Beast Control Game: I Don't Want to Play the Real-Life Version

It feels like the author has played this game personally [face covering] There are still a lot of foreshadowings buried so far, it is still in the category of daily novels, the writing style is okay, the protagonist is not aggrieved, and there is no problem with his mental state. At present, it is still very dull, and we have to wait for the follow-up world view to unfold. The setting written by the author is very interesting, but the description of the game battle is a bit too much. Explaining the values, functions and battle functions of certain spirit beasts in the game may take up most of the chapter. To sum up: the flaws are not hidden at present, it is an excellent work and worth a look [like]

Definitely worth reading in Tomato Taming Beasts. I don't know why there are basically no comments, so I support it. Now that I have read the latest chapter, I don't think it has any bad points. There are some shortcomings, and it feels a little green, but the flaws do not hide the good points. The only thing I'm not satisfied with about the plot as a whole is probably that the theme should be set a hundred years later, not ten thousand years later. Because I would think it's a little weird that Ten Thousand Years has only developed like this. Good reviews and recommendations, cheers for the author.

The worldview is one of beast control combined with urban martial arts. The worldview is not the mythical one where gods and demons dance wildly. It feels more like Pokémon. The plot is okay, but it's more of a daily casual story. The character design seems to me to be relatively average at the moment. There is nothing particularly relatable about the character, and it needs to be improved. I don't think there is any problem in other places. I can give you a five-star encouragement. Good luck to the author.

The writing is very good, there are almost no poisonous points, and the processing is very good. However, after watching the whole movie, I almost go through thirty or forty chapters of a game, and the Emperor of Hydrology [face covering]

Oh my god, it's actually non-toxic, surpassing 99% of Tomato novels. Many incidents were handled perfectly, and there was no fault to be found. There are both pet battles and live broadcast introductions. The two are balanced. Compared with many live pet appraisals, his battles will be more than twice as good. It is considered a high-quality novel, but the only flaw is that there is no suspense, such as burying the knife, or deeper details. It is the kind of enjoyable novel that can be read with your mind. For example, in the whole law, the water level dropped in the freshman trial, the urban monster hunting team encountered more monsters, and the monsters were stronger, etc. These all hint at the conspiracy of the Bo City incident later. There are still few small details like this, but compared to books on the market, it is still very capable.

The habits of the spiritual beasts are very well set. Is there a prototype for this turn-based game in the plot? Ye Junhu's dependence on Qinghumu, the butterfly transformation of Mengshuang Spirit Butterfly, and the symbiotic relationship in the snow. The settings of Fubo Divine Bird and Qianhua Zhu are all very interesting. Unfortunately, there is more content in the game, and the strength level is not so clear. It is written in a more daily way, and it is not too biased towards the spirit beast setting. This is a pity.

The current world view is great, and the male protagonist is quite good-looking in his daily life. I feel that the story is not enough. I often write about the game settings in the past life in large sections, and then say that it will be different now in reality. Looking forward to what will happen after the main plot unfolds

Nice! The author's settings are very detailed, as if this game really exists! The writing is also very smooth and very comfortable to read! The only drawback is that there are too few and I can't see enough! ! !

If you like to watch daily life, you can read it. The pace of this book feels very slow, the excitement is not outstanding enough, there are not many character conflicts, and the plot development tends to be flat. The disadvantage is that there are too many live broadcast content paragraphs.

The world view setting of this book is very good, and it is in line with my preferences. I just hope that I can use less words such as unsatisfactory, which are very easy to mistake. I have used it incorrectly three times so far. What I originally wanted to express was basically "unsatisfactory". Although it feels a bit literal, it really affects my perception.

I feel like the novel is good overall, but I feel like it lacks a little bit of detail, which makes it unrealistic. For example, before time travel, only the protagonist's account was very strong, which seems unlikely. Why is it said that Pokémon is balanced? If you can use this lineup, I can also use it. Why is it that only the protagonist can do the side quests, while others can do them too? Why can't I just copy them? I feel that writing about the number one player in the game should not mean that everyone else is inferior, so I am number one, but because he continues to learn experience and grow. There is one advantage in him that is stronger than everyone else, and that is love. In short, this is a content that can highlight the protagonist, but the part I have seen is not available yet. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I haven't read a lot. I feel like there are too few protagonists in the first twenty chapters. There are too many scenes about live broadcasts and family members, which makes me feel like there is no protagonist. There are also too many plots about the past life. I hope it can focus more on the protagonist and the present. Other suggestions are written in the form of extra chapters.

