I Play the Legion of Death in a Fantasy World

It's so damn good-looking. This is the Krieg in my heart. It's definitely not a harem novel covered in Krieg's skin. Loyal, absolute loyalty. It may be a little suppressed for the sake of the plot, but the description of the character definitely makes up for it. Brothers who read this comment, this book is definitely worth reading. Believe me, if it is different from what I described, feel free to criticize and never talk back [Salute][Salute][Salute]

It's indescribably good-looking, and it doesn't look like a product of this novel platform at all, just like someone from the Dark Ages picked up a technological template from the Golden Age. But now the problem is... After watching it, it's so hard to wait for the update [crying][crying][crying]

The children are guaranteed to eat. Finally, a book writes about Krieg's feeling, for the Emperor and for humanity's Manifest Destiny [Salute]

As the 100th+ comment. Probably no one will read it. But I still want to say something very fair. The characters written by the author are really too three-dimensional, and the protagonist he depicts is very three-dimensional. The bravery of the Krieg soldiers. And his emotions as a person. He did not create the protagonist as a soldier who can only charge. This is just mindless fun. It will feel boring. But the author's writing really drew me into it. I've read many books before. That kind of mindless fun. If the author wrote like this, I think no one would scold him. But he didn't write it that way. He did not write the Krieg soldier as a tool. A tool that only charges. And he controlled that combat power very well. Completely from the bottom up. If the author can maintain this rhythm and has enough ideas, I think the author can probably write at least 200 chapters. It's just that the author's pace is a bit slow. When I saw the real climax, the author stopped updating. Very uncomfortable. That's my assessment. It is recommended that real hammer guys come and take a look. I don't know much about the world of Warhammer. Maybe the review is a bit inadequate. But if you look at it from a normal perspective, this book is an extremely excellent novel with three-dimensional characters. The only drawback may be that there are too few updated chapters.

Perfect and shocking writing, with the silent and fiery despair that belongs to Warhammer and Krieg. The author's writing style of venting anger in extreme depression is so good that it was the first time for me to write a review for a book on Yangtze. Com.

It's the first time I've seen such a comfortable Warhammer article... Nowadays, many of them are just hype, and the understanding of it is extremely shallow and stereotyped, but I think this article is quite well written. The key is that the degree of combat power is well grasped, and the protagonist's persistence and other people's determination to change can be well expressed. The character is rare and full, but I don't really want the protagonist to have CP. I hope the author will explain

It's a very good book. Really, this is one of the few books that I praise from the bottom of my heart. It doesn't belong here. Not only the writing can beat a lot of books, but the psychological portrayal and growth process are also very delicate. It can be said to be in the first echelon of Warhammer fan fiction. Don't be fooled by the cover of the book. If you change it to a better cover, there will be almost no shortcomings.

Here's a five-star review! Although the protagonist's combat power has far exceeded Krieg, as the Emperor's Chosen, this is all normal. Faced with the desperate world of time travel, relying only on the power of Old Man Huang and Krieger's unyielding spirit, he can fight his way out with blood! The story is exciting and suspenseful, with many twists and turns. Every time you reach a desperate situation, you can fight back, which is unprecedented in history. It's so beautiful, I must leave a review! We have now reached the last chapter of the latest update. I can basically recite the plot. If new readers have any questions about the setting and general plot direction, please reply to me directly here and ask me. I will answer them truthfully.

It's amazing. There's no bells and whistles about direct invincibility. He's just a Krieg soldier who uses his insignificance to achieve greatness. It's a very good book. It's much better than those smart novels that just say "System, give me as many xxx as you want."

A very unique book. I feel this score is really low. It's not a great read, but the plot is really good and the way Krieger is described is also good. Especially the setting of this western fantasy world is very well written. The main character is also well written. This is the best Warhammer time travel novel I have ever heard. Directly from one breath. Heard the last chapter

It's very beautiful, and there haven't been any outrageous ones so far, and most of them are in line. There are basically no big problems with the patch. Except some words are not loaded. It was probably stolen by Tzeentch.

