Fairy in Disguise, the Son of Luck Wants Me to Help Him Practice

It's very interesting, but I have a suggestion, maybe change your marriage and don't get into other children of luck. Isn't it good for the protagonist and Ye Chen to be single-minded? There can be other children of destiny, just be with Ye Chen. Of course, this is just my suggestion. It's okay if you don't listen.

I've read a few chapters and it's okay, but with this kind of subject matter, I feel that getting married is the most appropriate thing.

My setting is that the protagonist has never felt the company of his family in his two lives. Everyone in Yunmeng Peak is like a family to the protagonist. If he feels that his ears are touched by a senior brother, or that the protagonist is about to start a harem, there is nothing I can do [laughs]

In fact, if I really want to say it, I can only give this book 3 stars after reading it so far, but I gave it one more star because I wanted to become a heartthrob + get married. People have to be a little selfish. The biggest shortcoming of this book is the plot and characters. Many turns, details and other characterizations are slightly flawed, and it feels like a running account. The shortcomings are the portrayal of supporting characters in novels and the exploration of human nature. Qualified works can enrich the images of important supporting characters and have full characters; good works can make the various characters in the article conform to complex human nature, and have a good grasp of the black and white sides of the characters; top-notch works can grasp the rhythm of the plot while enriching the images of supporting characters, and prevent these chapters from taking over the main role, resulting in unreasonable distribution of the main plot and too few appearances of the protagonist. You can think of it as some advice to the author. After all, I am also a loyal reader of novels about people who marry a heartthrob and have multiple male protagonists. Come on.

The story of Changing Marriage is excellent in writing style, with a biased literary style. The description of women's bodies in women's clothing is good, but there is very little description of female abortion. The marriage story of System Change directly passively binds the male protagonist and adapts to the female body at the speed of light. It is mainly based on the background of fantasy cultivation. The main focus is to improve one's own strength. The female protagonist is bound to various children of luck. The emotional line of the male and female protagonists is not bad. Unfortunately, the book is cut off just after reaching the emotional breaking point. However, the plot is still okay, the battle is exciting, and the battle scenes are well described. It is a pity to break it off. It is best to break it off after they are completely together, otherwise it will always feel a bit uncomfortable...

The emotional drama is very good, but the author is in the world of cultivating immortals, so why is the difference in realm so small? Normally speaking, even if you are at the peak of the golden elixir and are not instantly killed by Yuanying with one move, it will be fine [laughing and crying]

Okay, it's very beautiful, the writing is very clear and clear, and there is no nonsense. I love it [admiration]

Good looking. It's this heroine (original male) who is a little slow in accepting her new identity.

Very nice. Good job, author.

Give me five stars first and continue to wait and see [blowing kiss]

Except for the fantasy label, I'm a bit unaccustomed to using the immortal level, so I thought it was okay, but it's too short.

The content is very exciting and well written.

@ Instant Noodles Potato Can it make the heroine become a yandere in the future🥺

That's what I like to see

It can look good

Well written and beautiful

Don't stop. Although the data is not good, just hold on [smile]

It's very beautiful. I also want the author to change it to a married woman. I'll update it soon, [smile]

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