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Explore more →Transformation Literature Has Declined. If You Don't Agree, Come and Argue (Don't Be the One Who Gets Bored Easily)
Are There Two Female Protagonists in Tomato? Beg!
When two surnames are united in marriage, a contract is made together, a good relationship will last forever, and the couple will have the same name.
Hey Hey Hey Yandere, Give All Your Yandere
I want to read a book like "The Sick Wife at Home Is Hard to Treat with Wolfberry".
The Transformation Story Should Be at Least 9.0, Please.
Looking for Good-Looking Transformation Essays
Begging for Two Girls + Yandere + Imprisonment + Successful Escape + Completion ฅᐞ˶⦁༝⦁˶
Want to watch something like "After being imprisoned by the Empress, the little fox always wants to run away!" Content. Begging for two girls + yandere + imprisonment + successful escape + completion ฅᐞ˶⦁༝⦁˶ᐞฅ
I didn't even know there was a novel with two female protagonists!
Have You Ever Transformed into a Lolita and Revealed Your Identity at the Beginning?
There is a shortage of books! ! ! !
I've Read All of Tomato's Transformation Stories, but I Don't Believe There Are Others I Haven't Read.
If you have the ability, do something (transform, loli, don't be systematic)
The Protagonist Is a Female [She Was a Male Before Time Travel] but She Thinks She Is a Male, Which Is Weird
I want to read a book like "Peking Opera Cat: Carrying the Holy Sword to Pet the Cat".
Double Heroine + Yandere + Escape Successfully and Finally Get Caught
Two Heroines Hehe
Please Beg for a Charming Heroine
I want to watch content similar to "A woman dressed as a man and I was surrounded by the heroine". It's a cool novel with multiple heroines or two heroines. After reading the book where a man dressed as a woman and was surrounded by the heroine, I couldn't read anything else. I was completely exhausted and wanted to cry.
Do You Have Any Good Transformation Stories? ? ?
Please Ask Tomato🍅 for a Top-1 Novel with Two Female Protagonists. "Once Upon a Time in the Underworld" Has Potential
I want to read a book similar to "Once Upon a Time in Huangquan". A great book with the potential of two heroines
Qiuxi Huanxing Zhuanwen
I want to read a book like "I Just Want to Know the Reason for Becoming a Vampire". There is magic in Western fantasy sexual transformation in another world, and other types of sexual transformation such as cities are not considered.
Two Heroines (´-Ω-`)
I want to read a book like "A Girl with White Hair Was Trained to Be an Obedient Cat by the School Beauty".
A Story About Two Heroines, Full of Sugar and No Cruelty
Are There Any Books About the Relationship Between Two Girls?
Are There Any Good Western Fantasy and Orange Films?
I want to read a book like "The Loli Pastor Who Wants to Lie Down Is Fishing Today". As a new author, I need to learn in order to provide readers with better content, so I brought up the Western Fantasy and Tangerine Posts that you think are good. Below is my book Xian Chou.
Looking for Two Female Protagonists. the Female Protagonist Is a Royal Sister, Not a Lolita, and Has Extraordinary Elements.
A cool story about two female protagonists, don't want a loli, don't want a loli, don't want a loli, say the important things three times, cultivation of immortals, martial arts, and supernatural powers are all fine, it's best not to force marriage, look down on the heroine, think that women can only depend on men.
I'm Looking for Some Good Yandere Articles, but I Don't Want Those That Are Broken.
At least double cleansing
I Want a Female Protagonist, Tie Tie, but Not a Male One. and Then Have High Martial Arts/superpowers and the Like.
I want to read a book similar to "After Feng Aotian was reborn, he set his sights on the useless and cute me".
Are There Any Good-Looking Articles About Changing Marriage? Just Those Few Books That I Turned over and over Again
I want to watch content similar to "Only when you transform into a CEO's wife can you avoid being boiled in warm water."



























































































