Western Fantasy: Immortality, and Then Live as Ancient Wisdom

This is a very good longevity article, which made me a little excited. The first time I had a similar feeling was when I read "I am God!" ", Although the feeling of excitement is not as exciting as "I am God! Strong, but it cannot be denied that it is a masterpiece. For me, it is both a new and somewhat familiar subject matter. Most of the longevity novels I have read before were of the fantasy genre. Immortality novels like this kind of otherworldly, Western fantasy genre are very attractive to me. In particular, the overwhelming sense of history made me feel like I was traveling in the history of civilization, witnessing the epics and miracles of history, and seeing the intertwining of humanity and divinity. The fly in the ointment is that the author's early articles are a bit too stream-of-consciousness, which is a bit difficult to understand, and it is not easy to attract new readers. I mentioned it in the review before, and the author also promised to change it, but who knows, anyway, I have read the latest chapter, and I just want to urge the author to write it quickly! ! !

The writing is delicate and original. The problem is that the picture is too fragmented, and it is difficult to read. It is like observing through a spliced stained glass window. It is fantastic but lacks a sense of reality and immersion.

It's okay [eat melon], but the combination of the language barrier in the first few chapters and your writing style kind of affects reading. It's better in the later chapters, maybe I've adapted to it?

I think it's very good. Why is the rating a bit low? It's great without a female protagonist, and the male protagonist is rational and cautious. He drives the immortal, and relies on his own research for his power. At the same time, the world view slowly unfolds. I hope he won't become invincible too soon. Although there are "dragons" who exist outside the specifications, the author will work hard. It will be better if he is more productive.

A great novel, I prefer Wudi. After all, the protagonist is no longer dead, but the narrative is confusing in the early stages, as if something suddenly appeared and was solved without any foreshadowing. The story of the protagonist becoming a slave gladiator was not written out, but was narrated later, which led to many things that were confusing when I read it earlier. Moreover, the combat power system was not explained very clearly in the early stage (basically from low to high, ordinary humans, warlocks, rune warriors, and blood warriors). The specific combat power levels were created by the protagonist himself. The protagonist's panel was all figured out and imagined by himself. It was basically an initial whiteboard. The previous things have improved a lot after Chapter 17. After that, there are some spoilers before Chapter 17. If you don't want to read it, you don't have to read it. —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— —————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————— —How to put it, basically the protagonist suffered hardships after time travel and became a slave to unlock strange panels. By creating strange events and letting others know about them, it is equivalent to achieving achievements to upgrade the panels. Afterwards, he accumulates the strength to pretend to others that he is a bloodline person (better to achieve achievements). First, with alchemy Mr. Shi made friends with the cat orcs he created, and then met a blooded person (a non-blooded person is actually a high-dimensional creature with memetic pollution, which can understand everything in the form of answers, and is considered semi-omniscient). Later, he and he worked together to kill the local blooded people and control the place.

Most things were not explained clearly, and it was too self-indulgent. Chapter 20 is much better.

The story created by the author belongs to the longevity novels in recent years, but it is different from other creation novels where the protagonist is in a high position from the beginning or even the God of Creation, or even immortality cultivation novels where Changsheng Jiushi slowly cultivates. The protagonist and his companions in the author's works begin to face great adversity. They come from the earth, so we feel the same. They wither one by one, so our wishes change. The protagonist's efforts actually meet the readers' expectations. The emotional drive makes the storyline more attractive. However, it is undeniable that the author's pen The touch is a bit obscure, and the way of character creation is somewhat in-depth and simple. This conflicts with the fast-paced narrative method of online articles, and also leads to new readers not getting started. How to deal with the conflict between this magnificent legendary story or epic and the simple and easy-to-understand narrative requirements is a difficult challenge for the author. Good luck

It's very interesting. It's amazing that Tomato can publish a book like this. It's very well written.

The writing is obviously good, but he always doesn't like to speak human words, leaving readers to guess what his bad habits are. The story is about a group of earthlings who traveled through a palace in another world and were tortured to death. Most of them were thrown into the arena. The protagonist awakened the system in the arena. After completing achievements, he could lock or improve his physical state, directly locking the immortal life. Later, it was discovered that every earthling was a natural necromancer. There are three types of supernatural beings in this different world: warlocks, warriors, and bloodlines.