It belongs to a future Pokémon master who is buried by the title of the book and is trying to live a leisurely life like Asakura. I am not a Pokémon fan, so I have little interest in the battles between these pet beasts. However, the author has obviously put in the effort and even written down the ecological habits. If you like the theme of beast control or Pokémon, feel free to follow it. The only question is whether the author can persist in writing at the current level. (So ​​when will the evil Rockets officially debut?)

I finished reading it after a few days of binge-watching. It was pretty good and kept me interested in reading, but the ending was a bit sloppy. There is no cp. The female characters are relatively ambiguous in the early stage, but there is no plot later. There is just too much content about the game in the book and too little description of the main tasks. There may be some problems with the protagonist's mentality and the way he handles some things, but they are harmless. [Note] After reading a book for so long, this is the only time I have been asked to write a long review. I hope the author can do better [Like]

There are still some shortcomings. Deleting the live broadcast content would affect the plot too much.

It can be rated as a good work. It can be seen that the author has a great world view, but the plot and writing still need to be polished.

The score is actually so low, but overall it's pretty good. The writing style and plot rhythm may still need to be honed compared to older authors, and the setting content at the beginning may be a bit discouraging because it accounts for too much. The beast-controlling setting is well constructed, but for that matter, the social setting is more average, and the author's acuity of time seems a bit low. In addition, if you write about a bad protagonist and force the protagonist to make progress in the plot, some readers will be offended.

The protagonist is lazy and hard-working, and his main mission is to save the world (but he has no eggs) Spoilers below The protagonist's character is quite cute. I'll make a few points next: 1. The early stage is all-in-one, but none of the female characters are the heroines, and the character issues behind the sister are not a problem. After all, they don't appear. 2. There are too many daily stories. The protagonist is a salty fish, but the world needs a savior to get up and go to work. However, because the protagonist's status is not high enough, he cannot intervene in the execution of the main plot (dead fish eyes). There are also a lot of undercover agents. The purpose of the villain is to skip directly to the last chapter. It made me laugh. I really want to slap my friends. 3. The protagonist has a special physique, and his own beasts are more or less peculiar (seriously) 4. The main line is to play league games + live broadcast in the early stage, COS savages to tryst with mythical beasts in the mid-term, and play games + teach in the later stage (meetings by the way...) 5. In my opinion, the most important point is that the protagonist is a tool man, a tool man through and through. He is not at a high level and is not invincible (meaning reaching the top of the world), but he can basically beat up most people. There is also The ending has been written for me! (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻ Damn it, why don't you write a trial for the side story! I thought the protagonist was going to kill all the villains to kill all species! But it turned out to be like this! It made me so angry! But overall it's okay

The plot is novel, the world view is novel, and the characters' IQs are all online. Except for the ending being a bit hasty, there are no other major problems. Personally I think the rating is low, this book is worth reading.

Everything else is okay, but the live broadcast part is a bit abstract, and the proportion of live broadcast is a bit large [Chigua] The overall setting is okay, but you can change the ten thousand years to a thousand or thousands of years. After all, if it is ten thousand years, the change is too small [laughing and crying]

Why did you change your routine midway?😰😰😰😰 Following the beginning of the continuation and writing the academy flow, wouldn't it be nice to play the baby cup?

You guys wouldn't have written a game setting collection first and then this novel, right?

Not bad. There are currently too many live broadcasts. It depends on personal preference. It is slightly different from the traditional beast control. I feel more like using the power of spiritual beasts to fight, which is different from what I thought of letting the spiritual beasts come out to fight.

I feel like such a grand worldview shouldn't only contain these contents. It feels like a pity. But the writing is still very, very good. I like it very much.

An unconventional beast-control novel It's too watery and too procrastinating, so I'll procrastinate a little more. I'll give you 2/5 first, and I'll give you the rest gradually.

If the author plans to change the title of the book, I would vote for "Work Overtime!" Savior"

I hope the author can write longer

I feel like the progress is quite slow. Can the author indicate whether there is a female protagonist or not in the introduction?

Write some extra stories! Please🥺Everyday life, descendants, or ten thousand years later... It's not enough...[Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

Not like fake. Looks like it's really worn. Nice)