My little Feng Feng, awesome Klass, okay, does the author know how delicious his writing is? After reading it, my depressed Q child no longer has OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I want to see 200 copies of this awesome Klass every day. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author, and Doubao tells the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome, and the OS finally lets me see something good. Loading is also very fast. It must be highly praised and supported. It's not old-fashioned at all, it's awesome and it ends the game directly. ! It's awesome, ok, ok, I'll just take it as the author's one, one, one, two, four, four, forty-six, seven, seven, forty-nine, okay, it's really good, so go check it out.
The characters of the protagonist and heroine are well developed, the atmosphere is strong, and the setting is novel. And, alas, what a pair of miserable mandarin ducks Nice looking, love watching
Books with a main plot are popular unless they are poorly written. The two female protagonists in this book are both flesh and blood, and the emotional aspect is also natural. Many books with the same theme are very monotonous (industrial saccharine). This book has daily stickers and battle designs. Chen tide's calm handling in the early stage is what attracted me. Besides, Chen tide is very charming😊 I watched a section later and found that the plot was too slow and dragged out a bit, and I felt that my enthusiasm was being depleted little by little, but it still had its flaws.
It looks good and I highly recommend it. The rhythm is tight and there are no surprises yet. It should be a double clean, and the battle posts are correct [shy] The reason for fighting is for the one you love and to survive, and the cg setting is also very romantic😇 The protagonist is not a virgin, her IQ is on the line, so I will post what I need to post [shy]. If you come in for the protagonist Succubus, you might be disappointed (Do you understand the Innocent Succubus [laughing]). There are relatively few settings related to Succubi in the early stage (the Succubus aura counts as one, and the number of appearances is small. The protagonist's Succubus setting is the kind of dedicated succubus race. I personally like this setting). Naturally, there are no cars (what are you disappointed about👿), so it is Shuangjie. The author has a good grasp of combat and sticking, with a good degree of relaxation. You die once or twice at the beginning to show the strength of the boss (the boss is too strong, I lied to you at the beginning of hell [face covering], the next boss will be even harder 😇), but the protagonist's IQ is online, and the battle is very enjoyable to watch. Tie Tie is naturally the biggest attraction. Tide Chuan Shu liked the appearance of the heroine before she came to the book. After getting in and getting along with the heroine, she gradually fell in love with her. (Actually, you can write more about tide's inner activities, such as denying her feelings, because she doesn't dare to face them [eat melon]) Then Xi brushes up her favorability in front of Yue (do you understand how to brush up favorability with your life😇), and Yue is naturally being attacked very hard [shy], and whenever she gets a chance, she will post to tide , are we finally going to drive after confessing our love? No, our innocent little succubus is not ready yet👿 (That's right, you must be mentally prepared for the first time, I think this is well written, young lovers should take care of each other's emotions) I stand on the moon! (Actually, I like to attack each other) Wash this little succubus [shy][shy] I have already written 60 chapters, so I wrote a review. I like this book very much. I hope the author will continue writing it [Blow kiss] I will witness the ending of tide and Yue together (it must be he, right) By the way, my comments are basically everywhere in this book. Come and interact with me passionately (bushi [smile])
Compared with other novels, the characters of the two protagonists have their own personalities, and the dialogue is natural and real, just like dialogue in reality. They are all unique. Our protagonist Xi is a very charming and calm character in the story, while the heroine is a silly and cute type. No matter what, you can't miss this masterpiece! Each character has his or her own characteristics. This article includes daily battles, stickers, and sweet and sharp plots. The logic is also very normal. Although it is not an invincible article, the protagonist is not weak, and there is also some croaking. Although the writing style is a little green and the details are not very detailed, it can still clearly express the interesting story and plot, which can be seen at a glance! ! And unlike most of the protagonists on the market who have the ability to recall, the heroine in this article has the ability to recall. Our protagonist pretends to recall and has his memory wiped out like an NPC. He does not remember all the past appearances. Together with the heroine, he faces death again and again as the story progresses. Looking back, during this period, we kept giving knives to our silly heroine, which gradually caused the golden retriever heroine to gradually collapse from regret and powerlessness to a sickly and girl-oriented appearance. And our low EQ protagonist finally realized that something was wrong, looked at the golden retriever who was pressing her down, and swallowed! Charming! [Adoration][Adoration] Let me reiterate, the daily interactions between tide and Yue are so heartwarming! ! ! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] study together New Year's Eve together pen box together indians together b stand together
