I Collected the Body and Received It Myself, Something Is Wrong, Please Give Me a Kiss

Pick a reader's book. It can be felt that the characters in the novel are carefully designed by the author with great effort. The characters are vivid and vivid, which makes up for other shortcomings to a certain extent. The plot is straightforward and simple, and the reading threshold is low. The niche setting deviates from the mainstream. But the point is obvious: the writing is not good. I personally feel that it is too rigid, whether it is the narrative rhythm, scene changes or the handling of details. I feel that the current plot should be more than about 50 chapters, but because the author wrote an outline-like narrative and presented the story too quickly, it did not make me have a good feeling about the story. It was very "bland" and lacked the brewing process. The shaping of the character's image has also been weakened as a result, which is a pity, because I can feel the author's intention in this aspect. Generally speaking: this work has a niche topic and is original, but there are still many problems. The author's carefully designed characters do not match the story and his writing style, or the story and writing style are too rough. A lot of energy is put into perfecting the character settings and the importance of the story itself is ignored. But I believe that the book will get better as it gets written, because you can feel the author's progress before and after these 50 chapters, and it's worth looking forward to the subsequent development.

It feels like it's been a long time since I read my wife's article. I followed the series long ago, and later I read my wife's fluffy book leisurely. After a long time, I saw the introduction of my favorite, and I looked up and saw an old acquaintance. It felt very strange. Objectively speaking, I quite like this book. The author's narcissus is as good as ever. I really like to see narcissus, and I also like to see such a close match. You and I are familiar with each other, and the interaction written by the author perfectly hit my XP [heartfelt] But there is a fly in the ointment. When reading this book, I don't have the same feeling as when I read Synopsy for the first time. I don't feel particularly excited or happy. I felt that the writing was too tight, that is, the plot was not so perfectly drawn, and the story was pushed forward very quickly, as if it was about to end, without allowing me to savor and ponder the process carefully. Sometimes the dialogue occupies a page, which makes me think that I can't say it. Maybe I haven't read enough books. But I still like this book very much. I think the recent data is not very good, but my wife must complete it completely. I will continue to follow up on it [crying]

It's beautiful, the daffodils are delicious😋The way no one is convinced at the beginning is so delicious

Very nice. The plot settings and so on are all very good. It's a pity that it ended so hastily. If I can hope that the teacher can continue writing this book someday in the future... I really like the rhythm and plot of this book. I'm so sad. Good looking. But I'm so sad. When I saw the end, I realized something was wrong. But I couldn't help but continue watching. Still wondering why it has such a low rating for being so beautiful. I really like Narcissus written by the teacher. Oh I'm so sad. OsIf I kowtow, will this Erliangxian continue to write this book?

