Lords of the North: from Ruined Stonefort to Lord of the North

Charlotte's length is fine, don't listen to them, just watch [laughing] Another princess comes out, the heroine is pregnant and eliminated. After chasing her for so long, the plot is really getting more and more magical [what]

It's okay, the pace is not too draggy, it's not in the category of cool writing, it's more logical and you can read it. I feel like the author should have referred to "Late Ming" written by Ke Da, and some of the moves in it are very similar to those in this book.

On the whole, whether it is about war or politics, it is pretty good. The twists and turns of the plot and the atmosphere control are very appropriate. The world view has not yet been developed, and there is already a lot of foreshadowing. However, there are also disadvantages. The system has not appeared since the official start of the defense war; and the emotional line is a bit abrupt, and I almost couldn't watch it anymore, but the new chapters are still acceptable; some details are still toxic, after all, it is a web novel that can be read quickly without thinking. If you can accept it or insist on reading it for a while, this book is still good. I hope the author will continue to work hard [note]

It is a very pure Lord's text. I have read more than 100 chapters so far. The battle is still a collision of blood and flesh, and there is no super magic or gun. This score is too low compared to the quality of the text. I think it is at least 9 points. It looks okay at first, but the more you write later, the more it looks like the end of the Chinese Dynasty.

This is a very classic Western fantasy farming article. The plot and character descriptions are very detailed. However, this system does not seem to play a big role, especially in the recently updated chapters.

It is still a relatively good lord novel, the writing style is also good, and the characterization of the characters is also acceptable. The writing style is already above average in Tomato, and it is also a relatively good single-female protagonist. The portrayal of the heroine is also relatively distinctive and unique.

Please update. I finished reading it in a few days. The rating of this book should not be so low. The system provided some help in the early stage, but it gradually disappeared later. The protagonist relied more on his own wisdom and will to resist the enemy's attack. I have read the latest chapter so far. The battles in this book are very well written, and many vivid supporting characters have been created. Maybe the emotional scenes in the early stages were not so well written, but the battles really give a sense of immersion.

The writing and plot design are pretty good, but the writing is about why the system is gone [something]

If you write, you can highlight the system. I feel that the system is not only useful at the beginning, but it will become invisible later on. It doesn't have to be too big, but it is somewhat helpful to the protagonist, such as making a special potion so that the protagonist can practice fighting spirit! Then the writing is particularly meticulous and gives a different feeling in today's society where fast food is rampant. Come on! ! ! ! ! !

The rest is okay, that is, the troops are truly Western. When the two sides fight, more than a hundred people die and the bones are broken. After reading more than 140 chapters, the overall number of troops on both sides is more than a thousand. If a few dozen people die, a quarter of the number will be reduced. . .

I have read about 400 chapters so far, and the plot rhythm is pretty good, but there may be flaws in some places. For example, one chapter is about the morning, the next chapter is about the morning, and the next chapter is about the evening. There are also some typos. Whether it's a flaw or not, I think it's okay overall.

This is the first time a bookworm of more than 20 years has published a review of a novel on Tomato. To be honest, this novel is one of the best novels of this kind that I have ever read on Tomato (comparable to the fine novels on Qidian). It is rare to see on Tomato and not to be missed.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

In fact, it's quite good. The development content is quite informative. Later, the author seems to have forgotten the system and turned it into an unsystematic text, but it's quite good.

It looks good, it looks really good, hahaha, it's really, really good-looking! It looks good, it looks really good, hahaha, it's really, really good-looking! It looks good, it looks really good, hahaha, it's really, really good-looking! It looks good, it looks really good, hahaha, it's really, really good-looking!

A good book, the descriptions are very delicate, the details of the battlefield are also good, and the most important thing is that the updates are very diligent [like] The emotional line is really a poisonous point [face covering]. This is the biggest problem of the whole book. I want to read him as if he has no heroine. After the poison is over, the Western lords talk like scholar-bureaucrats of the Ming Dynasty, and the plot also has a late Ming style flavor - does the author still remember that he is writing a Western-type lord novel? The same goes for the system. Hundreds of chapters are missing. After the early stage, you just throw it away after using it, right? [Laughs] Then why should I not read the one without the system but read your half-baked system article?

It is quite authentic and classical farming literature, and does not involve cultivating immortals in the name of lord literature. The war scenes and strategies are well written. Considering the readability of an online novel, it is acceptable to reduce some of the twists and turns that may be encountered based on real logic. Goldfinger does not overly obscure the highlights of the characters themselves. Recommended reading.

The author's writing style is quite good, and the narrative rhythm is also good. That's just because you may have forgotten whether this thing is a Western fantasy. However, despite its shortcomings, as a war epic, it is still very good to watch.

It's good, but no one is using the system!

It looks good, it feels like a perfect fusion of western fantasy and modern military

The pacing is well controlled, and Goldfinger doesn't interfere too much with the plot.

Tomato is a high-quality work. Although it seems that there are not many people watching it and there are few comments, it does not prevent the author's control of the plot and the characterization of the group portraits from being very amazing! Very good! Keep up the good work, author! More people will see this excellent work!

Nice. Very nice

It's cool, but what about the protagonist's system?

The future is promising [smile] But I will keep chasing until the finale [I learned it]

It's okay, add some modern style and Chinese style

Excellent Except that the emotional line is a bit too stiff Others are pretty good-looking

Good, good-looking, very good-looking

Must see, good, good

A very detailed lord novel