It's a very good-looking, light-paced survival story, and the goals are relatively clear, and the short-term goal changes are not particularly frequent. After achieving one, the next one is formulated, and then there is a sense of the main line at all times. The development of the protagonist and the friends around him, and the interpersonal relationships are also handled well and beautiful. The battle scenes are also very exciting and even gave me a shounen manga feel. What are the possible surprises you may have after reading this article? In addition to the main couple, there are other people who will fall in love with the heroine, because the title also said that one of the heroines is a succubus, but by Chapter 55, apart from the protagonist, I only saw one. The protagonist described from the main point of view and the other protagonist were not in a pure love relationship at the beginning. At the beginning, they had the mentality of praying that they could survive, so they walked with him, but basically all his abilities were linked to this protagonist. I'm not surprised by this emotional development. The other thing is a song that I think is more suitable for reading this article.わないでも… (Even if it is a love that cannot be realized…) duet with Yumi Tikusa The later stages were a bit weak. After killing a boss, another boss suddenly came over, and after killing a boss, another boss suddenly came over. This method has made me a little tired of watching it. I will read it all again when the later updates are completed.
Come on, author, the combat power system is very interesting, and the interaction between the heroines is also very sweet [laughs] But what will be the ending of Lin Yue's two personalities? Chen tide will not be turned into a sandwich cookie, right [laughing]
It's so beautiful. I really like this subject matter. It's very similar to a world view I wanted to write before, but I didn't have the ability to write plots, so I didn't finish it. And this book is very good. The character creation and plot are very good. It can be regarded as the biggest dark horse I have encountered this year.
The plot line... Um... Complete, the emotional line... Um... Undetectable, has been identified... This is a super detailed and emotional female channel soul-traveling novel! Handing out sweets and then handing out knives, I'm addicted to it!
Haokan, updated to chapter 81, non-toxic, currently a double clean (most likely in the future), 1V1 pure love, the protagonist is a tsundere, the characters in the book are very vivid, the plot is well written, the characters are all very clever, the author will update it soon
There are at least more than a hundred books of Lily and Baihe. This one is undoubtedly a top-quality book. It is not toxic at the moment, has a tight rhythm, and the twists are always unexpected. The plot is completely excellent so far. The author has a lot of imagination and is completely worth reading! [Like][Like][Like]
The interaction is interesting, the main line is super coherent, there are small foreshadowings and big twists. The third volume is probably only half-way there, and currently I think the best is the second volume. Rating is low. In addition, the character Gu Yu is my favorite. The author uses narrative tricks very well The introduction only takes up less than half of the volume. This book is by no means an ordinary villain whitewashing article. Edit and supplement 1: Novels with outlines are really fun to read! 2:2026.7.2 The score has gone up a lot, from 8.2 To 9.0. This is the right score.
It's beautiful and beautiful. The emotional line of the two heroines gradually progresses and their relationship is added to each reincarnation. The author successfully allows the readers to watch the protagonist and the heroine step by step from the use of the first to the true love in the later. In this process, there is no industrial saccharine all the time, but the love is placed in daily life, and the safety of both parties is always valued. All in all, it is still a novel worth reading. It may only be average elsewhere, but at least it is considered a rare masterpiece on Tomato (no big problem now)
I read a little too fast, my thoughts were a little confused, and I passed by without clearing up some parts. But it is indeed very interesting, with many twists and turns, and the protagonist deserves to die. When reading the article, I can feel the pleasure of upgrading and the satisfaction of the protagonist becoming invincible. The emotional line between the protagonist and Lin Yue is also very delicious, but when the protagonist died, I was very confused. There was some foreshadowing, but maybe because I didn't think about it while reading the article, I felt that the protagonist died all at once. It has great stamina. I can't think of anything to say [full] All in all, it is a good article
The descriptions of the characters and battles are good, but there is always a feeling that the world view is too small to expand, which makes me have no expectations for the future of the characters. It may be a slow start, but in short, the future is promising.
