GBC: Starting from a Young Age? Was There Any Mistake?

As a person who deeply loves music, my favorite thing after working every day is to read music novels. It can be said that as a "current person", I only love lonely rock, but I am troubled by not being able to find good books. Although the writing of this book is a bit green, it is also in the middle and upper reaches, and the author is not honest at all. Cover up, the plot is not monotonous, it is meticulous, and you can clearly see the improvement of the writing style. In my opinion, the characters also have their own souls, and the protagonist is also humble and polite. It is not perfect, but this is perfection. It is the best if there is no poison. It often makes people feel like it. I can only say, long live Yinban!

It feels very youthful. I feel the body is warm when I look at it.

This is so beautiful! Especially from the first volume to the second volume, the hospitalization scene at the end of the second volume is so scary that people are about to be stabbed to death, but! The plot in front of this is particularly interesting, and my whole mouth is set on fire! ! ! The author is so good at writing, and what Yu said was really shocking, and it made my heart move! I really recommend it. This is the first time I have written a long book review so seriously. I am planning to save more. When I read the third volume, I couldn't bear to read it. Really! I was very moved by the words in it, especially the words from You help Liang, Yili, Hongxia, 486, Zhi, Juli, Xinge, and parents. They are really the words of the master of the game! I hope the author will update! I must write a lifetime of band articles! ! ! Erne should! ! ! ! Otherwise... Wadaxi [please update][crying]

I finished reading it again for the second time. I gave up on the first volume. It was too hasty to say goodbye to 486, Yuu's father's affairs were too eye-catching, and he was a child for a long time. There were some boring interactions out of nowhere. These made my head hurt when I read it, but there was something else in it. When Ryo asked Yuu to think about himself, I decided to finish the book. Is this book good? I'm actually not sure. There are some things I can't accept that others can accept, and some things I can accept that others can't accept. For example, when Yuu got hit, I actually had no feelings about it. Go and see for yourself. As for why I gave him a five-star review, are there many shortcomings to be mentioned? This praise is not only for the author, but also for the five-star youth who secretly wrote novels during night study in high school and pursued them by himself in the middle of the night.

I just saw the latest one. For those who like to be carefree and don't like gravity fields, this book is quite good. From the beginning to the latest, it can be seen that the author's writing style has improved, from being young at the beginning to gradually becoming more detailed. The portrayal of the band girls is also very consistent with the original work, but there is also some of the author's own personal settings in it (after all, the story starts from childhood, so there is the influence of the protagonist) Hibiki, some character changes are inevitable, but the changes are quite good and do not affect the character's unique charm). The protagonist also has his own way of making up for the regrets in the story, and it is in line with the development of the story and is not abrupt. I also like this very much. Also, it's not the kind of systematic writing, invincible writing, copywriting, etc. Some of them are just that the protagonist has some musical talent, which does not affect the reading of the article. This is really good. After all, there are too many of this kind now, and I have become numb. The rating problem may be that few people have watched it and the ratings are low. After all, there are only Loneliness and GBC. Many people may prefer to watch Mygo. But after all, I wrote this article, so I just want to boldly say that Loneliness and GBC really go well together. I also like these two series the best. I don't want Gravity Field or anything like that. Finally, come on! Author, many people have been reading and supporting the articles you wrote. This is also the first five-star review I have written. I hope this can encourage you [like][like][like]

Great, this evaluation is absolutely true, at least for me, the author's words deeply touched my heart. In the book, the knots, emotions and the beauty of the final resolution of the girls and Yuuno deeply touched me, and I was able to find something worthy of thinking and learning in their growth. For example: Some of the conflicts between Hongxia and her family are consistent with the conflicts between me and my family in real life; the bumps I encountered on the road to becoming a "Yangjiao" also corresponded to the problems I encountered when making friends in real life. I saw Yili's entanglement, and I also saw my mistakes... It can be said that I think the author truly wrote the emotions of the characters when writing these plots. The standard problems are placed on the individual characters, truly showing the character's heart, and the solution process will affect the readers' hearts. Ahem, this book really poked fun at me anyway. It may have many flaws, but in my case the flaws are outweighed. Therefore, five-star recommendation! (This is my first time to write a good review. Although I am not very good at writing, I feel embarrassed after reading it once, but I don't want to delete it.)

