"I Can See Your Sins" is a short story novel of the same name. It is currently being rewritten. Thank you for your support.
[Mind Reading Detective + Two Male Protagonists + Justice Team]
My name is Jiang Chi, and I can see the labels of everyone's mental activities.
For example, the top of my boss's head is [Bald Anxiety], and the top of my goddess's head is [P Picture Master].
After the last human trafficker incident, Yan Su established the [Guardian Foundation] to provide help to families whose children have disappeared.
Unexpectedly, the Eternal Life Foundation did not disappear. Chen Guang's death was like a drop of water falling into the sea, without causing enough ripples.
This time, they made a comeback, but the devil is as good as the devil.
Reader comments
The plot is pretty good, and the writing style is quite different, very much like the style of ancient novels published in ancient times. As soon as I read the beginning, I felt like my eyes were brightening. There are some bugs in the details of the plot in Chapter 8, and the scene transitions are too short. As a fast reader, I can easily skip it and then become confused.
The part about the human traffickers and the hospital is a prelude to the protagonist joining the team. Is the author considering inserting it into the narrative or writing it separately?
From a short story, I personally feel that the subject matter is very novel, the plot is also good, and the first person is very immersive. The most important thing is that the villain is not brainless. I don't know if this is the first time for the author to write a long story. There are a lot of repeated sentences, but overall it is very acceptable [laughs]
It feels good, very deep, and the pace is relatively fast, but I think the description of the characters' emotions is a bit lacking. In the early stage, I felt that the protagonist group was helplessly tied together. Of course, in the later stage, it was shown that they were like family to each other, but it felt that there was no transition in the middle, and it was a bit fragmented. Overall, it is very good, come on, author!
What did the hospital say? I don't understand.
I have a small request from the author, but I think there are too many commas. Although the reading was okay, when I was reading the novel, I felt like he was stumbling all the time and it was so uncomfortable [he was about to cry], like that kind of sudden pause. Everyone suddenly became nervous. Everyone looked out the window. I feel like it would be smoother without adding these commas! The article is very beautiful! !
Who knew that from the video to the short film, I found the sense of redemption in this book? It feels like my brain is about to open up when I read this book. Every reversal is in an unexpected place! ! ! Oh my God, how could there be such a masterpiece [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
Your writing is great, author, and it matches all my fantasies. Maybe I'm a bit of a middle-schooler, but it's really good. However, I feel like there are a few people reading it. Is it my misunderstanding? But it's really good. Please update more. I'm giving you four letters because I'm afraid you'll be proud [Like]
So beautiful, so awesome, little couple 99 [love] [laughing]
Jiang Chi: What should I do if my husband is always getting killed because he is a girl lover? Of course, follow immediately after starting a group.
Yan Su: Wife... (Choking)
Yan Si: Brother, sister-in-law... (Choking)
Lin Wei: (Silence) 😅 Well, as long as you are happy.
(If it's not CP, kneel down first. Sorry, I still love this book [love])
The plot is very good, I hope it doesn't end badly, keep up the good work.
I would like to make a suggestion, can you not copy the content at the end of the previous chapter to the next chapter? This is not a TV series and does not require review and reflection. Overall, it is okay, but in some parts of the description of psychology, the adjectives are repeated. It is okay to describe psychology, but I hope not to use the same adjective + the same description method all the time.
I came to this book from a short story. The first part really attracted me. The character descriptions are very personal. I have only read the first part, and I am immediately hooked on this book. I will write a book review after reading the whole thing.
It's okay, but why can't I continue one chapter?
Later, Lin Wei's character was weird, and she felt a lot silent. Later, when I saw Zhou Mo typing code, it didn't feel like her style. Before, I thought the two of them would scold each other for not being nb while typing code together. Then they became more eager to win and wanted to compete with each other. If Zhou Mo lost to Lin Wei, he asked him to buy herself a Hatsune Miku figure. If Lin Wei lost, Zhou Mo asked Lin Wei to allow her smelly socks to exist [Thinking]
I hope Sanxiao will have a happy ending [Sending Hearts]
The author has a good rest and will update more [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
It's beautiful, very beautiful. I wonder if it's cp-free?
Although there are only more than 100 chapters, the content is very exciting. I don't know how to describe it. I give the author five stars! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
It's good to watch, the characters are all well-matched, and the plot is good and compact.
It would be nice if there were less descriptions when writing about psychology [face covering]
The author is so imaginative (*^ω^*)
The author writes very well, keep up the good work [Like]
Good looking! What a big idea! Reversal and reversal
It's super good-looking, suspenseful, imaginative, superpowers, and genetic modification. If you are interested in these, you can read this book. I guarantee you will fall in love with it😊
I like this book very much. The author's writing style is very good. It's just that he goes through it a little too quickly in some places, but overall it's very good. I wish the author better and better, and I will keep following the updates [laughing]
It's really good-looking, and my thinking is very clear. It's not the kind of hydrography posted in the video. It's really super good-looking and supports the main package (இωஇ)
I haven't finished reading it yet, but I hope it will make that roommate better in the end.
Awesome, good looking
I came here from a short article, so I'm not very good at evaluating it. Anyway, this book is super nice.
Very nice, maybe not the same as other books
Great author, how many chapters have you finished? The architect should be the final boss. Don't mention that there will be more after that.
