Traveling Through the Book: Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Picking up a Mortal Protagonist

The writing is very popular with me, but I am relatively controlled. I hope that the protagonist Shou will not be too trapped by emotions. In fact, I personally prefer a 50-50 relationship and story line. But after reading this novel, I really like the plot of the protagonist Shou. Blessed are the career fans of the protagonist Shou [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] ][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] Actually, when I follow up on reviews, I look at how many hours I've read [laughs]

It's good-looking, both the writing and the plot are online. Although it is tagged with two men, the protagonist is not too addicted to love, but strives to improve himself to pursue the pursuit of love. It is rare to see this kind of two-men cultivating immortality novels that are not limited to love and love. [Sending Hearts]

Very refreshing and clean writing, with the conciseness of a male channel and the sensationalism of a female channel. It is very suitable for this kind of CP-oriented upgrading flow. I look forward to how Gong regains his sense of presence after he leaves. I also look forward to chasing his wife. I don't insist on the crematorium, but I hope that the pursuit of his wife must be longer. Lin Wu will chase his wife as long as he chases the husband.

It's very interesting, but it's a bit boring without another male protagonist in the middle. But the plot is very interesting. It really fits the style of double male protagonists that I want to watch. In terms of emotions, I don't have high requirements. The reunion of this kind of young couple after a long separation is better than the newlyweds. I look forward to the plot of the reunion in the future and whether they will chase their wives in the crematorium hahahahaha

I have read Chapter 98 of Volume 2 so far. I am writing this review in the hope that the author can read it and refer to it. I quite like the setting of this book, and it's quite easy to deal with. There are just some problems (from my personal point of view, I think the shortcomings) The first is that it is too heavy and long, and the previous chapters of "The Immortal World" are too detailed and have a long-winded feeling (my feeling when I read it, I just skimmed many plots quickly). Of course, I also read the introduction, and it was said to be a slow burn. It's okay to slow down, but I hope it's some more interesting plots. I think the part about winning the young master is okay (I have a little hobby, I like to do CP. Of course, this is before the protagonist meets another protagonist). As long as I'm not forced to get involved in inexplicable troubles, I like it very much... The second is the character of the protagonist... It's too frustrating, and there are too many classic plots... I personally hate the protagonist who has strength but doesn't show it (commonly known as low-key) and then gets entangled in all kinds of troubles, and scolds him without fighting back or taking action. He doesn't care about anything (I really want to be angry, because I really hate this kind of plot). Then when someone else makes a move, he passively fights back, but nothing will happen to the person who makes the move... I hate what the protagonist said very much. Sooner or later, he will encounter him and can't afford to offend him. Well, he can afford to offend you. He thinks you are easy to bully, but in fact you are really easy to bully (nothing to do...) And because the trophy bug owes that person a promise, my thoughts of abandoning the book reached its peak... But I endured it, because I really like this setting and characters... I also have no idea how to be a referee in Chapter 98. I hope that the protagonist will bear in mind that excessive humility will bring a lot of trouble to himself and apply it in action. Don't take the so-called low-key as a benchmark... These are the two things that made me uncomfortable while reading the book, and I hope that the protagonist will not suffer due to the decline in strength caused by the spirit-binding technique (but the latest chapter is already in the world of cultivating immortals, so it is a bit late to talk about this now). I hope the author of this book will write better and better. The four stars are temporary and will be changed after the book is written (of course, even if I abandon the book later, the rating will not be lowered) Power generation for love has been sent, cheers for the author👏 I'm out of ideas, I'll change my book review... I really like this book, but the traffic is not good and the author can't stand it anymore [face covering] I hope I can improve the rating and increase the traffic, and I also hope the author can finish the book [I'm about to cry] Third edition, I changed it back to four stars. To be honest, I kind of wanted to change it to three stars, but I saw that my initial review would not lower the rating, so I forgot about it. This book attracted me simply because of its subject matter. When I read the first part, I thought it was okay, at least I have hope. Although I stocked up on it because it was too little and too slow (although I forgot to stock it up later), the plot of the Immortal Realm is really... Not very interesting to me, and I don't like the main character being defeated. So I haven't looked at it, planning to wait for them to recognize each other. As a result... I really have no choice. I really don't like the amnesia plot, and besides, I've been waiting... Just waiting for them to recognize each other, waiting for them to get along after recognizing each other, and waiting for them to continue to grow stronger. As a result, when I saw the plot behind it... I forgot about it, it turned out that the two of them lost their memory together (one because of a bet and the other was injured), their cultivation was not done yet, and they started over again... With expectations, there is a gap. I ran to read the previous content of the second part. The person who entrusted me... I was exhausted again. What a sense of perspective. I was even tricked into signing the deed of betrayal (although it was torn off later)... And the one who was said to be "not so hopeless kid brother" was my highlight... There was a reason to arrange a bully for the protagonist, and then do it again, because I felt that he was eating and drinking for free. I saw a comment written by the author in the second volume, saying that he would not feel aggrieved until he established the foundation. He would be a fool in one mouthful, and be scolded for mowing the grass... Isn't this still aggrieved? (Maybe it's because the plot after the protagonist regains consciousness is not frustrating... I don't understand, and I don't want to watch it.) If I want to not be frustrated, in fact, it would be better to arrange a family that is not good to the protagonist, but will not bully him. Lu Yi, a true successor, was entrusted to help take care of him and gave him so many spiritual stones. He was played like this. He really committed crimes against the odds and was not afraid of being punished. Even if he took the spirit stone and did bad things to others, he actually dared to have someone sign a contract to sell himself as a domestic slave. He really had no fear of being liquidated and committed crimes against the odds. I jumped again to read the chapter about Zhao's compensation... Forget it... It's the same as what I said in my first review..."It seems that the protagonist is easy to bully, but in fact the protagonist is really easy to bully." It didn't meet expectations. Would you say it was poorly written... That's not true. I simply don't like to read some plots, which has spread throughout the book. (Don't overthink this when you read the author's comments. It's just not for your taste.)