This is one of Tomato's rare time loop books, and it comes from "I Killed My Childhood Sweetheart". Although it is not that suspenseful, the excitement and passion of the battles, as well as the daily emotional drama, are very rich, and it is highly recommended.
As the author himself said, the text in this book is indeed a bit immature. But the overall worldview and logical closed loop are rigorous and excellent. The characters of the two heroines are very well developed, and the other supporting characters are also noteworthy. In terms of plot, right up to the first volume, the pace is very tight, tense, and very emotional. The story in the middle and later stages is a bit dull. But as mentioned above, the logic is very rigorous and there is no obvious sense of separation. The only thing that makes me feel bad is that I can kill the Weeper directly after the last backtrack, which feels like a forced HE. But I think this is what they deserve. All in all, it's pretty good.
Very good The chase is also over. As for the plot, it feels like the early and late stages are not written by one person, but this also shows that the work has made great progress. I didn't intend to create a very strong character in the early stage, but this caused me to feel nothing at all except for the mummy later on. The plot in the middle is a bit boring, and the climax is not reached until the end. The best thing is the later stage, well... You may be the foil for the mid stage. What's more, this book also has an AI comic series. 🙃
So far, it is a very good novel, but a reminder, there will be monster spawns (just nerves) between chapters 57 and 58, so be careful. I blocked it, but forgot to fold it, so I reported it, but I don't know if it will be deleted or folded directly. Anyway, please be careful and don't be affected by it [face covering] () Secondly, it seems that Zhu Li is a bit miserable at the moment. This is why I watch less 1v1. It's not that I hate pure love. I am also a pure love warrior. The main reason is that two people like the same person at the same time, but we already knew that this person was officially matched, which caused a bit of stomachache. I don't know if Zhu Li will have scenes later [crying] () (By the way, I'm not saying that the interaction between the heroines is not good, or that the drama is not good. It's just that my stomach hurts when I watch it. The description of the relationship is still very good [blowing kiss])
Looking at it, the narrative is smooth, the description is natural, the emotions are full of emotions, and the overall impression is good. The worldview feels quite big, and all kinds of suspected foreshadowing are buried quite deeply. In terms of combat, it is indeed a bit similar to the existing hot-blooded series. There is nothing familiar, and it is a bit confusing to watch, but fortunately, it is relatively easy to understand. In terms of love lines, I personally don't have any special theoretical research. I saw that other big guys in the comment area have analyzed it, and I basically agree with it, so I won't go into details. The rhythm of the plot really needs to be studied. After thinking about it again and again, I suddenly found that the whole story seems to have been closely tied to the main line. It seems that the protagonist has relaxed, but the perception is very thin. I don't know what impact it will have later. Conclusion, further research is needed, so I will make this short review first and follow up later [Thinking]
This book is really good, especially when it describes Lu Bu's hundreds of rounds of battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six If you shoot twice, you will die. In addition, I prefer what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang." It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. , All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character descriptions are in place! When Zihan fought with Ye Fan to win the spot for the Western Classic, Li Kui On the way to persuade him to make peace, he was tempted by foreign persimmons and strayed into the depths of lotus flowers. He started a relationship with Xiao Longnutu in Huanshi Water Pavilion, but was seen by Sato Kazuma, so Sato Kazuma got angry and went to another world to meet Doraemon... It's very interesting, but I don't know why it's not popular. Maybe it's because some parts have turned readers away, but it's definitely one of the best novels I've seen.
