thousand or two thousand chapters first. It's not easy to write novels about cultivating immortals now. I studied about mortals cultivating immortals and read a similar story called Long Aotian. I found that the ones who live in dogs are the ones who can play to the end. Let's keep a low profile and develop the wretched ones first. The new players next door are all awesome. The author, go ahead and take the best of them. Come on! Dear author, you should increase the difficulty for the protagonist, or raise the upper limit to survive in danger, and make the dungeon more difficult. Come on, you can capture the hearts of the audience all because of your storyline and novel subject matter. This is the advantage!

It's so outrageous, it's all a classic plot, and there's a lot of little poison

I am following the short series and have read a hundred chapters so far. It is more like a traditional fairy tale (such as a mortal's story of cultivating immortality), a bit light but not boring. In addition, I personally don't like reading swords. It's only been a hundred chapters and it's still very uncomfortable to see five fellow sects being transformed into corpse puppets in the first secret realm. Overall, it doesn't seem to have any major problems at the moment, but it's definitely not a good read. I'll give it five stars first. It has a lot of writing and a worldview. After reading other reviews and the author's more detailed replies, I feel that the author is serious about writing a book. At first I thought it was a system-oriented novel, so I was sad to see the sword. Since this is a traditional fairy-cultivating novel in the system style, it is normal to have some swords and no emotional scenes. Come on, author, I hope that I can make up for all the knives at some point and achieve a great success.

It's almost 500 chapters, and this book is considered average in Tomato. There are a lot of poisonous points in the beginning, and the plot is classic and a bit cliche. But after the last 100 chapters, the book improves a lot. The good thing is that the author's writing is not bad, the fighting scenes and drama are good, and the protagonist's combat power is also very strong. Basically, he builds the foundation to tie the pill, and the pill beats the Yuanying. The logic is also good. Even if the protagonist feels a little wronged in Xiazhou, he will be killed directly. After he comes back, he becomes weak. During the fight with Tianyan Sect, I think it is better to swallow up the origin of the saint. As for the unstable foundation, I think it is pure nonsense. Keeping the saint will definitely be of no use in the end. Also, the author's emotional line is really bad. All in all, it is four stars. The beginning of this book is quite satisfactory. It is just an ordinary article about killing monsters and upgrading, and even has some poisonous points. However, after Chapter 660, after the protagonist ends the great terror, the knives and literary dramas written can really become a god. I meet all the old friends in the past. The inner drama is very well described, especially when meeting Meng Yao. The writing is so awesome.

It's pretty good. There's nothing bad about it. It's a good book so far.

The whole novel is well-behaved, and there is no special brilliance or show off skills, dazzling eyes, sensationalism, etc. The whole story gives people the feeling of being a bland and standard immortal novel, just like drinking a cup of green tea. Although it is bland, it is also satisfying. Especially the chapters about Meng Yao's death are so well written! ! ! It's so emotional. Is there any difference between immortals and mortals? Not really, it's more about meeting the right person at the wrong time, but it's hard to settle that you won't be able to be with the right person for the rest of your life. Oh, the scenes where the heroine first meets are also very well written, not abrupt, very harmonious, no sudden feelings, but natural development, which is quite interesting, but when she comes back, she becomes invisible when facing the Blood God Clan, and in the end, she even rushes into the coffin without any psychological preparation and imitates the heroine Ouma and hangs up. Because the plot of this episode was too tense, the death of the heroine seemed fake, and there was no time to grieve, since she would be resurrected later anyway. On the contrary, the death of Meng Yao, who was secretly cherished by the mortal family, was described with great color. After all, it was truly the end.