Although the lack of an ending still makes me feel uncomfortable, but it's understandable, because the author's ratings are too dismal. I think the plot is very good, but too few people have watched it, and the evaluation is very low. I really like Narcissus written by the teacher. Except for the lack of an ending and the fast and a little sudden emotion, I originally thought it might be a bit of a stretch, but in fact, it doesn't have a big impact on me. I really, will the teacher consider this subject in the future? I really like it. I will promote the book when I have time! Ahhhhh! Why are so few people watching? ! When I searched for Shuixianwen, I didn't see much. I really wanted to cry. The teacher's level is not bad, but why is the traffic so bad? It's really hard to accept, it's too little [crying][crying][crying][crying] Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I really, really, really like the teacher's setting of the characters! ! It's that kind of feeling, I really, really, really like it! Why? How can it not be popular? I feel so uncomfortable, I feel so unhappy! ! ! Why can such a delicious setting not become popular? ! What should I do if I like it so much? ! ! I couldn't sleep at all after staying up late to watch it! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! I really, really like Narcissus written by the teacher! ! Amen! ! ! ! ! [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] I feel so unhappy, I feel so unhappy! ! I really, really like the character design of the teacher! I really like the feeling of their conversation! ! ! Wow wow wow wow wow I don't like daffodils very much! I went to see Narcissus only after reading the teacher's article! ! ! The first book I read was the teacher's article! ! ! ! Do you understand the value of this? ! ! ! No matter what, it's still my first love and Bai Yueguang! I don't understand! I really, really like it! The value of falling in love at first sight 6 times! ! I really really like it! ! ! It felt even worse after going out for a walk! ! The teacher was simply targeting me! ! ! Damn, damn, damn, damn! ! ! Before I found a suitable meal replacement, I just relied on the teacher! It's not exciting, it's not exciting! ! It was the first time I was curious about narcissus, and it was also the first time I saw narcissus! The character setting of the teacher attracted me at first glance! ! I watched it on another software! ! After downloading this software, I immediately searched for it! ! First time, this is my first time! ! Do you understand what the first time is? ! ! [Cry][Cry][Cry][Cry] I feel bad! ! Can I kneel down and beg them to come and see it? ! [Crying] [Crying] Oh, it's so uncomfortable! ! I really like it very much! ! It disappeared all at once, and I still can't find the smell that matches my taste! ! It's that feeling of loneliness! ! Is this why it is easy to go from frugality to luxury, but difficult to go from luxury to simplicity? ! Awkward! It's so frustrating! Like like like like like! ! Even if the teacher writes a string of code, I can read it with my eyes closed and say something good [crying] [crying] [crying] It's so frustrating! ! Narcissus, such a delicious narcissus! ! That sense of tacit understanding! Such a character! So attractive to me! ! Their characters really attract me! There is also the feeling of being dependent on each other, especially Bai Yueguang in the drama, who has the kind of lethality in the plot. It is so uncomfortable, so uncomfortable. Why is the teacher so lethal? I'm so unhappy [crying] [crying] [crying] I love it so much! ! !

It's very interesting, but the author cut the book [crying]. I wish Cen Du and Cen Du a long life. Even if I can't watch your life anymore, I will live happily in one dimension for the rest of my life [Love]

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Recently, I have become obsessed with Narcissus. Before reading this one, I also read another book by the teacher, Narcissus. I didn't expect that the teacher actually wrote two books of this type, which really hit me. This is one of the few novels in Tomato that impressed me deeply and I liked it. As I read it, I discovered something very magical. Because I was almost finished, I wanted to know the plot in advance, and found that the teacher had written At the end, I suddenly realized that after knowing this ending, I could no longer read any of my other novels or even the few books I had recently collected. I haven't had a withdrawal reaction like this for a long time. It's not that this book is not good, but I think it is too perfect, at least in my mind. My limited knowledge reserve can only be expressed by the word magical.

Super pretty! I have read both this book and the teacher's previous book Narcissus! Especially alive! The daily routine written by the teacher is also very relaxed and casual! All in all, the teacher's narcissus is simply delicious😋

Jie

It's amazing. It's a very novel feeling overall. Beautiful! ! !

Looks great, cheers Narcissus. And what if Cendu is Plato? (Dog

The writing is super good. It's the first time I read such an interesting Narcissus article [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I really love this Narcissus novel written by the teacher. I like it so much. Teacher, I love you so much!

It looks good. I read it from another article written by the teacher. It looks good.

Www Erliangxian is the best Narcissus Cook in my bookshelf! ! ! Just this narcissus! ! !

I hope the teacher can write better and better, and I look forward to every update from the teacher.

It's so beautiful. I didn't expect that I've read several of the author's books [face covering], and then I discovered that I particularly like another book called Narcissus [crying] It's good-looking, but I won't write the ending at all. How many 123456 have passed? ? Depend on!

#This book is really good. It's a pity that I can't say anything good about it.

It's super good-looking, but it's still being serialized and has to wait, but it smells really good [KISS][KISS]

Oops~ The big Narcissus text always makes it hard for me to flatten my apples. What should I do? I keep making my aunt laugh and smack it. I really like it so much. How can I put it in words? It's still the same sentence. It's so good that I lose the words to comment.

It's really cool, it's a beautiful narcissus. Come on, boss [blowing kiss]

I have read all of the author's books, and this short, light and sweet article (although it seems to have a little bit of edge) really touched me.

Beautiful, highly recommended

Super super beautiful [love][love][love][love]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good looking! Good looking! Good looking! [Adoration][Adoration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

The author's plot is very interesting

Looks good, come on

Super beautiful, highly recommended.