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Generally speaking, the plot is continuous and logical, the visual sense and delicacy are acceptable, and the emotional lines are better reflected in the details. But Deng Ziqi is a bit OOC, and other characters don't speak like that, which gives me the feeling that he is not Deng Ziqi, but this is good for a Tomato novel. So around 8.5 Points. I hope the author can persevere to the end and finish writing. I will see the last part [sending my heart]

Some contents of the novel are a bit inconsistent. Chao Ge and Hehe had been to the protagonist's shop before, but in about 40 chapters, they said they finally met a real person. There is also a paragraph before, the interpretation is that they saw a video posted by the protagonist while eating takeaway, and the agent was also nearby, and then in the next paragraph, it said that the agent came in from outside with takeout. But it's not a big problem for me, I just like reading books that explain the explanation [shy] Are you so obedient? Then I have to give it a five-star review [Chigua]

The character logic is online, the plot is cleverly designed, and it is very interesting to watch.

The pace is tight, no nonsense, no watering-in, and every paragraph promotes the plot.

The writing is delicate and graphic, and the protagonist and supporting characters all have their highlight moments. It's a very good book.

The plot is compact and the delicate emotional portrayal is very attractive.

The setting is novel and breaks the rules, making people unable to stop reading.

I feel like the writing is getting better and better.

The best fanfic I've seen on the internet so far