I finished reading it in one sitting, kids, it's really good. To say that it is systematic is actually more like the early traditional fantasy. This kind of thing is really rare in Tomato, especially it is really rare to be able to look good. Not procrastinating or wordy, the pace is tight and the suspense is hidden. I like the temperament revealed by his writing style very much What the protagonist goes through is deeply touching. I think this is what makes it unique compared to other traditional fantasy. Those poems are also very good, and he is also quite literary. Although there are still some holes that have not been filled in, I feel that the plot will be complete by the end of the Small World chapter. I don't know what will happen next. It seems that the author said this is a debut novel, which reminds me of the same very good debut novel "Nine Transformations of the True Spirit"

It's hard to find something so attractive nowadays. I read it in one go and now I'm following the big team. It's a very good novel. The setting is also very novel and there's nothing poisonous about it. It's about 9 points. Great support for the author⛽

This book is well written, and the flaws do not hide the good points. It was a pleasure to read, and the more I read, the more addictive I became. Update soon You still have to travel around as a casual cultivator, fight, hunt for treasures, and travel among various forces. What kind of sect competition is really boring.

I think it's well written, but when I see a lot of people saying it's very poisonous, I feel like this is just human nature, and it's not mindless killing. If you want to read this kind of thing, just read Chun Shuang Wen, but the level is reached too quickly, and no one suspects that this is a bit abnormal. Everything else is pretty good. I hope the author will work hard to update it. In fact, I also want to ask how many female protagonists there are [Thoughts]

The writing is good. I skipped the first few dozen chapters from the short video and got to about 450 chapters. There is nothing wrong with it overall. It is a qualified and enjoyable article. It's a pity that it's not fun enough in my opinion. It's too small to take care of the people who want to follow me. That's where it ends.

The idea is good, the setting is novel and interesting, the plot is compact, interesting and beautiful to watch.

It's very comfortable to watch. The protagonist's golden finger doesn't look out of place at all. It feels very real. I hope the author can create more works [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]~~~

What a good book, exercises moves system The introduction is clear and clear, the level of advancement is reasonable and not stressful and even a little fast. The story is also fascinating and makes me want to continue reading. I stayed up late to read the Nascent Soul stage and couldn't hold it anymore. Let's leave it at this for now and comment later.

This novel is quite good. The male protagonist has very upright views. He kills when he needs to and doesn't kill when he needs to. Besides, the poisonous points in it are not too poisonous to put it another way. At least I can accept it. It's worth reading.

The author's previous writing was quite average, but considering that the protagonist is indeed young and not the reincarnation of an old demon, there is nothing poisonous about it, but the routine is a bit "classic". By the 300th chapter, the rhythm becomes normal, and there are not so many interesting plots. There is no female protagonist yet, but many women have a crush on the male protagonist. We have a wait-and-see attitude in this regard. The follow-up will be either no CP or a single female protagonist who will maintain five stars (the current score of 8.5 Is considered fair, mainly because of the above mentioned average)

After reading the comments for a long time, I looked at the beginning again. This novel is quite unique. It can persuade you to quit at the beginning, and after you quit, you won't easily leave negative reviews. But I saw about ten hours, or more than three hours They all left five-star reviews, which proves that as long as you can tolerate this novel at the beginning, you can enjoy it later. Overall, this novel should be pretty good, but some parts are not suitable.

It's a rare, rare good book. I read more than 400 latest chapters in one go. It is really rare among the hundreds of books on my bookshelf that I can read it from beginning to end in one go. Really a wonderful book! Highly recommended

I came across this by accident, and I didn't expect it to be very exciting. The author's writing style is very natural, the storyline is also bright, and the characters in it are also very vivid. I have added it to my bookshelf.

I really think this book is good. Although novels of this type are all similar, the author has buried a lot of plot lines. If these holes can be filled in, this book will be good. I hope the author can work hard and not be sloppy [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] The first one or two hundred chapters may be a little bit annoying, so you can skip reading. It's not a big problem and it won't affect subsequent reading. There are no important plot lines.

It's fresh and refined, and the characters are very real. Hello, I'm an author. I'm very hard-working. I've been updating for four months. I hope it can be longer. It's 8.1. It's really missing. I feel like I need to go up to 8.5 No matter what.

The plot is compact, much better than those books that pretend to be slow-paced daily novels but actually have a low number of words.