Are the Front Lines Taking Their Lives to Fill a Hole? I Will Build a Heavenly Palace to Block the Door to Another World

The quality of the book is good, with no obvious flaws. The golden finger is a bit abrupt, but this is a common problem in most system books. I hope there will be settings such as the second awakening of talents or the evolution of talents later. For example, in the later period, the laws of alien planes can be absorbed as nutrients to improve one's own laws and promote the second awakening or evolution of talents. It would be great if the protagonist in the later stage could turn around and add the Spiritual Dictionary as an entry to his talent to completely control the system (ps: this comment is just to express my own thoughts, and there is absolutely no malice, please don't scold me [send your heart]) After reading the latest chapter, I think the current Tang Heng is a bit like a paranoid lunatic. He feels that no one can understand him and no one recognizes his path. He is a talented caster, but he will never be a competent mentor (this is not a derogatory sense). His vision is beyond this era. Only another genius, the protagonist, can understand him. (In fact, the protagonist does not have a spiritual dictionary. He is a genius just based on his casting skills, but he is just a genius in the conventional sense.)

I have read all the chapters that have been revised. The fifteen-year-old bookworm said that I haven't responded to the person's message all morning, I haven't done any work, and I haven't logged into the game. It's really good-looking. I haven't seen anything bad so far. It's worth reading. Come on, author

After the revision, it seems to be okay. It is mainly tomato novels. There are not many forging-type books with a decent world view that can be seen in serialization. Many of them are either finished or have very weird settings with very low ratings. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

The subject matter is relatively new. In other novels, Goldfinger usually involves a chef cooking, but this one involves forging and building equipment, and it is not entirely dependent on Goldfinger. The protagonist himself has also improved. However, the protagonist's IQ and EQ seem to be a little high and low, which is a poisonous point. Fortunately, the protagonist of this book is not the kind of sluggish and useless protagonist, and the author knows his mistakes and can correct them, which is better. At present, the overall rating is four stars, which may be a bit high. The range of 3.5 To 4 stars is more suitable. If the writing becomes better in the future, then it will be four stars.

The author is very sincere and the setting is good. I think it's pretty good. I'll give it five stars. There are a few things that I personally don't think are perfect. Let me tell the author. I've read a lot of books. I think the high and low scores mainly lie in the environment and people. There are many high scores for the plot. The book is not that good either. Most of the settings in the novels are suppressed first and then promoted, but they cannot be suppressed without thinking. There are too few talents, the supporting characters are not written enough, and the image is not full. For example, in the section of the old scientists, they are difficult to accept new things but they will not faint. Kochi The crowd accepts new things very quickly and faints from excitement, which shows that the protagonist is a bit far-fetched and looks a bit weird. There is also the part about the promise of wealth. Geniuses are just geniuses before they grow up, and they will not live like that when they cherish. It feels like they are using too much force. There is also the dangerous part about the villain. It's a bit weird to stand and watch the pig's feet and the second male lead first. Don't rush and write slowly. After polishing and writing, you can read what others have written and look for faults. Or you can find a few readers to see if there are any problems and revise it according to your own ideas. Hope this book gets better and better. For talents, the main thing is control. In a world where strength is the mainstay, it is more about masters as teachers and strength first. The attitude of the soldier towards the protagonist can be relaxed a little. The premise is that you set him to know the protagonist's ability, and the strong man also has basic respect for the protagonist.

This is my favorite type of novel, so I'll give it one more star. Overall, it's slightly poisonous and I can read it, but it still makes me feel a little uncomfortable when I encounter some unreasonable parts. The biggest discomfort currently comes from the protagonist's brother. The ability level positioning is too high in my opinion. At least I can't imagine how humans could conquer alien races if this ability could be S+. The second uncomfortable part is that the protagonist's ability is spread too quickly. Not many pictures have passed, but it has already risen to the national level, and it is still the top level of the country. At least we should stir up some trouble in the academy, combine the equipment with basic laws and alarm the country [awkward laughter] (Of course this only represents my personal opinion)

The content of the article is compact, the plot has ups and downs, and the characters are delicately portrayed. It is a rare good book. Although not every point can be liked by everyone, if you have any opinions, the author and readers develop together. Come on, author! *^O^*

I am a child from a rural area, and it is not easy to pick up a courier. It is snowing heavily and I am lonely and helpless in the wind and snow, but the courier deceives my feelings. He made me wait for fifty minutes instead of the promised ten minutes, causing me to miss the last bus back to the village. I am helpless, empty, lonely, and cold. Unscrupulous express delivery makes me freeze and I cannot return to the village. Bad review! ! ! However, when I got the goods, I found that it was indeed worth it, so I still give you a good review. Don't ask why, he is so handsome!

The overall feeling is pretty good, but there are a few minor issues. For example, the daily tasks at the beginning are gone, and then there are the plural sources of entries (referring to high-quality entry sources) The protagonist's golden finger can be the rule for recording entries, and the lottery can be equivalent to opening an illustrated book. In this way, the rationality of using the same entry in plural can be well explained. Also, I didn't build myself a set of divine forging equipment, and I always had insufficient energy to pass out. There are cooking tools for cats, and it's not difficult to get a blue suit for yourself. Flaws do not hide your strengths, come on

This novel is okay. The details are really well described. However, in many places, the details are a bit too boring. I personally don't find fault with it. However, the most important thing about Tomato is fast-paced and refreshing writing. You may not be used to such a slow pace. Based on the platform of Tomato, this book is already considered an okay book. After all, not everyone is a master. They don't have the writing power or the ability to control logic. Most ordinary people write books by slowly filling in a small world view. Personally, I think it is a very good novel in the current tomato environment. However, it would be better if the protagonist's mind is more mature. Sometimes he is too childish now.

