It's Funny, You're Already a Heroine, of Course You Have to Be Tougher

Personally I think the score is about 8 points. Let me tell you a few points for your reference. (This new author can look forward to it) 1. First of all, the protagonist's setting is not as alienated as other heroine novels. In addition to the fact that the protagonist himself is not pretentious, the author also does not deliberately describe any scenes where the protagonist seduces passers-by unintentionally. (This is a super plus point for me. I have been looking for this for a long time and have never found it) [Exploration] 2.5 Jiao Satoru is also handsome [cool] 3. In terms of writing, there is no problem. It is a plus point if you polish it more. No matter what, there will not be any big problems. I think it is better than many newcomers. But there is one thing. Regarding the narrative change from the first-person perspective (does it feel like the influence of Ten Days Ending?), When writing about the characters' past experiences, who "I" should be should be made more conspicuous. The experiences of several characters are arranged in consecutive chapters. When I listened to the book and the characters were changed in the next chapter, I didn't even realize it [face covering] I can make some small changes. 4. Just talking about writing characters and experiences together, let me talk about what I think is the biggest problem. After reading Chapter 20, I always had the feeling that the author didn't write an outline and just wrote whatever came to mind. The story is clearly told, but the layout is a bit messy, and that's probably how it feels. [Eat melon] Chapter 5. Personality activation! [Cool] 6. Since I was listening to the book and it had no impact, I will talk about it later. If the article is divided into too few paragraphs, readers may not have the patience to read the work, and it may be more difficult for the author to find minor problems in the article. The new author is still too honest, please divide it into more paragraphs. [Exploration] 7. Could you please tell me, the author, do you plan to have more female protagonists in the work or will it be pure love? (Can you please reply, this is really important!!!) Chapters 7, 8, 25, and 26 are memories. I'm currently three chapters away from finishing it, and I always feel like something is missing while reading it, but I can't express it.

It's pretty good (this is the first time I know I have to say 5 words for this, so I'll just follow along later) This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of m4s would have died if they hit A1 and strafed. In addition, I prefer Zhuge Liang's battle with flowers. A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Guoshan, "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang" shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowing fighting scenes that make you feel like you are actually there, and the character description is very good! The writing of this book is excellent, the plot is touching, the ending is unexpected, the content is resonant and thought-provoking, the plot is interesting, the characters are vivid, the system is clear, there are many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, the author's depiction of people's hearts is meticulous, especially when describing Calabash Q to save Transformer Q, Sun Wukong's inner excitement and fear are vividly expressed. I am the only one who thinks Wu Song is right to kill Qiao Feng? If Jia Baoyu hadn't stopped Zhang Wuji from interfering, how could Yang Guo's hand be chopped off by Guan Yu? Zhuge Liang also won't go to Siguoya and fight a hot-button battle with Linghu Chong, etc. All in all, the plot of this book is interesting)

I'm not used to it. Overall, it's okay. The narrative ability is okay.

Full marks for the heroine, see if you won't be able to stand the comments later.

Not bad, just a little too fast

You can really wait and see again [smile]