Monsters Invade, Luckily I Can Transform into Hoshimiya

If you want to see elegance, you can just leave. This guy is just wearing a mask, and it will be the same with other people.

There is nothing wrong with the story, even if you remove Ya. The plot is also a formula that starts strong and then encounters a woman, and then pretends to be cool and slaps you in the face. It has nothing to do with Ya (such as the sense of human-machine).

What does this book have to do with Ya? It just uses the power to show off and slap people in the face. Ancient Xiaobaiwen

Energy cannot be restored on its own, what does the author think? When you meet a powerful character and fight him in a war of attrition, can you afford it? Just like when you fight that god, how did you come up with this mechanism?

I think it's pretty cool, but why is there no one there?

There are so many chapters with that girl Bibi Nana, it's a bit poisonous

The fighting was too frequent, it was a fight every day. Daily life is nothing at all.

Okay, good-looking

I have the same comment as other 2 or 3 stars 😂

System problem, why not just turn it into Ya? Why do the original abilities or the original abilities of the sword have to be taken apart to unlock? Isn't this just a pile of hard bones in the flesh? Which came first, the meat or the bones? Why using the ability will consume so many points depends on how you write it later. . Obtaining consumption packages is booming. Unnecessary

It's quite interesting. The plot progress is a little slow. I don't see any bad points so far.

The overall feeling is not bad, but the plot is fast and short, which is a bit different from an excellent work. Even if you say it is a good novel, it is not very good. But the plot is clear, but the progress is too fast. It would be better to make the timeline longer. The battle plot is very well depicted. As the author of the extra chapter, I think you can write the second part of this book after you finish it. I hope your works will become better and better [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

It's pretty good, but I always forget to use Ya's ability. I always substitute Li Sushang.

Very good, I hope to see this book finished one day

It's okay, but sometimes there are some bad sentences, but it's good

Overall it's good, but I hope it shows Ya's character a little bit more

I see that 14 is a bit overwhelming for the protagonist's combat power. There are some minor flaws but not too much. Can it be finished?

The protagonist has been fighting, fighting, fighting since the first chapter. It's almost boring to watch every day. There are several pictures of this battle. Every day, at most, there is only one.

It's not fun to keep creating anxiety about insufficient energy.

It's not very poisonous, it's okay. Come on.

There is no poisonous point, the update is too slow [cover face][cover face][cover face]

Average, nothing to say, just average