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It is very well written, with a grand world view, seeing the big from the small, and from the perspective of a female channel, it writes the story of the real world of immortality in my mind. All the characters have online IQs, and the actions of the good and the villain have specific purposes. It is not a mindless novel, and the male protagonist is not a harem style, but a seeker with an IQ. It is really good-looking. I really hope that this article can be written into a full-length article. This is really a perfect article about immortality. I will keep pursuing it. Come on, author, don't give up! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's hard to comment… I'll simply tell you a story so that everyone can roughly understand the story. Protagonist: The surveillance video caught you committing the crime. Prisoner: This was generated by AI Smart audience: It turns out it was generated by AI. Protagonist: Your ID card was left at the crime scene Prisoner: You stole it and placed it Smart audience: It turns out to be slander Protagonist: Your fingerprints were found at the crime scene Prisoner: I've only been here before, for late night snacks. Smart audience member: It turns out he was just passing by. Protagonist: There are witnesses who saw you committing the crime Prisoner: You were the one who colluded. Audience: It turned out to be collusion Protagonist: The victim is rescued, and the evidence is yours. Prisoner: He has been bribed by you because he gave up the principle of profit. Audience: It turns out that I have been bribed. Protagonist: Actually, my true identity is the son of a president of a certain province Prisoner: What happened? Smart Audience: What the protagonist said is undoubtedly correct. In the face of all conclusive evidence, the prisoner's self-evidence is pale and feeble. Prisoner:? ? ? ? The final result was that the prisoner attempted murder and caused serious injuries to the victim. He was detained for one day in a five-star hotel for observation and then released after serving his sentence. By the way, the victim is a beautiful woman and very rich (by chance), so the protagonist benefits from it and also gains a fangirl. The enemy case has been overturned, and justice has been restored to the world... No, no, no, the important thing is money

Start: Protagonist: This look is to set me up with the heroine Destiny, to see me outwit my opponent and take advantage of the heroine Destiny's wool [smile] Process: Protagonist: No, why is the opponent treating people like this (why is he so strong)? It's not fair, unfair. Why are they not fighting in the same realm? They can't "fight wits". They haven't thought about back tricks and accidents [awkward laugh] Ending: Protagonist: Thank you, the author, for helping me. I will think more carefully next time and take precautions before they happen. I will make sure there are no problems while shedding wool [laughs] Next time: Need I say more? Repeat the above situation, it's basically not bad [face covering]

At first I thought it was a comedy about cultivating immortals, but I didn't expect it to be quite orthodox. The world view structure is very good. Every character has flesh and blood. The male protagonist is not a cheating "Long Aotian". Every breakthrough has a trace. The villain is not a "tool man" with facial expressions. The logic behind his obsession and ambition is clear. Looking forward to more chapters❤️

Ouch! Surprisingly not bad! Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was like those fast-food novels that use women's videos to dress up and compete with each other, but I didn't expect that the world view is quite large and a bit passionate. Well, this is very male video [laughing]

It's quite good. Without the plot of the female channel, it's a fantasy novel from a long time ago. I, an old bookworm, didn't expect that I can still see the taste of the previous novels now. I can't think about some of the plots, but it's still a very good novel.

In the early stage, the writing style was a little rough and the routines were old-fashioned, but it stopped at the cliff and the writing style improved a lot. It focused on the shaping of the world view and the description of big scenes, and the fighting scenes were even better. An excellent work, highly recommended, 93 points.

Don't be misled by the score, this is an extremely good book. It gets grander towards the back and is really worth seeing. At least a score of 9.8 Or above

It's good-looking. It borrows characters from classic female videos and sets the stage for the story. The male protagonist relies on his strength to strategize and play the game with the green tea girl who has a system. He has brains and logic. It's quite exciting. The bloody female channel plots are all filled up by the author using the system or the mastermind behind the scenes. It is quite interesting. The male protagonist holds the script and is the prey of the Holy Son of the Six Desires. It is very interesting.

You can take a look at it and it has the flavor of traditional novels from the past.

Very well written. I hope that the female channel elements are enough, too much is not good; give the protagonist a heaven-defying chance, and make the character higher, just like Xu Zhuang from the top-grade golden elixir, Chengxuan came into the world with unblemished talents, and has a wonderful fairy wind for thousands of years.

It looks great, why is it rated so low? It's quite enjoyable to read. It's more interesting to use female channel routines to promote the development of the plot. The world view is grand. I hope the author can update it frequently and never give up [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The early stages of this book are interesting. For some unknown reason, the sword-sharpening giant counted the candidates for the Son of Destiny, so he intervened, intending to take away his luck qualifications. The Yuanshen Demon Lord and even the extraterrestrial demons intervened to interfere with the luck and influence those around him. Suppressing the emotions and thoughts of those around Destiny's Son, although in many previous chapters it has the appearance of a female channel, it may be said that, underneath it, something that has a real self-consistent logical system and is not very stupid has slowly revealed its shadow, until it is revealed later. The explanation of the plot of the female channel gradually unfolds the grand world view of this work. According to the book, there are two paths, good and evil, and the right path has the upper hand. Therefore, many of the evil moves that stir up troubles are just risks and opportunities for the right path. The greater the risk, the greater the opportunity. It's just bigger, but regarding Liu Qingyuan's rebirth and Lu Yunzong's time travel, I hope that after the war between good and evil and the infestation of heaven comes to an end, maybe it can be slowly revealed, and maybe it can be used to switch to a deeper map outside this world? This novel sometimes has the flavor of Jin Yong's period or even earlier. The few pages are just like pearls dotting it, and it has just the right flavor. This novel is still good. I hope the author will get better and better as he writes.

