Transmigrating into a Republican-Era Siheyuan, I Become a Demon Beyond the Borders

This is really well written and very detailed. Also consider the environment and situation at the time. But please be careful not to accept Qin Huairu in the later stage. You can have more female leads. Never accept Qin Huairu. Try not to damage the structure inside the courtyard. You can watch the show on the side. If you want to find a woman from a good family to be your wife, that's fine. Isn't Liang Lati good? Approximately your age.

A pretty good book! Very refreshing and to my taste! This score is low [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] After Chapter 154, the licking started! Suddenly I went to do information, and my style changed. I'm out of the way, I'm going to donate again [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It's quite good, the rhythm is very well controlled, there is daily life, time, conflicts, and no frustration. I am very much looking forward to the life after moving into the courtyard house. I can write more about my daily life after living in the courtyard house. After all, if the protagonist's underground identity is involved, it is easy to get caught.

Overall, this book is a good read. The plot and character relationships are relatively smooth and clear. Although there are golden fingers blessings, the protagonist does not drift away and maintains a low-key and restrained yet appropriately expressive style. Of course, there are some risks in killing enemies, exchanging gold bars, and killing bandits, but it would be a pity if you don't use it. The appropriate risk is acceptable. The content of this book is good, but it is a bit verbose in terms of collecting and purchasing materials. Come on! ! !

The sister Wang behind me always felt that she was superfluous. For a little kindness, she got into a lot of trouble, one after another. You agreed to collect gold, and then ignored the business. You must hibernate in 49 for decades and join the organization. The devils have all been beaten away. It seems that you have done a lot of useless work.

Yes, the writing is very immersive. There are some small flaws but they don't matter. The pig's feet are also very cautious and don't ask for trouble. When it's time to take action, they are crisp and clear. Especially the hoarding of goods looks so exciting and in line with the feeling of the Chinese. It just feels a bit unreliable without stocking a large amount of arms.

It is a rare novel written by hand, but the writing technique needs to be improved. There are many anecdotes, but overall it is good. I need to speed up the process. I read dozens of them, and they are all anecdotes.

The protagonist is a person who understands benefits, which is very good! The more you write, the less interesting it becomes. If you write less technical stuff, no one will read it. What is your focus? What is the storyline that comes and goes in depth?

Just like reading a diary, I estimated that this book would have five million words, and one million words are still in the courtyard [face covering] [laughing awkwardly] [like]

The idea is good, but the front part is too thin, like running water.