Generally speaking, it was okay. I did have the desire to read it at the beginning. The narrative in the middle is compact and not confusing. It follows the main line and there is a BOSS to fight. As for the description of daily posts, it is not enough. It is human nature. The first half of the third chapter should be regarded as the climax. Almost all the foreshadowing is revealed here. The amount of information here should be the largest in the entire book. , But after the protagonist was restarted, it felt a bit dull and lacked the tension of fighting the big boss. I thought there would still be some surprises, such as attacking the heroine to cause her memory to have problems or something, but unfortunately it didn't, which made me a little disappointed. It was too smooth. From the front, this situation is almost bound to go wrong. There is nothing to say after the BOSS is patched normally. Thinking about the Eastern Continent and the Western Continent, I feel that the author has made this world a bit big. I feel like this is not a normal world, where the protagonists explore one by one to improve the worldview [Thinking]
Yiyi is the real wolf king. She never begs for mercy from anyone. Even if the wind and rain are overwhelming, her spine remains straight. He has always been too lazy to talk about people and things that don't matter. The indifference in his eyes is like a frozen wasteland, and no strangers should come near him. He would just move forward on the determined path, never paying attention to the comments or dissuasion of others. That arbitrary determination carried an undeniable majesty. The softness she occasionally shows is only for those closest to her. The rest of the time, she is always a sharp-edged king, disdainful to cater to, let alone compromise.
Full marks, the writing is excellent, the plot is reasonable, and there is still time to go back and lay some foreshadowings, which will be revealed later. Although it is a hundred, there is basically no female degradation (for me, it can be a pure hundred), the score will definitely rise to 9 points or more
Nice looking, The story is about fighting and growing up. The author's writing style is not very old, but it is also interesting. The plot is ups and downs and the daily life is about 40 or 60. I personally like the characters, especially the supporting characters such as Gu Yu and Zhu Li. Although the protagonist's image is also fuller, I am not very fond of it personally. I prefer Gu Yu's style. The overall pace is relatively fast, so that some of the foreshadowing in the early stage and the characters in the later stage obviously cannot be filled in or cannot match the early foreshadowing (but they are well received), such as Wuxin, Aihua, Dragon Girl, etc. The author writes this... A bit fast, but in fact it is also this style that makes it different from the overly lengthy upgrading and monster-killing routines. It just depends on the reader's preference. I would give it an 8 to 8.5 Point rating. Overall, it is very interesting. Some of the rough spots are harmless. I still feel satisfied after reading it.
Really pretty! The first part is full of emotions, the middle part is delicately described, and the second part is real and interesting. There are twists and turns throughout the whole process, and the author has an outline. The foreshadowing is fully recycled. The setting is also very interesting. The supporting characters are three-dimensional and complete. I really like it. I read it in three days. I still feel unfinished, I still think of you often
It's okay. I can read it if I have the patience. However, the emotional line between the heroines feels a bit sloppy. Maybe it's because I've read too many other books. The emotional lines in this book didn't make me feel like I'm immersed in it.
This book is definitely worth 9.5 Points or more. I almost missed this good book when I saw it was rated at 7:00. Fortunately, I checked the book review section and all the reviews were positive (more than 200 reviews were basically five stars, but the rating was shown as 7:00, which is a bit harsh on a new book)
It's good to read, with a plot and foreshadowing. Each volume is interesting, and the world view is also very good. However, I feel that it is not very detailed. It only mainly talks about the Spark Federation and the Black Moon Empire. The plot in the middle period is a bit delayed, and there are no other big highlights.
How to put it this way, the plot is coherent and interlocking, and there are a lot of foreshadowings. It always surprises people at critical moments. It is not as vigorous as most novels, but a bit slow and flowing. The access points of each plot are just right. Anyway, for me personally, I quite like this kind of plot that is diverse, coherent and peaceful. In short, I look forward to the second play in the near future to give me a new experience! A good book should be read over and over again, read it 4 times and then sort it