Hinata: Start with the Quincy Spirit Bow to Penetrate Naruto

Nice novel! Personally, I can't stand the emotional descriptions. I suggest the author talk more about love (laughs). However, since there are not many people who care about the love story, I suggest that students who are concerned about it just skip this part. It does not affect the viewing: but other than that, it is almost a completely excellent fanfic! It deserves everyone's attention, good grass!

In the third battle, one of the clan's Byakugan was taken away by Ao. There was an elder of the clan who was beside Hizashi when he died. The young clan member who was in the team after the diplomatic battle between Payne and Japan, and Hinata Takashi (picture) who protected Hinata during the battle with Payne (also translated by Hyuga Co.), There are already four clans here. If some people say that the anime does not count as Naruto, the manga does. So at least this clan, which lost its Byakugan in three battles, also proves that there is more than one lineage of the Hyuga clan. As for the Yue Yue Hamun clan, which has the same origin, there are many scenes of clan divisions fighting. Therefore, this article assumes that the Hyuga clan has several lines, and each lineage is a clan. In addition, the character Hinata Hizashi, whether he said in the conversation with Hizashi during the Fourth War that he no longer had the fate of winning extra points, or thanked Naruto for helping the family reform in Boruto, it shows that this person is not an extreme supporter of the clan separation system. Some people feel that the system of dividing clans is unreasonable, and that they are in conflict with maintaining family traditions as clan members. The difference in impression of him is more due to his release of the caged bird on Hizashi. But at that time, Neci was described as a caged bird, and Hinata showed murderous intent in front of him. This was the next generation heir of the family, who could bear this?

A book worth staying up late to read must be finished. I haven't seen such an enjoyable and creative Naruto for a long time, and the combination with the Quincy is quite perfect. The main reason is that this new idea has been seen many times by other Hokages. This is the only thing that makes my eyes light up. Come on

I haven't read Bleach, and I didn't know what Quincy was when I saw it in the title of the book, but I probably guessed it when I saw Beyond Visual Range Strike. There are many people who play the role of Naruto and Hinata, who use thermal weapons as snipers, and people who use magnetic escape and use long-range electromagnetic guns. After reading the text, I couldn't understand what a Quincy was, but from what I could see, it was an archer with extraordinary soul abilities. I thought it was okay and a bit cool. The fighting scenes are pretty smooth, the kind of flying a kite to hit someone, where you can't stand me but can't hit me feels more exciting. The setting of the caged bird being divided into three layers, one layer of eyes, one layer of brain, and one layer of soul, is also very interesting. In the end, the handling of the split family and the Zong family was reasonable, but it was dealt with too late. It took more than 400 chapters to resolve this issue. If there was more foreshadowing in the early stage, or the plot of the young master of the clan being portrayed as a caged bird appeared earlier, and more descriptions of the plot of the young master being exploited, the rating could be improved. Many readers do not have the patience to read it so late, and are impatient. Then there is a big poisonous point, Yuhi Kurenai. I think this character is not well portrayed. It is not that the tsundere character is not good, but her positioning. She is not a genius in the first place, but this character is also very different from the original work. It is better to give her back to Asuma. Moreover, the protagonist's strength improves so quickly that it is difficult for Yuhi Kurenai to strengthen her. I always skip the plot when I meet her. Fortunately, it doesn't hurt to skip her plot directly and I can read it smoothly.

Flaws do not cover up strengths Poison point 1: There is a fat brother next to the protagonist. Isn't this the configuration that the protagonist of a novel had only a long time ago? 😂The protagonist asked him to learn some of his Quincy skills. The brother asked the protagonist to find a "girlfriend" for him, but of course the protagonist didn't find one. If you ask me, I'll introduce him to the Akimichi clan. Of course, the father and grandmother of the protagonist of Poison Point 2 were separated and had curse marks, although they were resolved later. But the grandma without force may be used to threaten the protagonist, I thought. . . Of course this is not happening yet. I'm not saying there's anything wrong with writing this way, it's just a bit off-putting, and I believe other readers won't. Just like some readers think that the clan or the Hinata should be wiped out when the protagonists split up their families, but personally I don't like the genocide. The heroine is Kurenai Yuhi and a replica of "Hinata". Personally, I think the emotional line is okay. The magic seal of the caged bird that the author thought about really shines in front of my eyes. The missing part is actually to prevent the separated families from secretly studying and studying the caged bird. Fighting is great. Ab combination and rb combination. Isn't the rb combination shady? The protagonist who can "teleport" at close range and attack from a distance is already shady enough, and Minato, the flying thunder god, is added to the mix.

