The 8Th Book of "Shuangbao Is Really Good"

Subjectively I think it's good, but after all, it's a book review. The objective evaluation of the current chapter is as follows: ①: Many girls + innocent boys (shota type), classic female protagonist, the male protagonist is weak and naive. (This is very important. This shows that this book is not suitable for the brain.) It mainly focuses on the protagonist's god-level modeling (appearance), and the sense of substitution is low. (PS: The male protagonist is a combination of "truth, goodness, beauty and purity", and the comments also say that he has sex transformation) If you can accept the ① base, you can watch it ②: The story is relatively clear and flat. In my opinion, the poison is not intense (tomatoes), and some warmth at certain moments is not bad (maybe it is because some of my experiences are similar to the ones in it, so I feel it). It is basically a smooth narrative, with a low level of Liu Bei. ③: Is this a personal suggestion? Sometimes the description of the main character's or character's appearance is too numerous. It's better to be just right, but too much is not enough. I hope to further explore personal charm (not appearance), or to say new impressions and ideas. The lack of childish male protagonists is a novelty in itself, but the problems now seem a bit the same. I probably know what will happen later (the reason for me?) But I also said that this is my personal opinion. The key is: what kind of story do you want to write/what is the meaning of writing it? ④Summary: The article is considered average (okay), acceptable① and the author's enhancement is on the upper side, but it can be boring to read in daily life, not suitable for small brains, but suitable for cerebellum. (If there are any questions, please point them out) OK, that's it [eat melon]

Just a reminder to subsequent diners who may not be used to it. The main character's succubus content is 100%, but the male content is a bit low and can't even be detected. The protagonist's words and deeds may be because the old and new consciousnesses in the brain are fighting a civil war and have no time to fight against the outside world. In terms of computing power, it seems that an 8-year-old computing power is left on duty. Everything else feels pretty good

It's really good. The writing is very interesting. It's not the kind of pure comedy or performance art, but a kind of humor. The male and female protagonists are very sweet. I've been through a lot of mistakes. I'm very optimistic about this book. It's very beautiful.

It's good to read. The author's writing style and plot are both very good. Don't stop updating.

It's a bit soft. It would be better if the protagonist had some tea.

The protagonist's character is very good and his emotions are described delicately.

It's good-looking, the male protagonist is a seductive succubus, he's aloof and charming without knowing it, and the author's writing style is excellent even if it's not a novel about women.

Is it Xiao Nanniang? [Cry]

The male protagonist is adorable, and Nanniang is one of the rare female heroes nowadays (maybe it's because I haven't read a female hero in a long time)

666 Is indeed the rat king

Good looking, come on author

Great, no need to say more

Only so many chapters! ? If people from abroad see it, they think we look down upon it! Go! More chapters! One chapter per person! ! ! [Smile][smile][smile][smile]

Please, please update more, I can do anything [crazy]

It's so sweet that the rats in the sewers can only have a sweet dream watching the happy life of King Rat.

For a high school student like me who can only watch one hour a day, this rhythm is perfect.

I finally found a very good novel about women, Hao Chi [full]

Not bad, I've seen line breaks so far. This heroine is the kind I like

Very cute writing! As long as you can write the ending normally, it will definitely be a masterpiece on Tomato (￣▽￣)

The plot and writing are very good, very good

The author's writing style and the setting of the protagonist are very good, keep up the good work

It's great, I feel very cute, the writing is also very good, there are details, and the main plot is also revealed a little, rat, rat, I have to eat [shy]

What can I say, I quite like the character of this protagonist.

It feels like the male protagonist has been marinated by Ally's quotations.

Come on, the writing style is very delicate. I really like this kind of writing. I hope the author will not stop updating it.