It is a very good book. It tells the story of why you died, your bravery in the face of invincibility, your compassion in the face of the dead, your protection in the face of aliens, your protection in the face of human beings, and your perseverance in the face of responsibility.

The title of the book is ridiculous and childish, but it is a tearful epic. Excerpt--- "If you give her money, she can live a few more days, but it is no different from letting the hanged person tiptoe on the stool. A fool who thinks he is kind... I beg you, don't torture her." Excerpt--- "Go to defend the city, as a soldier of the God Emperor, fulfill the duty of protecting those behind you, and carry out the mission of fighting to the death for the survival of mankind." "There are people out there who need my sacrifice and protection, and I won't waste my time here."

This novel is worth reading Although there are obvious shortcomings, I think the advantages are also very great. Even after more than 400 chapters, I still have the motivation to continue reading... Without getting bored or feeling that the description is bland and superficial. It is really an excellent work in Tomato. The protagonist is different from other time-travelers. He is not the kind of little f-thing who can't do without the system, nor is he the kind of selfish... And there is no such thing as a harem. (There are two girls who seem to like the protagonist, but I think it can be interpreted as a comradeship or a deeper relationship. It does not have to be understood as love, and there are no inexplicable ambiguous descriptions of physical contact or "flash of love"... I think the characters of these two girls are also established) Maybe it's because this is the first time I've seen this type of novel, and it's the first time I've officially read a Warhammer fan… It even made me directly interested in Warhammer (I want to get into it)… Even if I like other Warhammer fans in the future, this one should still belong to the level of Bai Yueguang in my heart🥹🥹 People will have special feelings for many "firsts"… For all the reasons above, I gave it five stars. The author stopped updating, but I remember the author said that he will finish it, so it should be temporary Furthermore, this book has no threshold for non-Warhammer fans... Most of the time some proper nouns will not affect the reading, and many of them can be roughly guessed based on the context. I read other people's viewing comments and said... There is a small problem with the setting of Warhammer... But I don't know how big it is. I don't know if it is a big mistake or just an insignificant leftover... I can only say that there is no viewing threshold for outsiders, so you can watch it with confidence. I really liked it so much that I watched it over and over again. There are really not many fanfics that I can read over and over again. If anyone is interested, but is afraid of being poisonous From my point of view, there are visible shortcomings, but I don't think they are considered "toxic points"… Anyway, it's an excellent work on Tomato

When I first saw the system, I thought it was kind of mindless and cool. But later on, the control details of the battle were very easy to understand. I could immediately think of scenes like that in the novel, and the Demon Officer and Youlan at the beginning really gave me a feeling of being invincible. (Youlan is a bit forced to kill in the plot) Everyone's portrayal is very good and has their own characteristics. (After the victory, there will be someone to help convey the reputation, and he will be recognized on the road. This is my point.) However, the male protagonist sometimes feels a little too frustrated. To be honest , I don't even know how to win. Compared with those in Warhammer, the monsters here are mainly more difficult to deal with, and everyone knows magic, except the male protagonist. There are special bugs in recovery ability and magic. When will the male protagonist be given a magic shield like the Forbidden Army [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

This book can be easily understood even by people who have not understood the Warhammer world. The characters are portrayed in a relatively detailed way, and there is no blockbuster-like inner monologue that makes people read it easily. Overall, it's pretty good. It doesn't feel like a product of this platform.

A beautiful sentence, one of the few good books. I take back your five-star review. It's too frustrating. I should bring in the entire Creek Death Army. After a busy day, I want to read a novel, relax, and eat a knife [smile]

It's a good Warhammer fanfic, with excellent writing, plot, and setting. But if the author still wants to make some money from this book, my suggestion is to grasp the rhythm well. As a new author, your rhythm problem is actually very obvious. In fact, readers who have seen the latest chapter will also feel it, that is, this novel It is said that the battle never stops. As a novel, it is understandable to be sad and depressing for the sake of the plot. However, it is impossible for people to only eat meat and not vegetarian. After each climax, my suggestion is to take a break and write about daily life and interactions, which can not only enrich the characters but also control the rhythm.