It's still good, but why did the one who was always typing code suddenly change from Lin Wei to Zhou Mo? [What] Zhou Mo was very silent and elegant when he started typing code.
Klass is awesome, that is, I think I am reading it which is in the process of being refined. Chapters 7 and 8 are not up to par, but they are still shocking and delicious enough😏😍😘
The plot is pretty good, and the writing style is quite different, very much like the style of ancient novels published in ancient times. As soon as I read the beginning, I felt like my eyes were brightening. There are some bugs in the details of the plot in Chapter 8, and the scene transitions are too short. As a fast reader, I can easily skip it and then become confused. The part about the human traffickers and the hospital is a prelude to the protagonist joining the team. Is the author considering inserting it into the narrative or writing it separately?
From a short story, I personally feel that the subject matter is very novel, the plot is also good, and the first person is very immersive. The most important thing is that the villain is not brainless. I don't know if this is the first time for the author to write a long story. There are a lot of repeated sentences, but overall it is very acceptable [laughs]
It feels good, very deep, and the pace is relatively fast, but I think the description of the characters' emotions is a bit lacking. In the early stage, I felt that the protagonist group was helplessly tied together. Of course, in the later stage, it was shown that they were like family to each other, but it felt that there was no transition in the middle, and it was a bit fragmented. Overall, it is very good, come on, author!
What did the hospital say? I don't understand.
I have a small request from the author, but I think there are too many commas. Although the reading was okay, when I was reading the novel, I felt like he was stumbling all the time and it was so uncomfortable [he was about to cry], like that kind of sudden pause. Everyone suddenly became nervous. Everyone looked out the window. I feel like it would be smoother without adding these commas! The article is very beautiful! !
Who knew that from the video to the short film, I found the sense of redemption in this book? It feels like my brain is about to open up when I read this book. Every reversal is in an unexpected place! ! ! Oh my God, how could there be such a masterpiece [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]
Your writing is great, author, and it matches all my fantasies. Maybe I'm a bit of a middle-schooler, but it's really good. However, I feel like there are a few people reading it. Is it my misunderstanding? But it's really good. Please update more. I'm giving you four letters because I'm afraid you'll be proud [Like]
So beautiful, so awesome, little couple 99 [love] [laughing] Jiang Chi: What should I do if my husband is always getting killed because he is a girl lover? Of course, follow immediately after starting a group. Yan Su: Wife... (Choking) Yan Si: Brother, sister-in-law... (Choking) Lin Wei: (Silence) 😅 Well, as long as you are happy. (If it's not CP, kneel down first. Sorry, I still love this book [love])
The plot is very good, I hope it doesn't end badly, keep up the good work.
I would like to make a suggestion, can you not copy the content at the end of the previous chapter to the next chapter? This is not a TV series and does not require review and reflection. Overall, it is okay, but in some parts of the description of psychology, the adjectives are repeated. It is okay to describe psychology, but I hope not to use the same adjective + the same description method all the time.
I came to this book from a short story. The first part really attracted me. The character descriptions are very personal. I have only read the first part, and I am immediately hooked on this book. I will write a book review after reading the whole thing.
It's okay, but why can't I continue one chapter?
Later, Lin Wei's character was weird, and she felt a lot silent. Later, when I saw Zhou Mo typing code, it didn't feel like her style. Before, I thought the two of them would scold each other for not being nb while typing code together. Then they became more eager to win and wanted to compete with each other. If Zhou Mo lost to Lin Wei, he asked him to buy herself a Hatsune Miku figure. If Lin Wei lost, Zhou Mo asked Lin Wei to allow her smelly socks to exist [Thinking]
I hope Sanxiao will have a happy ending [Sending Hearts] The author has a good rest and will update more [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
It's beautiful, very beautiful. I wonder if it's cp-free?
Although there are only more than 100 chapters, the content is very exciting. I don't know how to describe it. I give the author five stars! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
It's good to watch, the characters are all well-matched, and the plot is good and compact.
It would be nice if there were less descriptions when writing about psychology [face covering]
The author is so imaginative (*^ω^*)
The author writes very well, keep up the good work [Like]
Good looking! What a big idea! Reversal and reversal
It's super good-looking, suspenseful, imaginative, superpowers, and genetic modification. If you are interested in these, you can read this book. I guarantee you will fall in love with it😊
I like this book very much. The author's writing style is very good. It's just that he goes through it a little too quickly in some places, but overall it's very good. I wish the author better and better, and I will keep following the updates [laughing]
It's really good-looking, and my thinking is very clear. It's not the kind of hydrography posted in the video. It's really super good-looking and supports the main package (இωஇ)
I haven't finished reading it yet, but I hope it will make that roommate better in the end. Awesome, good looking
I came here from a short article, so I'm not very good at evaluating it. Anyway, this book is super nice.
Very nice, maybe not the same as other books
Great author, how many chapters have you finished? The architect should be the final boss. Don't mention that there will be more after that.
It's still good, but why did the one who was always typing code suddenly change from Lin Wei to Zhou Mo? [What] Zhou Mo was very silent and elegant when he started typing code.
Klass is awesome, that is, I think I am reading it which is in the process of being refined. Chapters 7 and 8 are not up to par, but they are still shocking and delicious enough😏😍😘