The persimmons are great. I don't understand how a book review can stack up to me twice. The quality of the plot is top-notch on a tomato basis, and some of the plots can also give me some small inspirations. The characters are not labeled like poles, and the twists and turns are okay. The language is plain, so you can read it if you are tired of reading mindless bedtime stories. It has a certain logic and does not occupy the CPU. The first volume has the best rhythm, the second volume focuses on Jianghu, and the third volume begins to fully enter the world of immortality. The setting that Goldfinger is related to insects and time is quite interesting. I wonder if and how it will become round in the future, and whether there will be plots and conspiracies about entering the upper world. The warmth and warmth of human relationships is another great advantage. I hope to see a world of immortality other than the law of the jungle. After all, if there is only the law of the jungle, it will be no different from savages. Unity is a major feature that distinguishes humans from animals. But in recent years, it seems that fewer and fewer novels have mentioned it. The characters' emotions are also innovative, balancing the lack of deep feelings caused by falling in love at first sight with the boringness of long-term love. The design of poisonous poison rationalizes the triggering of the relationship between the two, and develops true deep love in the ambiguity. It is full of tension! ! In addition, among the supporting characters, I am most impressed by Liu Cixin. Her personal image is particularly full due to the development of the plot. Her personal plot can effectively promote the plot without being cumbersome. She can also enrich the character image and kill three birds with one stone. Applause👏🏻 She has not yet appeared in the third volume. I am curious whether she can transcend the shackles or is trapped in obsession and panic all day long without knowing it. To be honest, the plot information density of Magic Flame Gate is not high, but fortunately there is an emotional line to adjust it. If more clues can be laid out in this type of preparation in the future, the senses can be more focused. Finally, I wish this book a big hit and become a hit! Original comment attached in the comment area

From ordinary people to innate masters to mortals who cultivate immortality, the development of opportunities and adventures coexists. The plot is compact, but the data is a bit cold. Come on, madam, I am looking forward to the development of the plot in the future.

