Anime Crossover Watch Party: This Protagonist Is a Villain

Awesome, it looks great. I have a little suggestion. When writing the story inside the canopy, you should appropriately include the reaction of the outside audience, especially the corresponding characters. There is a book like One Piece or something. It seems to have over 1,000 chapters. The first few hundred chapters are all written like this, and they are very well written. You can learn from it. . . . The author also writes, but he always finishes the story in one chapter and only writes the audience's reaction in the next chapter. That is too late. He has to intersperse it with the story so that it is timely and gives a sense of involvement. . . . . . Although there is no problem, can we quickly make people outside the Tianmu believe that this is really a world with extraordinary abilities, and that Tianmu will appear in the future. . . People outside the canopy watched such a magical thing as a movie. . . . . . ?

If you support me, you will like Sigma. It's 68 and they're not dead yet, can't you make some new enemies?

It's not too ugly. There are few chapters now and not much setting. As for your current plot, let alone adding anime characters, it is quite good to write a world view by yourself. Although it is a bit anti-social, in terms of the current plot, anti-social is considered justified.

He looks like an ordinary high school student, because a person with the ability to see the future uses a light screen to expose the protagonist's future experiences, and then a group of people watch the protagonist's revenge, knowing that the world will be destroyed in three years, and then understand a place like Arisato World, and finally analyze it. What should I say? The rating of this book shouldn't be too high. It's not that this book is not good-looking. I can only say that some people will definitely say, oh, why do you obviously have power? Why are you still so frustrated? Why not take revenge? I want to watch random killings and the like, and now I know why the protagonists share the power of the light screen. If they don't share the power of the light screen, the protagonist will almost be beaten to death. And I always have a feeling that the protagonist's parents may appear later and it turns out that the protagonist's parents are certain bosses. In order to protect the protagonist, they abandoned the protagonist, or the protagonist's parents are experimenters.

I talked a lot about avenging my father and then said I wanted to take revenge on this dark system. In the end, except for Yukinoshita's family, the others I killed were either ordinary people or some bounty hunters. When Machima was fighting, the protagonist pulled himself to a height that symbolized human beings challenging divine power. As a result, he lost the fight and was rescued to recuperate. Suddenly he turned around to save a ghoul. It was really amazing.

Yes, the writing on new themes and new tracks is also good. Didn't let it go intentionally. Used a canopy. It's equal to two worlds. Satisfied. Readers' thoughts on killing and not killing. There's quite a bit of potential, come on!

The score can reach about 8 points In the early stage, I thought it was the same as a high-speed pursuit. I didn't expect that a ghoul would appear later, and I had to protect it. This twist is really poisonous. According to ordinary people, this kind of race will have to be exterminated to feel at ease, and then they can run away.

Encourage yourself, [please pay attention]

After reading the latest updated chapter, it is worth reading so far. I generally don't like to read canopy-type novels. The description of the bystander's perspective in the novel's characteristics is difficult to grasp. If it is well written, it shows the characteristics of this type. If it is not well written, it is procrastinating. But the author's writing power is really good, and it can be read in one breath. From the looks of it, there is basically not much that can be called dragging, and the portrayal of the protagonist can be said to be very strong. Without the comic elements, it can be said to be a good book, especially some of the discussions are also very well written. It does not seem too conspiratorial or false, but it is not a hot-blooded brush-off. It is worth a try.

It's really innovative. When I saw it, I thought it was a bloody story where the male protagonist kidnaps Yukino and causes Yukino to fall in love with the male protagonist. I didn't expect this development. I suggest you get more real-life reactions from the audience. After all, most people come to watch the movie.