I have read Chapter 68 so far. It is a good-looking and exciting drama. Although there is no fighting scene yet, the author's words can make people's throats tickle and their blood surge. So far, it has received 5 stars. Come on.

In fact, I feel that it is quite good, the subject matter is good, especially when the national treasure is very interesting, and it is also quite good when it occupies a point in the fourth-level world. However, this book still has a lot of shortcomings. There is no logic in some places, and I feel that the author does not have much writing experience. I hope he will continue to work hard. I haven't reviewed a book for a long time. I personally feel that the author still has quite a lot of potential. The upper limit of this book should not be much higher than it is now. I hope the author can be more rigorous when opening new books.

Pure assistance, not purely relying on plug-ins and talent, a combination of theory and practice, pure handwork, very comfortable to watch

It's quite good. I just wanted to check the time in the middle of the night, but I couldn't hold it back. I stayed up late and read one or two hundred chapters. I read the reviews were toxic. In fact, I only paid attention to the protagonist's growth plot. His skills were fresh and suitable to watch.

It's great. It's just that the energy is not clear about the first level. It's just like how much it usually is at the first level, and then how much is the limit. After reaching the limit and breaking through the second level, it will be much more than the ordinary second level. (251 Photos) It's like Zhao Yuan 8000 or Li Yuan 7000. You only mentioned the upper and lower lines of talent and effort, but in fact you just said that effort will increase, but talent does not. (Except the pig's trotter) There is no experience conversion ratio for monsters after they are upgraded after spawning monsters (in fact, this can be converted into a talent bonus) (144 photos) After all, the pig's trotter upgrades faster than his best friend (and it is still several levels), but it is really pretty. I hope your outline will not collapse.

Very nice to look at. Nothing else to say. Just two suggestions. First, I hope the male protagonist can do some fighting, and use Taoist equipment. It's very good, isn't it? 2. Write more about the title of the novel. Currently, there are only 4 people canonized, and only two of them are familiar, and they are rarely published, which is a pity.

It looks okay, but it's not fun enough. As a system owner, you have to endure hardships. Isn't the system in vain? It's like the previous upgrade stream without a system and good talents. If you like this type of book, then this book is still good (I only read Chapter 70). Anyway, I don't like it because I am here to have fun, not to accompany the protagonist to endure hardships. I don't want to suffer at all when there is a system.

Just relax your mind. If you take it too seriously, you will lose the fun. After reading a lot of comments, they always say it is unreasonable. If you think about it carefully, you will always find the problem, and you will lose the joy of reading novels. Overall, it is not bad. It is no problem to relieve boredom.

Don't stop updating it, brother. I personally think the subject matter is very new. Try to use your imagination. Don't limit yourself to most of the current content. Try to update some plots that others have not written before.

The writing is very good and the pace is fast. However, there is not much stock. It is best to update quickly, otherwise you will only be able to read the book after a while.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a slow-paced novel. Although the author didn't control some of the plots well, life is full of flaws. Too perfect seems to have been arranged. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I seem to see myself five years ago. When the author is free, we can exchange ideas in his mind. I look forward to communicating with the author.

First of all, the author is very self-disciplined and consciously looks for poisonous points. I give this author a thumbs up. I feel that the bad points of this book are that the title is not good enough and the cover picture is not good-looking. When you see more than 100 or 200 chapters, there will be AI pictures attached by the author. In my opinion, the highlight of this book is that it shows the charm of life-related infrastructure and forging magical equipment besides combat. It's quite exciting to read more than 200 chapters. No more, I watched the beginning of Chapter 500 in one go, and saw the protagonist's parents, two people who prefer life, fighting two brothers of the protagonist who are top talents in combat. The protagonist also needs to take his parents to conquer the plane. Alas, it's too poisonous, it's too poisonous, let's go.

The score of 7.3 Makes sense. This is what the author has corrected [smile]

Before reading this book, read Chapter 71 [Smile] World setting and level division There are too many poisonous points in the back, and the follower system has no follow-up. From the shrewd city time traveler at the beginning, he has become a clear, stupid, cute, coquettish and ordinary male college student who just went to college at 18 years old [awkward laugh] and also likes to write the team's daily hydrology. This is why I gave it 6 stars. After 100 chapters, there are so many poisonous points that it is scary, just like an AI novel.

Why do I feel that there are so few people? This book still needs to be settled. The world view is very good, and the upgrade is reasonable. It can be read with your brain. It is probably rated as 9.2 Points, but the cycle will be long. Let's see if the author can persevere. Oh, by the way, there are very few comments if you don't have a knife.

I think it's pretty good. I hope the author will keep reading. There are only a few that I can read in this book shortage period.

The subject matter is good, but 60 to 70% of the content is made up of adjectives, which makes it uncomfortable to read. I would like to give it four stars for encouragement.

It's well written. I've seen a lot of all kinds of immortal abilities flying all over the world, and suddenly I found that this kind of auxiliary system to build equipment is quite novel. The previous plot is okay, and the writing is good, but I don't know what it will be like in the back. I hope it can be maintained...

It's so beautiful [Sending my heart to you] Very novel subject matter! More updates, like, love to watch

Very good, not as good as most nine-point novels, but the rating is somewhat suppressed. There are some minor problems in the article, most of which are based on statistics and do not affect the plot. Can I say it is a bad point? I can only say that the world is thought too well and the protagonist is thought too high. The setting is quite interesting, but I feel that the way the map is laid out is a bit unclear, so it goes directly to the outside of the universe. There are too few descriptions of the forces inside the planet. So far, I have only read one sentence about Big Goose and Brother Long. The world view unfolds a bit too fast.