Risking Our Lives to Plug the Front Line? I Built a Heavenly Court to Seal the Otherworldly Gates

The quality of the book is good, with no obvious flaws. The golden finger is a bit abrupt, but this is a common problem in most system books. I hope there will be settings such as the second awakening of talents or the evolution of talents later. For example, in the later period, the laws of alien planes can be absorbed as nutrients to improve one's own laws and promote the second awakening or evolution of talents. It would be great if the protagonist in the later stage could turn around and add the Spiritual Dictionary as an entry to his talent to completely control the system (ps: this comment is just to express my own thoughts, and there is absolutely no malice, please don't scold me [send your heart]) After reading the latest chapter, I think the current Tang Heng is a bit like a paranoid lunatic. He feels that no one can understand him and no one recognizes his path. He is a talented caster, but he will never be a competent mentor (this is not a derogatory sense). His vision is beyond this era. Only another genius, the protagonist, can understand him. (In fact, the protagonist does not have a spiritual dictionary. He is a genius just based on his casting skills, but he is just a genius in the conventional sense.)

I have read all the chapters that have been revised. The fifteen-year-old bookworm said that I haven't responded to the person's message all morning, I haven't done any work, and I haven't logged into the game. It's really good-looking. I haven't seen anything bad so far. It's worth reading. Come on, author

After the revision, it seems to be okay. It is mainly tomato novels. There are not many forging-type books with a decent world view that can be seen in serialization. Many of them are either finished or have very weird settings with very low ratings. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

The subject matter is relatively new. In other novels, Goldfinger usually involves a chef cooking, but this one involves forging and building equipment, and it is not entirely dependent on Goldfinger. The protagonist himself has also improved. However, the protagonist's IQ and EQ seem to be a little high and low, which is a poisonous point. Fortunately, the protagonist of this book is not the kind of sluggish and useless protagonist, and the author knows his mistakes and can correct them, which is better. At present, the overall rating is four stars, which may be a bit high. The range of 3.5 To 4 stars is more suitable. If the writing becomes better in the future, then it will be four stars.

The author is very sincere and the setting is good. I think it's pretty good. I'll give it five stars. There are a few things that I personally don't think are perfect. Let me tell the author. I've read a lot of books. I think the high and low scores mainly lie in the environment and people. There are many high scores for the plot. The book is not that good either. Most of the settings in the novels are suppressed first and then promoted, but they cannot be suppressed without thinking. There are too few talents, the supporting characters are not written enough, and the image is not full. For example, in the section of the old scientists, they are difficult to accept new things but they will not faint. Kochi The crowd accepts new things very quickly and faints from excitement, which shows that the protagonist is a bit far-fetched and looks a bit weird. There is also the part about the promise of wealth. Geniuses are just geniuses before they grow up, and they will not live like that when they cherish. It feels like they are using too much force. There is also the dangerous part about the villain. It's a bit weird to stand and watch the pig's feet and the second male lead first. Don't rush and write slowly. After polishing and writing, you can read what others have written and look for faults. Or you can find a few readers to see if there are any problems and revise it according to your own ideas. Hope this book gets better and better. For talents, the main thing is control. In a world where strength is the mainstay, it is more about masters as teachers and strength first. The attitude of the soldier towards the protagonist can be relaxed a little. The premise is that you set him to know the protagonist's ability, and the strong man also has basic respect for the protagonist.

This is my favorite type of novel, so I'll give it one more star. Overall, it's slightly poisonous and I can read it, but it still makes me feel a little uncomfortable when I encounter some unreasonable parts. The biggest discomfort currently comes from the protagonist's brother. The ability level positioning is too high in my opinion. At least I can't imagine how humans could conquer alien races if this ability could be S+. The second uncomfortable part is that the protagonist's ability is spread too quickly. Not many pictures have passed, but it has already risen to the national level, and it is still the top level of the country. At least we should stir up some trouble in the academy, combine the equipment with basic laws and alarm the country [awkward laughter] (Of course this only represents my personal opinion)

The content of the article is compact, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters are delicately portrayed. It is a rare good book. Although not every point can be liked by everyone, if you have any opinions, the author and readers develop together. Come on, author! *^O^*

This novel is okay. The details are really well described. However, in many places, the details are a bit too boring. I personally don't find fault with it. However, the most important thing about Tomato is fast-paced and refreshing writing. You may not be used to such a slow pace. Based on the platform of Tomato, this book is already considered an okay book. After all, not everyone is a master. They don't have the writing power or the ability to control logic. Most ordinary people write books by slowly filling in a small world view. Personally, I think it is a very good novel in the current tomato environment. However, it would be better if the protagonist's mind is more mature. Sometimes he is too childish now.

I am a child from a rural area, and it is not easy to pick up a courier. It is snowing heavily and I am lonely and helpless in the wind and snow, but the courier deceives my feelings. He made me wait for fifty minutes instead of the promised ten minutes, causing me to miss the last bus back to the village. I am helpless, empty, lonely, and cold. Unscrupulous express delivery makes me freeze and I cannot return to the village. Bad review! ! ! However, when I got the goods, I found that it was indeed worth it, so I still give you a good review. Don't ask why, he is so handsome!

The overall feeling is pretty good, but there are a few minor issues. For example, the daily tasks at the beginning are gone, and then there are the plural sources of entries (referring to high-quality entry sources) The protagonist's golden finger can be the rule for recording entries, and the lottery can be equivalent to opening an illustrated book. In this way, the rationality of using the same entry in plural can be well explained. Also, I didn't build myself a set of divine forging equipment, and I always had insufficient energy to pass out. There are cooking tools for cats, and it's not difficult to get a blue suit for yourself. Flaws do not hide your strengths, come on