Across the Heavens: Adding Some Sand to the Original Plot

The author is awesome. If the subsequent stories are as good as the first story, you will be the best fast-travel novel in my heart. It turns out that Gu Sinian is the best fast-travel novel in my heart, but your story is fuller and more perfect than the story about old age. The quality of the latest two stories has seriously declined.

It's rare to see such a frank and scumbag male protagonist [laughing]. The protagonist is handsome, has a good figure, pays attention to personal hygiene, has high emotional intelligence, understands girls' thoughts very well, has strong abilities, knows how to make money, and is willing to spend money on his women. It is rare for this person to openly admit from the beginning that he is lustful, not loyal at all, and if he can't stand it, don't get along with him. Compared with those male protagonists who pledge themselves to each other in the front and find a new love in the back, they are much more pleasing to the eye. (To be honest, I feel disgusted by those male protagonists who are half-hearted and do scumbag things, but think they are affectionate and feel that they have no regrets for their women.) Unless the task requires conquering the female protagonist, I will be more restrained and not take the initiative to seduce other women, but if another beautiful woman takes the initiative, I will not refuse. The best thing about it is that it does not allow outside lovers (/with illegitimate children) to dance in front of the wife (the only thing is that there are no "wives" in this world, and I am quite satisfied with this), and gives enough dignity and respect to the wife.

The author really has some ideas. It can be seen that every world has been carefully considered. There will be no annoying and illogical situations, and it has not been revealed that he has also traveled through time. He has stopped pretending all his life. He should give happiness to the heroine who deserves happiness. He should be cruel to those who should be cruel. Stay away from stupid ones. There is no need to get close to the heroine in order to complete the task. The golden finger is small, but it is enough for the protagonist to stand out reasonably. I have not seen such a logical and sober protagonist in a long time. It's very comfortable to watch. The protagonist is simply my three-dimensional reflection. All the choices are in line with my taste. It's great. He's sober, smart, stays out of trouble, and eradicates the roots. It can be said that they are all advantages and no disadvantages. To be honest, the author can try a chronological mystery, a weak golden finger, a pure character,

It is unconventional, and the charm of the male protagonist is clearly stated. He does not shy away from being a scumbag. He completes the task while retaining his independence and does not become a puppet of the task. It is very interesting! Some of the poisonous points of the female channel have also come back.

I have always felt that I only watch female videos with big female protagonists. After watching this, I really became obsessed with it. The male protagonist is clear-headed enough to know when to do something, to be playful when to play, and to be ruthless when to be ruthless. He has IQ, EQ, and means, but he's still bad enough [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

A good fast-travel novel with a good grasp of the rhythm. A quick explanation for each world is that the male protagonist has the same personality and style in different worlds, and each supporting character in different worlds has his or her own characteristics. Generally speaking, if you like quick wear, you should check it out. If you don't often see quick wear, you can also try it. Recommended [Learned]

Wow, it's very interesting. This is the kind of quick-travel story that I like very much. It's not too short or too long, and each world only faces one. I still hate that kind of Shura field, and what's behind it. It's great. I was almost discouraged by the title of the book at first. I really didn't read much. I clicked on it and flipped through three pages. It felt good. Who of you knows the feeling of finding gold among a pile of ten?

When I read the first story, I thought that the male protagonist would fall in love with the female protagonist like a normal routine. Unexpectedly, the protagonist still remained true to himself, which was a big surprise and every exciting point was written out. I stayed up late to read it. One chapter is worth two chapters. The author is so conscientious.

I really like this protagonist. Calm, rational, smart, open-minded and responsible. I know that some good words are not suitable for him, but when I see what he does, I feel that a lot of complimentary words come out of my mouth involuntarily. The openness with which he does things is pleasing to the eyes no matter what. The author made the protagonist so charming and charming. Dear author, please update soon. There's simply not enough to watch.

It's more suitable for men's fast-wearing articles. The first world still has some shadows of female fast-wearing stories, but the latter two have their own style.

Very good-looking, I like this kind of scumbag style [snicker][snicker][snicker][snicker] I don't like watching movies without cp recently. The male protagonist adapts to the rules in the ancient world to marry wives and concubines. He is so good-looking.

This one is really good^ω^ I have seen a lot of similar ones before, but they were all whitewashing of the male protagonist and changing the original romantic character of the female protagonist. Well, it just feels a bit outrageous, but this one still respects the true nature, and I feel that he is still the same person.

