General Prairie Wind Smoke Lock

The author's writing is actually pretty good, but (in my personal opinion) I feel that the emotional drama between the protagonists develops a little too fast, which makes me feel abrupt. For example (I have read Chapter 11 so far), just a few days after Shou was captured by Gong, Gong quickly fell into self-indulgence (that is, he started to try to have feelings). He couldn't feed the medicine, so Gong just fed it with his mouth (you can search it yourself, but it is not necessarily the only method). The key is that they have not been together for a long time. , Once again, they were even enemies before, the kind that killed each other, and then Gong developed feelings for Shou from the moment he saw Shou (reluctant hurt, close contact, even if they were enemies before). Of course, I did not say that this book is not good, this is just an objective evaluation, and you can read it with confidence regardless of what I said above (the development may be different in the future, so I will only give the objective evaluation that I read in the early stage ^3＾)

The author writes so well! This is a novel that I must read every day, and my expectations are high. The image of Su Yu satisfies all my fantasies about the Jade-faced General. His beauty, wisdom, perseverance, and force value are super high. Although I am not very satisfied with this attack, I still hope for him. Come on! ! !

It looks good, but maybe not many people saw it, so the score is low.

It's very beautiful, a bit sadistic, but to an acceptable level. Those who like to be tortured can jump right in.

Great support. Great support.

It looks good, and you won't lose money if you invest in it.

I like it so much, it fits my xp

Why is this plot so full of characters? It's my favorite type.

It's very good. I've been watching it for a long time. It's very good. The subject matter is also very good. He likes beautiful women. He is strong and powerful. I just don't know why he was captured in the first place?

I watched more on another account

Recommend a little torture

Very pretty! Come on 💪 [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

The plot is exciting and the characters are great!

Full characters and detailed descriptions

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Stories can. Five stars to support the author.

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

Wow, it's so good. The author should update it quickly. This is simply the best one I've seen among tomato novels.

Very good-looking. Very good-looking.

It's quite beautiful, both sweet and sad. [Laughs] Love crosses the differences in each other's identities, from hostility to love. . . Nice. .

The author's writing style is good and it is a very interesting book. I highly recommend it to all book lovers.

I want to know if it is he. I haven't finished reading yet.