The Alchemist's Infinite Paradise

It's quite good, especially the existence of the protagonist's brothers and sisters. It makes me feel that the protagonist is a human being, rather than an emotionless upgrade machine, which neutralizes the sense of dissociation caused by the protagonist's growth and upgrade too fast. Moreover, the protagonist's handling of his brothers and sisters is very good, which not only adds a bond, but also does not really become his weakness and allow himself to be hindered by others. Add a digression, After more than a month, Paradise Forum: Extra, extra, let's take a look at the great alchemist from Eternal Paradise who successfully defected and was promoted to the paradise within nine months of entering the paradise. Please feel free to discuss the specific content of the forum.

Is Paradise just a recruiting world? This paradise is quite kind and does not allow the apostles to destroy it.

The writing style and plot concept are both very good. My suggestion is to make the plot smaller. Also, the protagonist's growth rate can be written slower and the details of the plot can be written in more detail. It's almost invincible without even writing it, but it's over in one go. The protagonist's tempering is less, and his character deteriorates too quickly.

The dungeon world is still interesting, but how can I put it? The protagonist gives me the feeling of being arrogant and his combat power is very unknown. Ants dare to scheme against Paradise and negotiate terms to break away. The alchemy doll and Philosopher's Stone construction system he relies on I don't think he can survive Paradise. If I have to say it, it's like Zhang Hao's world. I want it and I get it.

[Thinking] The writing is okay. The protagonist's brothers and sisters have no sense of existence and do not drag down the protagonist. [Thinking] When the protagonist is preparing to leave the paradise, he only cuts off the souls of his brothers and sisters as a backup plan. If he dies, he can be resurrected later, so there is no weakness. The protagonist gives props to his brothers and sisters. After all, the protagonist's background is in an orphanage in time travel and relies on the protection of his brothers and sisters to grow up. It's not too much to give the protagonist some props that he refined himself [Thinking]

It's very well written. I give you a good review, 5 stars. The author will add more updates. The performance of Goldfinger is also reasonable. As for whether this is a big mistake or not, it depends on the world view written by the author and the performance of the protagonist. As for the lack of ambiguity between the maid and the maid, it feels just right. The maid was created as a war weapon and was not used for ambiguity at all. Some people like to watch it, but I don't understand it very well.

I have been following the updates until now, hoping that I can keep writing. There are no big flaws and overall it is okay. But now that there are more than 150 chapters, I feel that it is almost finished. I would like to support it by giving a 5-star review.

You are suitable for this type of writing, so don't change it

Author, your settings are very good, but it may be because you are a novice, the proportion is not enough, and it feels like there are some things that are missing because you haven't written it out. I'd better give it a five-star review to give the author some motivation, so go for it.

Read the whole book. For a new author, the writing is okay. At least the overall story is told. Although there are slight flaws in details and writing, it does not affect reading. Come on, author, I hope you get better and better! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

Beautiful~! It's written very clearly,

Very well written, cheers

The more good books the better

New stories innovative

The plot is compact and good-looking

Looks good tsk tsk tsk tsk

Average, but can pass the time

Why is it written so much that it becomes behind the scenes?

Everything seems to be normal and edible now

When the protagonist kills Eternal Paradise, he is really treating people like cattle and horses.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Okay, kind of like (The Witcher starts with slime mining)

The writing is okay, quite innovative.

It looks good, but the progress is too fast!

An invincible and refreshing article, well written.