I don't know much about Warhammer. I think this book is quite good. The character creation, plot and battles along the way are all okay. There are few bad points. Some details may not be handled well. Everyone seems to hate the main character Krieg's harem, which is not consistent with Warhammer. I have basically finished reading it. There is no clear mention of the protagonist having a harem in this book. Any behavior or thoughts, and the author did portray a very Krieg protagonist. Although the author did write several women to follow the protagonist. I don't know what the author wanted to write, but there is really no sign of a harem. However, as the plot progresses, it may become harder to conceive the plot, so I stopped updating it. I am actually quite sorry. (Purely subjective) The reason for writing a review is also to let more people read this book.

The quality is okay, but there are too many emotional scenes, and I have seen a trend of female protagonists. If a normal fan is in love, and still uses an emotionless weapon like Krieg, then this book will be shaky in the future. I hope the author can re-examine the core of the Warhammer IP.

This is the best Krieger fan fiction I've ever read. I don't care if you, the author, can you correct the typos and so on, but others don't know. Guys, if you don't look at it, it's really a loss.

The author's writing style is very good, and the protagonist's personality is relatively distinct, and there is no sense of double standards. In addition to the comments that appeared inexplicably in the comment sections of other novels, such as comparing the combat power of Star Iron, Huangpizi, Loyalty, and the Four Pedlars, I would not be confused if I came into contact with Warhammer for the first time. Every time something new appears, the author will introduce it. The reason why I don't give it 5 stars is because I have read more than 200 chapters, and there are often bloody and torturous enemies. There are many descriptions and many actions throughout. The protagonist can only be introduced after the opponent has tortured him. Before the introduction, there is a lot of psychological description of the protagonist. Although it does not feel abrupt because of the author's writing style, the number of times is a bit too much. Moreover, some disgusting characters kill villains of the same level even if the protagonist explodes, and accidentally let the opponent escape to continue to disgust people. The writing style is depressing, and my mood will be depressed when I read it. It suppresses first and then improves, but there is too little space for promotion. The torture of the veteran couple by the interrogator on the spot was considered a mistake on the battlefield, and it was not too uncomfortable after killing the interrogator and Youlan. There is a certain length of description of Ellie becoming a mature person and appearing right in front of the protagonist. This kind of meaningless pain and casualties that may have been avoided by appearing earlier gives people a very powerless and depressing feeling and is difficult to vent.

When the stars fade, only the Emperor's light remains eternal. When heresy whispers, loyalty roars. We are the human fire, burning in the dark galaxy; We are the shield of the God-Emperor, standing on the edge of destruction. Your life is firewood dedicated to the Golden Throne; Your death is a hymn engraved in the history of the empire. From the Sanctuary of Terra to the Eye of Terror, from the Hive Abyss to the Void Frontier, wherever humanity goes, the Emperor's gaze is there. Those who doubt fall into the abyss, those who hesitate turn into dust, Only those who are loyal - will live forever! Let the roar of the bolter be our chant, Let the roar of the chainsword be our oath. Raise the double-headed eagle flag high! In the name of the Emperor, purify! In the name of mankind, conquer! In the name of loyalty, eternity!

It's very interesting. The author describes the battle well. I hope the author will continue writing👍

The setting where the protagonist becomes Krieg's death army is super exciting, the battle scenes are well written, and the characters' personalities are well restored. I can't stop following updates every day. Five-star recommendation! The author has done a very clever job of integrating Western fantasy and Warhammer. The setting of poison mask + engineer shovel is strange and memorable, the plot rhythm is not sluggish, and the character creation is also three-dimensional. 530,000 Words are not enough, so keep reading! Western Fantasy + Warhammer 40k is an unpopular good product. The plot is exciting, the characters are stable, and the author is diligent in updating. If you are short of books, you can jump right in, and you won't lose!