Maybe it was because the pace was too fast in the past, but when I returned to Konoha, the pace suddenly slowed down. I already had the capital to resist the clan, and I didn't understand why I still had to take it slow. How could the village still control the coup within the family? [Thinking] Apart from that, I think this book can be given more than 7 points or more than 8 points.

It's okay, but it over-enhances the ninja's perception and reaction. The bow and arrow shoot out, and the arrows are faster than the sound. Ordinary people can't even react if all five arrows hit the target. It can be said that they are all targets, even if they are not jounin. Even the perceptive ninja, except for the Byakugan, can sense chakra but cannot sense dead objects. They cannot detect when to attack. They are still so far away and there is no way to avoid them. It can be said that in the cold weapon era, bows and arrows were magic weapons.

There are no problems in all other aspects. Except for the plot being slow and poor in dealing with the Zong family, everything else is pretty good. I would like to remind the author that everything in Naruto is based on violence (power). When you have power, don't shrink back. Since it is a cool novel, be more direct and don't worry so much about it [eating melon]

It's really good. The protagonist is the protagonist. It doesn't overwhelm the fighting power and doesn't follow the original plot. It's a pity that the battle scene with the Thunder Ninja Village was so well written, but then the quarrel started again.

The rating is low, but it deserves a rating of 9 or above. The protagonist upgrades very quickly, and his IQ, brain, and emotional intelligence are also online. The Quincy➕Hokage system is quite fresh. The descriptions above the emotional line and passing line are not overwhelming. The line of friendship with my father and grandma is long and thin. The following levels are currently online [Sending Hearts]

It's annoying to see someone who is so strong still pretending to be weak to play a game of points with the clan.

This is a high-quality Naruto fanfic with a clear main line and the plot mainly revolves around the protagonist. Unlike some other fanfics where the protagonist revolves around the plot of the original work, and some even use psychological age as an issue. This book is very enjoyable to read.

Absolutely, the combat power is not broken, but if you like to watch the invincible start, you can go away. The plot is also excellent in fan fiction. The writing is good, but the author's description of the emotional drama is not very good, but it only takes up a few chapters. If you don't like it, just skip it. It has no impact on the reading at all. The most important thing is that the author is very clear about various settings of Naruto. He is the author who has the clearest understanding of the plot I have seen so far. I have read Chapter 225 so far

I asked why Yumu Ren didn't last the last hit. Holy Mother, there must be limits.

Now that I see it, the writing is indeed good, but why is the caged bird so slow? It's difficult to understand, but it feels very uncomfortable to have to wait so long before releasing the caged bird.

There are a lot of small mistakes, but it's still interesting, so keep going.

It is true that this market is indeed a blue ocean. You can see that there are very few people writing articles about Quincy and about Death. The collision of the two systems has always been an interesting part. The disadvantage is that the update is too slow.

It's pretty good, but it's not enough. Come on, author, try to update 50 times a day.

The subject matter is new, many characters that have not appeared in the original work also appear, and there are even interactions. Generally speaking, it is okay, but there may be some minor flaws in the details, but it is not harmful. Overall, you can watch it

Kill Danzo and give you another star.

The protagonist is very powerful, and the writing is good, but it feels like the protagonist is the strongest, and the other characters will just stare at him pretending to be cool.

Very exciting, the plot is interlocking The beginning of the plot is a bit slow, but it is really exciting later on, and it officially gets on track after Chapter 200.

It feels okay, but the Hyuga clan has too many scenes (personal feeling)

Good book, recommended. It's just too short, the author could do a better job!

It can be regarded as a masterpiece among fan fiction. Although it has flaws, the flaws do not hide the good points. It is worth reading.

Why is Mao's rating so low? I've read too many Shuangwen and think this kind of slow-paced novel is quite interesting.

I thought the ancestors were the ancestors, but who knew the cattle and horses.

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, working hard unyieldingly, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, steel being refined a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can work hard I am a keyboard in the darkness and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet writing. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

The subject matter is relatively new. It's okay, just a little transition

Interesting, the combination of Quincy and Byakugan is very novel