The Day Our Paths Intertwined

The writing style starts to fade from the front to the back, probably because quality is ignored for the sake of time. For a high school student in 2007, it is already very good. Personally, I still prefer cool stories that are not brainless, without the craziness of cheating all the way. More games will make it more attractive. I think the plot is okay, and the villain has some brains. I've given you these four points, and I have one more point to encourage you. However, the male protagonist is currently weaker than the female protagonist. Although his performance is outstanding, he cannot help in the plot. I look forward to strengthening it in the future. [Taste it carefully][OK]

The plot is clever, and I prefer to read game novels. To be honest, I was very surprised when I read it. To write about games, you must not only write about deer chasing the Central Plains, calculating all the traps, and making every step of the way, but also about hiding one's strength, biding one's time, forbearing and accumulating strength, and the repeated tension of contradictions and persistence under various uncertainties. We also see many flesh-and-blood characters in the novel: the heroine Xu Lanqiu is not only naturally beautiful in appearance, but also "beautiful" in her abilities and conduct. She is not only smart, courageous, able to assess situations, but also has the silent kindness and delicacy to moisturize things. The male protagonist Jiang Huanchen is also not inferior in appearance, but he is also very talented. He dares to change, he is well versed in learning how to fight, he is heroic and courageous when facing injustice, and he chooses not to look back amidst the repeated pulls in his heart, and then plays the role of Lu Wang. In the process, he is aware of everything, adapts to changes, and his worldview collapses and is rebuilt as he grows up. We look forward to more growth of the male protagonist. Wei Nan has outstanding talents, dares to be the first, does not follow the crowd, has his own unique views on things, is equally calm and calm when facing big figures, and strategizes among various undercurrents. In the chess game, lovers kill each other, relatives take revenge, and they have no choice but to fulfill their last wishes. The loyalty of "repaying the king for your favor on the golden stage, and supporting the jade dragon to die for the king"... May not be more about right or wrong, but the unfairness of the world and different stances. Looking forward to the follow-up plot!

The female protagonist Xu Lanqiu is strong and classy, ​​not a flower vase, unlike the weak characters in other novels; the male protagonist Jiang Huanchen gradually grows up, and continues to use delicate language and psychology to describe his process of slowly becoming stronger. The author intersperses some of his own subjective truths into many of his writings, hoping to convey his philosophy to us. The group portrait written, each character has their own shining point, very exciting! 👍 💕 Looking forward to the author's follow-up plot

Dual growth lines for male and female protagonists, internal fighting within the family, and a non-dragging plot [Thoughts]