I Can See Your Sins

The plot is pretty good, and the writing style is quite different, very much like the style of ancient novels published in ancient times. As soon as I read the beginning, I felt like my eyes were brightening. There are some bugs in the details of the plot in Chapter 8, and the scene transitions are too short. As a fast reader, I can easily skip it and then become confused. The part about the human traffickers and the hospital is a prelude to the protagonist joining the team. Is the author considering inserting it into the narrative or writing it separately?

From a short story, I personally feel that the subject matter is very novel, the plot is also good, and the first person is very immersive. The most important thing is that the villain is not brainless. I don't know if this is the first time for the author to write a long story. There are a lot of repeated sentences, but overall it is very acceptable 😄

It feels good, very deep, and the pace is relatively fast, but I think the description of the characters' emotions is a bit lacking. In the early stage, I felt that the protagonist group was helplessly tied together. Of course, in the later stage, it was shown that they were like family to each other, but it felt that there was no transition in the middle, and it was a bit fragmented. Overall, it is very good, come on, author!

Who knew that from the video to the short film, I found the sense of redemption in this book? It feels like my brain is about to open up when I read this book. Every reversal is in an unexpected place!!! Oh my God, how could there be such a masterpiece 🥰🥰[Admiration]

What did the hospital say? I don't understand.

I have a small request from the author, but I think there are too many commas. Although the reading was okay, when I was reading the novel, I felt like he was stumbling all the time and it was so uncomfortable [he was about to cry], like that kind of sudden pause. Everyone suddenly became nervous. Everyone looked out the window. I feel like it would be smoother without adding these commas! The article is very beautiful!!

So beautiful, so awesome, little couple 99 ❤️ [laughing] Jiang Chi: What should I do if my husband is always getting killed because he is a girl lover? Of course, follow immediately after starting a group. Yan Su: Wife... (Choking) Yan Si: Brother, sister-in-law... (Choking) Lin Wei: (Silence) 😅 Well, as long as you are happy. (If it's not CP, kneel down first. Sorry, I still love this book ❤️)

Your writing is great, author, and it matches all my fantasies. Maybe I'm a bit of a middle-schooler, but it's really good. However, I feel like there are a few people reading it. Is it my misunderstanding? But it's really good. Please update more. I'm giving you four letters because I'm afraid you'll be proud 👍

The plot is very good, I hope it doesn't end badly, keep up the good work.

I would like to make a suggestion, can you not copy the content at the end of the previous chapter to the next chapter? This is not a TV series and does not require review and reflection. Overall, it is okay, but in some parts of the description of psychology, the adjectives are repeated. It is okay to describe psychology, but I hope not to use the same adjective + the same description method all the time.