The author has 3 books, and this one is my favorite. I really can see that the male protagonist is very realistic, and then I love myself the most. There is no mercy for some emotional reasons. The first two books have it. This one is mainly about his scum. It feels very natural. I hope that the follow-up will become stronger and stronger. Of course, there is a catch, that is, don't be so pretentious and clumsy. For example, every time you do something for a task, how about saying that you are not worthy of love? Where do you write some emotions about yourself, making people feel that they are pretending? Apart from this, everything else is really good, and there are second-hand

I have read hundreds of books and almost finished them. This book is quite novel, with fluent writing and full characters. The important thing is that the male protagonist's strategy is very enjoyable to read. Now the rating is low. I can go up to 9 points, but it may not be OK for book lovers with a high sense of morality.

The plot is vivid, the logic is reasonable, various short stories are slowly told, and the emotions are quite delicate. The writing style is really amazing! Plain writing strokes outline the heart-pounding moments of the characters. The tenderness and pull hidden in the trivial daily life are written with such realism that it will be hard to get over it after reading it.

It's quite enjoyable to watch Two Worlds. It's worth watching. The male protagonist is neither a stallion nor a saint. He is not pure and obeys the arrangements of the system. He must eat what he has to eat and not be sloppy. Personally, I think the plot between the male protagonist and the vicious female counterpart is the most interesting. If you want to know more, you can go and watch it yourself.

The writing is smooth and delicate, and although the plot is written in detail, it does not seem sloppy at all. It fully demonstrates the author's ability to control words and logical connection, giving people a sense of immediateness like watching a movie. The camera switching of the characters in the book is a masterclass. There are only 42 chapters at present. If it can maintain the current level, it will be a masterpiece with a score of 9.5 Or above. It must be rated five stars.

Ma De, to be honest, the plot of the nanny with the ball and the main heroine Li Jing shocked me a bit. I felt that Le was a bit miserable. After all, it was the male protagonist who framed the good family anyway. The author's writing is very good. The plot of Le and Li was very impactful and had an impact on the three views.

A unique anti-routine masterpiece. Breaking out of the conventional fast-travel love framework, the protagonist travels through various romance planes to disrupt the inherent plot and break the rigid script settings. The protagonist's character is lively and lovable, his mind is clear-headed and his actions are free and easy, and his venomous remarks are full of fun. The book cleverly deconstructs classic Internet novel plots such as the sadomasochism of a boss and the real and fake daughter, with novel and interesting ideas. The plot rhythm is tight and neat, with both laughter and excitement. The writing style is relaxed and humorous, and the plot has constant reversals. Readers who are tired of the same romance routines can get a different reading experience from it. The overall look and feel is excellent and worth reading. Each flower catches its own eye, I personally like it very much. I like to read the three fast-traveling novels written by the author. If you are interested, you can read them yourself. "Quickly wear it: I am mixing sand in the world of female videos" "Male Channel Quick Transmission: Awakening Cannon Fodder Has His Own Thoughts" "The Time Wanderer's Journey to the Heavens" (This is my favorite)

I just finished reading Nan Qiao wiped the neck of the heroine Xia. I was stunned. Then a star review popped up for me. I just remembered that I haven't rated this book yet. I think this book is not poisonous and has educational significance. The protagonist Li is not the same as Nan Qiao. From Nan Qiao, I saw the strength to punch and feel right, but in Li, I saw the traditional protagonist solving problems one by one. The title is also very cool. The author made Li a scumbag, so there won't be too many emotions. It's very interesting. I've finished watching 5 worlds and the 6th world is not finished yet. I'm waiting for the author to kick me. I hope the author will be faster and faster, so now I can only watch Nan Qiao [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart] I just finished watching The 6th World yesterday. I finished watching it today. It was so good. I can only say that my brother Li was the most innocent. [Laughing] [Sending my heart] I enjoyed watching it, but one picture a day is too short. It's not enough. [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]

It's very interesting. The character descriptions are vivid and the dialogues are humorous. You can really learn something. I aspire to be the protagonist. I came from Nanqiao. As expected, what I like is not Nanqiao, but the author's articles.

I have now read the third volume. Overall, I feel that the author has a good grasp of the rhythm of the writing. One of the taboos about the subject of Lord God Space is that a certain plot or a certain task is particularly delayed. Personally, I feel that the rhythm of each volume of this book is about thirty or forty chapters, which is very comfortable and smooth. The most rare thing is that the subject matter is very diverse, and you will not get bored no matter how you read it with this rhythm. Each story has its own ending, rather than the common setting where the protagonist leaves the world and is frozen in time. The characterization and writing style are also very good, but in my opinion they are not that outstanding. It feels like watching a unit drama similar to Family Guy.