It's good to read. I forgot to rate it when I read it. It's a very comfortable band story to read. It's much better than other stories about the main character of Gravity God. This is what I want to see in a band story without so many gravity and twists and turns about God's withdrawal from the team. Among my favorite bands, Wen Neng In the top three, my favorite book besides the one by Bai Qiu and cwm next door, Falcon God. Unfortunately, the author of Bai Qiu's book wrote the gods Mygo and MJK himself, which caused the ending and Qingyin to become invisible. I hope the author is as unfinished as Bai Qiu's one [Blow kiss]

Although I haven't finished reading it, I can tell that this book should be good. It's just that there is too much emotional foreshadowing for the female character in the early stage. It's too long and long. Anyway, I felt very tired after reading it. There is also daily life. Although it is a daily novel, it cannot be so daily and ordinary. It's light, there's really no ups and downs at all. I was so tired after reading the elementary school volume. Some personal emotional lines can be reduced appropriately. It's written in too much detail. It can be seen that the author wants to write every emotional scene well, but it doesn't have to be so lengthy. It's very tiring to watch [facepalm]

Would you say these people are five or six years old? Isn't that a bit too precocious? It's really a drama to see these five or six year old kids messing with this mother-in-law. It's time to raise the age limit.

It's okay. Children's stories are just that the childhood stage is very long. I don't know when I will become an adult. But when I become an adult, it's probably the time when my feelings can be harvested, because all the feelings are cultivated in childhood [laughing and crying]. However, the advantage of children's stories is that they can accompany the characters to grow, make them better, and can also make up for a lot of regrets, so overall it's okay and I can read it.

It's so interesting. I love watching childhood sweethearts grow up and grow up. I suggest you read the elementary school chapter, the junior high school chapter, and the middle school chapter about the daily campus life of all ages. Add a few lost children and the family conflicts between gods and men, and the Kumamoto kid sister's diamonds and stardust fall from the sky. You can write more than 400 chapters.

I don't care if it's slow or not, but in this era where you can see all kinds of traces of AI when you just click on a book, it's worthy of five-star praise to have an old artist like Boss with delicate writing style. [Love] [Love]

It looks good, starting from lower case, most of the original content, in short, it is very good to watch [Love]

It's surprisingly good. Ryo and Ichiri fit the characters very well, and it feels very immersive when reading. But it's a pity that I'm still in elementary school, and I want to see what happens when I grow up. And depending on the situation, "April" will be added, en, just write it as "no disease". Also, I feel like there are a lot of people joining. Can you write me down?

It's really good. Unlike other novels that just add characters of their own based on the original work, this book is about the interaction and redemption of the characters when they were young. This means that there will be a lot of original plots, the plots written by the author are quite good, and the characters' personalities and changes are very harmonious, just like the changes they would get if they really met the protagonist when they were young. Rating: Good book, recommended to read.

So pretty! Sir author, I respect your mouth and teeth! ! ! ! It's the first time I've seen a fanfic with such high-quality original plots that doesn't overturn anything. Actually, there's one thing I'm embarrassed about... The part where the male protagonist gets into a car accident, I think is actually... Unexpectedly acceptable (PS: What made you become so bloodthirsty? Genshin Impact?) The more I watch, the more I look forward to the sweet and sweet harem CCB session of pure love~ I love you so much, it's my first time on the radio! ! ! I love you~Author sama

It looks pretty good, but I feel like it would be better to slow it down since it has already started so slowly. There is no need to make it explicit at this time in junior high school. I think it would be better to focus on dark descriptions or small actions of the heroines plus inner dramas. It starts to sprout in the early high school. After everyone recognizes their own feelings, they really think about what to do if everyone likes him. Then the real Shura field will be written in the middle of high school. With the previous foreshadowing, it can be more tragic.

You must keep writing, oh Negai, Watasi

Speechless, 11 brushes! Who else! ! I did it 11 times and I am MVP! [Sinister smile]

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Hao Chi, I want to see the protagonist go to Egypt to fight DlO with Jotaro.

After three weeks Good news: it looks great! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice ! The plot of Middle School touched me very much, and I was fed up with it. Bad news: Keep up with the big group. The author will update soon! ! !