An excellent book can always move my heart. This is the purest Krieg, who uses his life and loyalty to defend the dignity of humanity and save others at all costs. It is a very excellent Warhammer derivative. It is a pity that because of Krieg's identity, there will probably not be a pure crushing scene. I quite want to see the protagonist become a canned person.

I really have no words to evaluate this book. It is an epic. Whether you are a lover of Warhammer or curious about the famous Krieg Legion in the title, it is worth reading to appreciate its meaning and beauty. In the rotten environment of tomatoes, it is the only and eternal diamond. , This book may make you cry or laugh, it may be really cruel and heavy, but it brings you not only a story, but also an eternal definition of human courage and responsibility. I will keep reading it, reading it over and over again, and even my children will hold their mobile phones and read it carefully at the screen. I'm thinking, or rather This book is thinking. ---Nan Qianxun 2026.3.4 In the study room @witchcraft chapter How many words do you currently plan to write?

This book is very interesting, and you don't need to read any more of my content below. I've been raising it for a long time, and to be honest, the character design of the protagonist is very good. Okay, that's all, now I'm starting to [think][think][think][think] about water The protagonist likes to recall - in this dreamy and frustrated season, how many times during those sleepless nights, she listened to the breath of the drizzle beating on the banana leaves, and counted the fragments of her heart scattered in the rain. The waves of loneliness engulfed her, and the pain of frustration consumed the protagonist's will. The dust of the years has long accumulated in the soul, and the tearful star fell into the ground. Only the ivy of memory developed over the years, and some past events. New sorrows and old grievances linger in the heart and cannot be shaken off. If intoxication can bring back the memories of dreams, who can no longer remember life? Who doesn't know how to relive some long-lost past events? Over the past 20 long years, endless past events have turned into a microcosm of life. The dream talk of childhood, the arrogance of youth, the ambition to take the White House as one's own, the dream of walking alone in the sky one day wearing a white denim jacket, the frequent pause for a long time for an unknown flower, and the sadness of the withered flower. After a long time, I found a secret place to bury the flowers. I also enjoyed the shining life like a shooting star in the lonely bustle of the winter night. I also had the fog and rain on that lonely evening, making my tear-filled heart tremble in the rain and mist. And I always like to bury all the ups and downs and bitterness in my heart, not wanting others to see a little bit, and then lick and caress it alone in front of others. Life is lined with many things waiting for us to recall, and the passing of every longing is equivalent to leaving the station of life, only once, and never to return. In a person's life, many things may not always go as expected, but the protagonist always thinks that just giving me a good memory is enough. There are many things that maybe you didn't care about at the time, but many years later, when you think back, you suddenly realize, ah, wasn't that what I was pursuing so hard? However, the past is in the past, everything is so far away, and what is left is only a trace of growth, a trace of growth. Recollection is a kind of beauty Very nice^ω^

I want to see the update! ! ! Teacher, please update them! They will do everything! ! The writing is really good, the protagonist is really a hero, whether there is Goldfinger or not, the consciousness of the protagonist is real, the courage of human beings is really touching!

Only personal opinions, don't comment if you don't like it Suppression first and then promotion. More than 200 articles suppress and then promote female first? Or the second female lead (a knight) is very miserable, a bit sadistic, and more consistent with the original work (I think it is 85-95%) because I think the emperor's sense of sanctity has been lost a lot, and the strength of the material in the original work has been reduced, and there is a bit of conflict between the left and right brains. Just now the protagonist said that the emperor is not a god, and in the next chapter he calls the God Emperor, but this is how the protagonist is made of flesh and blood, without technology to succumb to gods, real, and very empathetic