It's very detailed. It handles many small details very well. I love it so much. It also explains why each party does it. It helps my little brain. It has a male channel style and a very good taste. It is a male channel among female channels and a female channel among male channels.

After reading the beginning, I like this style of writing. It is not exaggerated or pretentious, and it is in line with the ancient background. There is no modern vocabulary throughout the article. What I don't understand is whether the gray fog also affected the male protagonist's feelings when they first met? Therefore, if you are attacked in an intimate behavior, your face will turn red and your heart will beat.

I really like this way of writing. The male protagonist is a real boy, and he doesn't feel like the white-haired female protagonist is trying to be a charlatan. Although I feel a little love-minded when I admit my death to Xiao Lu, on the other hand, I feel very loyal which can be a bonus. The protagonist is very proactive, does not follow the crowd, and has goals and rules for doing things. When you encounter difficulties, you find a way to break through them, and when you think of getting something, you work hard for it. There is no feeling of being driven away by the plot like other novels. The author also controls the rhythm very well. From the countryside to the martial arts to the world of immortality, the book is very smooth. There is no feeling of "fighting ordinary crayfish in the early stage and real mutant overlord sunset shrimp in the later stage".

[Face covering] Please give a rating to support the author. It can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into writing, but there are also quite a lot of mistakes made by novices, and I will pick them up later. I think the more comfortable rhythm is the mortal chapter. This length can reflect the author's plot arrangement without exposing the shortcomings of the slow rhythm. In the Jiang Hu chapter, I think I wanted to write a group portrait, but obviously I couldn't hold on to it, because many of the characters in it will not appear in the later stages, and they are not as impressive as Liu Cixin at the beginning. Moreover, the male protagonist's personal characterization has not improved much at this stage, and it feels like it could be refined a bit more.

Very nice. The male protagonists are both strong, and they advance step by step. Although it is an upgrade flow, the writing is very practical. At this stage, I have only watched the beginning of the second volume, but because the protagonist has Liu Cixin, a plot-savvy and ruthless enemy, but the protagonist himself knows nothing about it, I feel very anxious. As a result, I couldn't immerse myself in any plots later, especially after looking at the table of contents, I didn't find anything from the end of the second volume to the middle of the third volume, which made me even more anxious [face covering]

It's a very interesting novel. I haven't found a novel with two male protagonists on meal replacements. Can the author recommend something similar to yours? I'm going to finish reading it. I like the character of the protagonist very much. He is plain but reveals his unwillingness and has a toughness in his bones. Oh, I really like the style of martial arts before entering the fairy world. It is very charming and interesting. There are various sects, and the characters have bright personalities. The protagonist Goldfinger happens to be not very restrained when facing enemies. It is reasonable not to die when in danger, ah, he will die when he deserves it, haha. It's normal for people with great luck to be the protagonist. It can be seen that the author loves his beloved protagonist Daer very much. He doesn't describe how awesome he is and keeps bragging about it. The shock is basically conveyed naturally. I read a female novel two days ago, and the author of that book kept boasting about how awesome her protagonist Goldfinger was and almost made me vomit. Your Goldfinger's setting is very good and the positioning is vague, and you don't know what it is. I want to watch the whole thing but don't want to watch the castrated version of Haste He [already planted]

I hope the male protagonist won't be too trapped in feelings

Well... How can I put it this way? I personally think this book is very interesting. Shou is the kind of calm type I like, and can reveal a hint of youthfulness inadvertently. If this book can be written, it will definitely be a long one. In class, I also tried to draw images of emotions in my heart, but it was like gambling and I wasted one picture after another. I like to watch the protagonist grow up, it gives me a sense of accomplishment and a feeling of growing up with him. When it comes to attacking, he plays too few games, but you can feel it. He also likes to receive it, and it's not because of other external influences. Anyway, it's up to you, the author, to write. I can't help it. I haven't written a book review for a long time. It's so confusing. (๑˙ー˙๑)