It's great. I think it's one of the best music comics written on Tomato.

Not bad. The male protagonist's personality is very similar to Xiaoxin but more mature than Xiaoxin. He doesn't have that annoying "childlike" or naughty look. It's like Xiaoxin's appearance in the theater version, which is very comfortable to watch [OK]

Good-looking, worth watching, the threads are many and not scattered

It's very good. The male protagonist who knows the plot is also well portrayed, but I feel that it could be stronger. How could the band not write a song? "This is simply my way to seduce women!" It's almost awesome~ I hope the author can also write about hens and dogs in the future. My childhood sweethearts started when they were young. With the author's writing style, it will be absolutely popular, amazing! I just like this kind of male protagonist who knows the plot but is not obscene! ! ! Recommend!

Haokan is currently one of the best Lonely Rock fanfics, and it's not boring and interesting. I declare that this is the best fanfic of Lonely Rock @ Linsheng I'd like to ask about this book. I've written more than 250 chapters so far, and the main characters are still young, that is, nine years old. I'd like to ask how many hundreds of chapters I plan to finish. If possible, I hope it won't be finished, because this is the best book I've read in Lonely Rock fanfiction. There's no need to push the plot too fast. Just let the plot be normal. The writing now is super nice. @ Linsheng Can the author reveal more about it?

One of the best daily novels, with delicate emotions, vivid characters, and humorous writing style. Many jokes are harmoniously integrated into it, making it jumpy but not off-line. The protagonist has a very good character, has the appearance of Yuuji and Key, and is specially allowed to open a harem (a family-style harem where responsible and capable people give their best to everyone is a super happy ending). Very excellent The reason for not changing the rating is still the same as above. There are only three things I want to mention, and they are not poisonous points, but... Strange smells. The first thing is quite small, not a big problem, I just wanted to bring it up. There are family problems in East Asia, but the severity is different for everyone. At least in my family, there are problems, but they are not that serious. I can feel the love of my parents, although they are strict. And if you want all readers to immerse themselves in it, it would be awkward to just rely on one or two small memories (the kind that can be mentioned in one sentence). The tragic past of Yuuji (Gray Trilogy) took a whole movie to explain in detail, and the plot is really intense. While the male protagonist has a perfect character, it's okay to have this shortcoming. On the contrary, the conflict between the male protagonist's father and his grandfather was well portrayed. Second, the motivation for the car accident scene was like Yuuji's (Gray Trilogy): after helping the heroine, he was redeemed by the heroine, and finally his feelings came naturally. But because the male protagonist was so perfectly portrayed in the past, this episode of indecision and worry about gains and losses made people feel bad, and it was also linked to things like fate. Good motivation, but poor performance. The third one is the recent conflict with Liang. The most important thing in the story is the conflict, and now each heroine's personal line is gradually coming to terms with it. Pochi's problem has been foreshadowed several times before, and the male protagonist can solve it fairly well. The character of the male protagonist in Ryo's latest chapter is a bit strange. The main reason is that I was so bright when I was 7 or 8 years old, so it's strange to suddenly become mentally ill now. Is it because you are worried about gains and losses after you own it? Overall, the author is very thoughtful, and the daily interactions with everyone in front of him are well written. Previously, the male protagonist attacked unilaterally to save others, and his subjective initiative was full. But when it comes to the need to "create conflicts" to advance the relationship and the male protagonist to be passive, the huge contrast with the previous one and the sudden "literary youth" of the writing style make people feel strange. It should be noted that even when Yuuji was redeemed, he was full of subjective initiative and was doing what he should do. Needless to say, key is also full of initiative. So there can be conflicts, but the male protagonist's character should continue to treat this conflict as before. Instead of being passive and waiting passively.

Currently, for me, this is one of the top three lonely rock fanfics on all platforms. It just has too few words.

Xianpin, I just like reading band articles like this. The delicate daily life starting from kindergarten is great. It's just that the author plays tricks to the point where he lets himself go and breaks the fourth wall a little too frequently. It's hard to say whether this is an advantage or a disadvantage. After all, some people will enjoy it, and some people will find it a bit theatrical. Finally, I am looking forward to the plot after entering high school, and I suspect there will be a Star of Eden Zero Rated Power episode.