[Difficult Male Lead x Tsundere Spirit Medium | Shared Sensations | Two Powerful Leads]
[Livestreaming + Metaphysics + Ghost Hunting + Variety Show + Two Powerful Leads + Sweet Romance + Fake and Real Heiresses + Past and Present Lives]
Jiang Sui, a leading cultivator of the mystic arts, was struck into a melodramatic novel written by her rival as she ascended to immortality. She became the real heiress, a foolish and venomous girl doomed to a tragic end.
The whole internet was waiting to see how she would die.
Instead, she started livestreaming fortune-telling, and became an overnight sensation!
A corpse hidden in a suitcase, a tycoon plagued by evil spirits, a haunted movie studio... She told fortunes, hunted ghosts, and solved cases, setting the internet ablaze with her mystic arts:
#This woman really can catch ghosts!# #The toxic queen is on a rampage!#
Her family, who once despised her, the top-tier star who looked down on her, and the big shot who had her blacklisted all lined up to beg for a reading.
But she couldn't help thinking that Shen Yubai, the villain next door whom she'd once climbed into bed with, looked at her strangely.
Then he cornered her against a wall, cat in his arms, madness held back for a thousand years surging in his eyes:
"Pretending you don't know me?"
"You run away in every lifetime. This time, I've tied your soul to my cat. Let's see how you escape now."
I would like to give you some advice, because I am also writing a book, and I can't bear to see you keep making mistakes. Your character design is very good, and the entry point is OK, but in the first few chapters, you are almost laying out the background of the original heroine. There is no attractive point such as conflict, especially the large introduction background in the second chapter, which is really unbearable. Readers will generally ignore the background and go straight to the plot. At most, they will remember the impression that the original heroine was vicious and the original male protagonist was a scumbag. Don't write too much about the background. Either add it to the dialogue in a few sentences, or use a narration to introduce the background to more than a few hundred words at most. It can be done in two sentences.
Omg the character design is super cool! The female protagonist is also a capable and lovely sister😘The male protagonist hides his secrets, and the fat cat empathy setting is very funny💕