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I really like the setting of this article, and I feel that the author carefully constructed the background. But it is a pity that the writing is insufficient, including: the characters are too facialized, and everyone, including the heroine, feels like they are "carrying"; the plot of the story is a bit deliberate, especially Sam's part, which is simply incomprehensible. In addition, the wording and sentence construction are also a bit awkward in some places. For example, the second word of all curses is "ru", but in fact, there are some places where it is difficult to explain using "ru", and it may be better to replace it with "yi". The greeting when paying tribute, "Antlers never lose their color"... Feels forced, and a bit repetitive with the leaf butterfly's. I don't even want to say more about the heroine's last name, "Stone Heart". There are too many people complaining about it, so it's okay to use her guardian stone "Opal" as her last name. Although there are a lot of complaints above, the main reason is that I like it so much that I can't help but complain. All in all, it is still 5 stars, because liking it is the most rare thing.

It's a good read. It's much better than those fairy tales that cover up the magical world. It satisfies my fantasy about witches and the magical world.

It's so good-looking, so good-looking, I hope I can finish it this time

Very promising! ! He may not have fought and killed, or used all kinds of profound forbidden spells, but this book very authentically combines life and exploration with the witch system, and even has a relatively rudimentary theory!

It attracted me, and I felt like a beautiful world of western fantasy witches.

It's super good-looking. If the ending can be perfected after writing it, I feel like it could be an anime version [laughing][laughing]

The chapters are long, the story is rich, the characters have obvious growth, it has a sense of life, and a grand world view. You can feel the protagonist's positive attitude and determination to live a better life. Language healing is full of mysteries. Very interested in the story behind.

The author writes very well, and the magic description is quite vivid and interesting. It is just the kind of magic I want. I hope the author can update it faster, come on!

It's very interesting. It describes the world of a witch in great detail. The heroine is also very down-to-earth in her studies. There is no Feng Aotian or a brainless villain. It's a very interesting article. Highly recommended.

The world view is great. I like the description of magic, rituals and symbolism. The description is very detailed. It feels like you can travel through the past. The main character is his own wisdom and knowledge of the new era. The characters are very full. I hope the author can continue writing.

It's a bit like an RPG game. The main line is upgraded, and there are also many branch lines waiting to be solved.

It's really good-looking, it has the flavor of a Western fantasy

The narrative is smooth, the world structure is unique, and it has the cuteness and innocence of a fairy tale. If you accidentally fall asleep while listening to this book, it will also be a sweet dream.

A very gentle story, but it does not underestimate human nature. It has the color of a fairy tale. The world view is very interesting and has a desire to explore. There are many powerful witches. I like it.

The world view is very good, I like it

Very beautiful, worth seeing

Tomatoes have the most flavor

Very good, the perspective is very novel

Very beautiful, super beautiful

Very interesting, good luck to the author!

Very beautiful, highly recommended

Very nice paper, I like it!

So pretty

I feel like the author is a real witch.

Nice! The background is from another book by the author, I hope this one will be more complete.

It's a wonderful world, I like it very much

It's really good-looking, but a little lacking.

Super pretty! The author's writing is beautiful!

It completely fulfills my fantasy of witches, so beautiful!

I like it very much, it's well written. Please, the author, please keep updating. Love to see more