Okay, it's pretty good-looking. It's different from the usual routines. The protagonist is quite sensible.

I think it's pretty good-looking, but the rest of it feels like the same routine. Why don't we finish this dungeon and let the world of sleeping immortals quickly develop into technology➕cultivating? After all, all kinds of warships have come out.

The main character setting fits my preferences perfectly! The flower of fake high mountains without CP (personally thought) ( ⸝⸝⸝•_•⸝⸝⸝ )♡

The world view is grand and the battle scenes are well depicted. Especially in the battles between the major factions in the Fallen Star Valley dungeon, everyone performs their own duties and fights in an orderly manner. This not only integrates some large-scale team fighting consciousness in the world of immortal cultivation, but also emphasizes that even low-level monks are an indispensable and important force in the battle, rather than acting as a background. The description of the scene of opening up territory in Falling Star Valley is also very interesting. It is not just digging the ground to build a house, but integrating the methods of cultivating immortals, which is more reasonable in the world of cultivating immortals. The protagonist's experience is also full of dangers. It's not just fun, it's very interesting. The characterization is also good. However, in some plots in the article, some female characters have the descriptor "a shock of body". Although there seems to be no problem, it feels weird. I hope that the female character's "shudder of body" can be changed to "a shock of body" or "a shock of mind". I personally feel that this way the look and feel will be better.

Such a "beautiful" female channel novel must be read by everyone

The paragraph "Broken Pills Transformed into Infants" is the essence of this book, just like Wang Mazi's transformation into a mortal in [The Immortal's Rebellion], and just like the worldly calamity of the old demon Han in [The Mortal's Story of Cultivation to Immortality]. It's impressive to think about, and it has the aura of time deposited in it. The beauty of words!

From a chess piece to a transcendent heroine-less genius, this is a cool novel. The world of the heavens is grand, the training sequence is clear, the techniques are clearly analyzed, the fighting scenes are unclear and powerful, the war scenes are majestic, the narration is delicate and comprehensive, and the poetry is majestic. Unfortunately, the title of the book is a hindrance, and the early female channel also lowered the score. But its faults do not hide its merits, and it is a five-star recommendation for fantasy and immortality.

Lou Guandao, look at the name, how grand it is. I have read several books about Lou Guandao. The Tao Lord of Lou Guandao, I feel awesome as soon as the name comes out. The protagonist is Yun Lingzong? What the hell is this place? Just by the name, it's a cannon fodder sect. The protagonist should be cultivating in a high-end place like Shangqing Dao. Also, the protagonist's family hopes to have one or two Taoist disciples who can be a helper. It would be awkward to go out without any subordinates. In such a big world, you must have a pomp when going out. Go and see Chunyang Avenue. People also copied the book "Dao Zhengfeng". That writer is awesome, so I went to the small world to experience it. I spent a day with four boys, holding lamps and incense burners. They really made the real disciples of the first sect in the central world look like they were there. They must have it when they go out. A strongman and a maid, driving a building boat to other Zhongqian worlds, not changing their names, and reporting wherever they go. Jing Younan, the true disciple of Taiyi Sect, everyone is shocked. The true disciple of the first sect in the central world is so powerful, and finally becomes the cave heaven realm, just like him Senior Brother Ouyang, who was constantly competing for the title, has also become a master. At first, he was still ahead of him, but in the end Jing Younan surpassed him, and when he saw him, he called him Junior Brother, which was very funny. Ouyang Feng was also very powerful, but Jing Younan was the protagonist. He had both mysterious and real weapons, and he was born in the Ouyang family. Family, to say the least, a man should show off when he goes out, because you represent the sect and the face of the sect's true heir. You can't lose the sect's face wherever you go. You have the power of the world, you are drunk and you are lying in the lap of a beautiful woman. Of course, you don't have a heroine, you just have a few casual marriages. They all aim to cultivate immortality. The author of Chunyang Dao wrote a book for the first time. He wrote a bit too many words and kept forgetting the magic weapon. But the book was really good. The author read it and he will definitely get a 9.9 For writing a book. He also learned from Dao Zhengfeng. I am a fan of Dao Zhengfeng. The update was too slow and I wrote a book myself. The exercises in it, the fusion of thousands of worlds, are particularly good. I have also seen the Dao Zheng Zheng, but I have forgotten it.

It's just a woman's worldview, but everything behind it is a game of good and evil.

The rating is low, but the writing is actually very good.

This book feels like it can barely be classified as a system text, but the subject matter is refreshing. Last time, the two books that made me feel good were the Strongest Anti-routine System and the Counterattack System Only in the Mahayana Period. Then, the author's writing style is quite good among foreign persimmons. The writing is crisp and precise, and the texture is full. Unlike other articles, I have no impression at all whether I have read it or not. It doesn't seem to be poisonous at the moment. I personally think it's grass jelly.

It is simply a culmination of Douyin's various female-cultivated sand sculpture animations. Why is the rating so low?

It's a great classic book on cultivating immortals. I was mistaken by the title. The female channel's time travel is just a minor note.

The back is ok, but the front is a bit old as the little ones hit... I discovered a problem. Every time a female protagonist appears in a plot, she has to take the initiative to join in. However, every time there is a near miss.

Good-looking, not old-fashioned, innovative [heartfelt]

I can't let this beautiful thing be enjoyed by myself, come and enjoy it together [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Yes, it can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the tomato chaos. It is a good book worth studying in depth. I will accept this book! (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