It's very interesting and the story is very attractive. It's the first time I've encountered this kind of story, so I'm looking forward to the follow-up. I hope the author will make our male protagonist look particularly good-looking in the future. In short, this is a very good book, I like it very much [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's very beautiful. Although it was said to be a martial arts world, I actually think it's more appropriate to call it a martial arts world. The golden finger of the protagonist is either big or small. Every difficulty is very difficult, but you can still pass it, and the plot is compact and interlocking, very much like a male video, but I feel that the bond between the two male protagonists is a bit not fully described. Looks good, I'll review it

It's so beautiful, so refreshing It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it. Most of the supporting characters are very three-dimensional and not mindless. There is no particularly stereotyped villain, and his actions are justified. The author's writing is really good, praise [like][like][like][love][love][love]🌹🌹🌹

I like it. The characters are very three-dimensional. Not only the protagonist, the supporting characters also have their own ideas. It feels good to follow the protagonist's perspective and explore the world little by little. The emotional lines are not too many at the moment, but they are very moderate. I like it very much.

Why is the rating so low? ! ! It's a very good-looking mortal cultivating immortality! ! ! The set worldview is very harmonious, and it's interesting to watch Xiaolin make breakthroughs step by step! ! ! It's still a long story, I love it! Show me all the damn things!

I tied it. I personally think it's pretty good. In the middle, the main character may look a little backwards, but it's actually a little backwards, but it's still pretty good. I originally stocked up on books but ended up finishing them. I didn't expect it to end so quickly. I looked at the previous plot and thought he would write a few upper realms and middle realms. At least 500 chapters are in order, but there is still good news that there is a sequel. I am going to watch the sequel!

Looking forward to the follow-up! The two male protagonists quickly recognized each other and upgraded to fight monsters~ It would have been nice to have more interaction. It seems that the Jianghu chapter has been completed. I am still looking forward to the part about cultivating immortals. Come on! The long flowing water is beautiful!

I opened it casually and was astonished. I read 300,000 words angrily and still had lots of meaning! ! The plot and emotions are 50/50 and complement each other. The narrative rhythm of the plot is very comfortable to watch. The emotional line of the protagonist is sweet but not greasy (there is no abuse in the middle of the movie). It is beautiful and beautiful! ! !

Although there are two male protagonists, the experience and image of Lin Wu are more portrayed. The male and female partners are not backgrounds, they have their own behavioral logic. The plot is indeed very similar to the mortal flow mentioned in the title of the book. If you like this, you can read it

It's rare to see such a long-running book. This is the first book I've come across with two mortal male protagonists. The protagonist has really climbed up from the grassroots. He has a very strong and hard-working character, and is also very smart. Although he always suffers from weakness, he can always learn lessons from the failure and move up.

ᥬ(๑• . •๑)᭄ Come on, it's slow but not boring at all. I hope that the two of them can write more details about their relationship and emotional changes when they meet as immortals. Earlier, I felt that Lin Wu's feelings came a little too quickly. Maybe some details were not written out, which made me feel that it was very fast. But it's still very interesting. Come on＾0＾~ By the way, do you still have the draft? (⁎⚈᷀᷁ᴗ⚈᷀᷁⁎)

After reading it for a long time, I realized that I forgot to comment. It is really good. To a certain extent, you can even read it as a male novel.

It's really good. Hahahahahaha. Seeing that this book is not popular, I want to increase the author's popularity. (In fact, I think it is more real than the more popular books. There are no obvious routines. It feels like it is written with care and will not make people feel uncomfortable). Keep it up!

I hope Lin Wu doesn't have a love brain

Very good, I feel like this kind of writing is rare [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]