It feels like I went through a sanity test and then failed miserably [laughing and crying]

It's good-looking. The protagonist relies on research and achievements to grow up step by step in a primitive and extraordinary world.

It's a very good novel. There's no cliche plot. It's just that the first few chapters may be a bit convoluted, but after that it becomes smooth. The main plot is that the protagonist gradually searches for, tests and summarizes various powers in an era of low magic dominated by blood power, strengthens himself, pursues secrets and finds a way home. In general, the world view is complete, the supporting characters are not stereotyped, and the depiction of various powers is also very innovative. The protagonist explores and becomes stronger step by step, and at the same time uses unparalleled power to find and protect various mysteries in the process. The natural process of showing off is quite interesting.

You have to be a strong science fiction fan or game fan to understand some of the jokes, and the author's narrative method feels like an aria-like poem full of strong rendering power. It makes me feel like you are a foreigner who speaks Chinese very well. Although the description is strange, that's the feeling.

This is not a popular novel. My personal subjective evaluation is 5 stars. If I were asked to give an objective rating, I would give it 3 stars.

It has the same glorious epic feeling as when I watched "I Am God", and the protagonist is the protagonist doing the story, which has a sense of expectation and participation in the world slowly unfolding, which is better than a group portrait. It's the combination of the protagonist's first language speech in the opening chapter, the preface narrative, the complicated relationships between the characters, and Xingbai's inhumanity that is so well written that it makes the beginning too tiring and mentally taxing, but it will get better and better later on. It would be better to briefly describe it at the end of the chapter!

Tomato question mark number one The beginning of the book is really confusing. Most people don't have the patience. It's a pity that a good book has been buried.

I think it's very interesting. I really like the plot of the protagonist doing research. I also like the attitude of the protagonist as a seeker of knowledge. I also like his character very much. He is calm, does not take pleasure in things, does not take sorrow for himself, is neither arrogant nor impetuous. He is also very kind to his friends, very responsible to his followers, and will not kill people without thinking.

It's a very interesting book, but it feels a bit like a stream of consciousness at the beginning.

The writing is good, as is the plot and setting. The only minor flaw is that the narrative is sometimes too concise. I feel like it could use a little redundant description to smoothen the connection between the upper and lower parts.

It's good-looking, not cliche, and should be the author's original work. Good writing [like]

Very good. I read it in one sitting. They all said it was a bit difficult to understand, but I think I Am God is more suitable for me. The protagonist of that thing is really the gold medal next door. The rhythm is acceptable, the protagonist's progress is also acceptable, and there is no obvious situation where I am frustrated. However, it has a lot of words, it has been updated for 100 days, and there are very few negative comments. Why there is a score of 6 is really strange.

You can add a little more blasphemous setting of God

It's a very interesting story. It may be the first time I have ever written a novel that I hope the author can write in detail or add some narration. If not, maybe add a setting introduction chapter. No matter what, this way of writing is much better than flooding.

There is a bit of stream of consciousness in the early stage, but it is not a shortcoming. It gradually reveals itself in the later stage, and I look forward to it.

There is a threshold in the first few chapters, but it is much better in the later chapters. The panel gives me the feeling of playing a secret sect, Lamp and Blade The back is not very good

It's pretty good. The article is a little unclear at the beginning because the protagonist is learning the language, but it gets much better later on. So far so good

Read on patiently, this is a good book, although there are some Riddler Lucky? The only remaining time traveler, torture, numbness, panel, title achievement rumors, gathering power, constant attributes, fixed abilities, immortality, third intelligent monster, information pollution, material soul, original necromancy! Rivers of blood! In actual power, the corpse is stripped of its flesh and blood, leaving only light bones, possessed by the spirit, a scholar, crushed by the undead, researched, and moved forward instinctively. I'm alive - Li Bing The above is my summary of the cool points of the protagonists. Of course, except for the first few, as for the river of blood, I lied to you, the blood was burned dry by the fire spell [laughter]

Personal feeling is very good

Reads like an opera(

The biggest problem is that it's not fun