When I Became Zhang Xiaofan

After reading thirty chapters, I really have no desire to continue reading. It's basically a second creation with the edge of Zhu Xian. It's completely different from the original work and is too far away from the original work. Tian Linger is gone, Tai Chi Xuan Qing Dao is gone, and the characters of the supporting characters are gone. The main supporting characters have basically all become NPCs, without any personality at all. The character design of the protagonist is even more flexible. He can practice his skills on the front foot and hit a black bamboo with a sword. On the back foot, he can't beat a mortal. After all, he is also a cultivator. There are several chapters in the beginning to pave the way for the development of his strength. When it comes to the actual battle, he fights against the five scum in the whole process, and there is no sense of expectation.

It's a mess, the beginning is too intellectual, and he wants to be stable and performative at the same time. Has Zhang Xiaofan become a performer? The time travel is not as good as the original work. I want to trick the pig's feet and press it desperately, just for the purpose of press.

It's better not to write it. The plot is too far-fetched. After reading the beginning, I don't know why Cangsong hates Zhang Xiaofan so much. It's just a bit baffling.

Why is there no daughter of his master?

It's a good book for hypnosis, but it made my head hurt when I read it.

It looks a bit depressing. So-so!

The front and back are not consistent. I feel that the author has been writing for a long time and the plot is not rounded out. However, there are still some parts that can be read. It has been a long time since I watched Zhu Xian 2nd Creation.

Messy

The writing is confusing, and the original plot that didn't happen appears casually. Do you have time for the Kuangshan part? Brother, please be careful.

It's a bit funny at the beginning, but I don't understand it at the end.