The story told is very interesting, and each character has his own story, personality and background. I didn't read fast time travel before, but this short story about fast time travel attracted me very much. In the female channel novel, a real world is constructed, and you have to think about how to conquer it yourself, how to control it and be yourself as you wish. I'm curious, if the protagonist really meets someone he wants to care for and love wholeheartedly for the rest of his life, will he still want to keep conquering the next world? Although the setting is that you can look back at the previous world at any time, but after enjoying the warmth and not having to calculate, just enjoy the love, won't you get tired of yourself thinking about strategies all the time?

I think the first two worlds are more realistic. Because the male protagonist is a scumbag after all, and he was confused in the first world and his methods were relatively immature. I think the writing is quite reasonable. Then in the third one, I can see the male protagonist's methods and his mentality change. It's a bit of a transformation, rather than a very abrupt feeling. At present, I feel that the writing is quite good. I am currently watching the fourth world, and the male protagonist himself admits that he is a scumbag. I don't deny it, it's better than those people who want it over and over again. I feel like admitting it generously, I feel quite good about it. The other worlds are actually more realistic. I just feel that the first world is more suitable for our reality. After all, it is a novel, and the most important thing is that everyone likes to read it. I quite like it so far. The author's writing is also quite good. It also has a lot of imagination and cause and effect. It doesn't just revolve around the heroine. Otherwise, everyone would get tired of reading it.

This book is really good. I have read a lot of fast-traveling stories, but they are basically for female readers. It seems that this genre is more popular among female readers, but the audience is male readers. Fast-traveling stories are indeed not very common. However, there seems to be a variant called Jiehuwen in Nanpi. However, compared to the urban dragon Aotian Xiaobai's new skin of Jiehuwen, this original fast-traveling text is really to my liking. Are there any similar strategies? I would like to recommend a quick travel story about a female channel heroine. The number of words in this book is too short. Chapter 102 Invincible

The author's writing skills are so good and his ideas are so awesome. When reading, you can be immersed in the scene. The first story made me feel bitter in my heart. I felt tired for the male protagonist. It is too difficult to live in this life. Then after watching the story of a divorced woman with a baby cleaning a house, I felt chills all over my body and my hands and feet were cold. A great and upright heroine was led into the abyss step by step. It really scared me to the point where my heart froze. Come on, eager to see more exciting stories.

The writing is really good, the protagonist is thoughtful and far-sighted, and the author is also a bit insightful. It is a small dark novel. This kind of theme is rare, many of them are pure love, and the male protagonist is a pure scumbag. Later, due to the mission, it will induce corruption, so watch with caution.

The writing is really good, although it may not meet the taste of many people, but I still hope that the author can maintain himself. Every story, every plot, gives me the feeling that it is written, developed, and shaped according to the plot the author wants, rather than designing the plot for the purpose of recruiting the heroine and starting a harem. Although it will indeed cause a lot of regrets, it also has a sense of reality. , In short, so far, every story is well designed, without that sense of separation. I feel very comfortable watching it. The growth of the male protagonist is also obvious, from constantly suppressing himself for the task, to being indulgent as he pleases, from feeling guilty for the lives lost due to his own influence, to being able to take away the lives of others. I cannot say that the growth is very good (it is getting worse and worse), but the context is indeed clear.

The writing style is really good, and there are many insights on love, which may not be in line with my personal taste. The second life is a bit strange, and the writing feels a bit broken. I haven't noticed it yet in the third life. It can be said that it has gone out of the previous routine, but it has gone to the other extreme and has the shadow of a refreshing article. How to write about fast time travel and at the same time have the true feelings of each world? This is a big test, let's watch it first, come on, author!

As far as the first world is concerned, I think the campus novels are quite good. Anyway, I have read a lot of fast-travel novels, but the writing style of this one feels very good. The various relationships are handled very well, especially the protagonist who has to deal with multiple relationships by himself. There are also many things that are difficult to understand or can't stand. What a pity for that sister. In the end, the male protagonist stopped pretending and stayed with a man named Fang for several years. The advantage is that no one knows, only each other knows. I haven't watched the follow-up yet, so I don't know yet. But as far as fast travel is concerned, the plug-ins are too small, almost non-existent.