[In 2120, the holographic masterpiece "Miracle" swept the world. Han Zhiyan, a doctor who wanted to be a salted fish, opened it casually and revealed the only medical artifact in the server [Aria of Holy Light: Newborn Bud], and the name of the European Emperor resounded throughout the sky. ] [For the first time, the swordsman [Fengsuo Qianqiao], who is at the peak of his combat power, has issued an invitation to form a team. She smiled and talked about the conditions: "You can take me, but I will choose the equipment first."] [The moment the dungeon was cleared, the world announcement exploded again - they actually triggered a hidden love and bound an exclusive mark! ] [The whole world saw the mark of a doctor that belonged to her on the heart of the cold sword god, and went completely crazy. The fates of the Buddhist nanny Ouhuang and the number one sword god are closely connected.
The author is new and the introduction is incompetent...
Reader comments
I've read the first three chapters, and the writing is good, embodying the protagonist's super luck and the grand scene of grabbing monsters in the early stages of the game. But as for the male protagonist, there can be a male protagonist who struggles with the female protagonist. I also agree that a high-tech male protagonist can help the female protagonist, but I don't want the emotional line to be too blunt. At the same time, the biggest opponent of this kind of online game writing: the collapse of combat power, and I don't see any solution from the author now.
The male and female protagonists suddenly fell in love with each other. The female protagonist is lucky and has a coy personality. She plays games with her best friends and then there are no girlfriend scenes. The male protagonist doesn't talk much. In the early stage, she said she was afraid of the male protagonist and then suddenly emmm. The author is suitable for writing stories without emotional lines.
Author update soon
The author's soul returns.
𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌
The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles.
𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫
The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back.
𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠
The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory.
𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫
The soul is back. The soul is back.
Tao: Rebirth Mantra
The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. The heart of the curse: The Supreme Lord's decree will transcend your lonely soul. You can just recite these eight characters. If you can add: escape from the sea of suffering and reincarnate as an adult
The plot is very exciting, the writing is very good, the heroine is also intelligent, and the blessing of luck is very exciting. It will be updated very quickly.
I have learned to block the prologue, and I suggest the author to start the prologue. One scene after another, the whole curtain will be drawn.
It's pretty good to watch, but I feel like the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are a bit poorly written. I feel like I suddenly fell in love with it.
I can't help it anymore. The more I read, the more I get addicted. In fact, there were a few places where I felt uncomfortable watching it at the beginning. But I thought I would finish it first and see what happens next. I found that the more I read, the more addictive I became. Very well written! If there were no bad points at the beginning, it would be a really good book! !
The author is a newcomer. He is good at writing battle scenes, but not good at emotional dramas. There were some parts in the early stage that made me uncomfortable. However, the author made rapid progress and I enjoyed reading it later. The plot is also good. I have to praise the author for his greatness. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Yes, come on, author [Like]
Not bad, but most of them are games [thoughts]
The battle scenes are good. The author is really good at writing games. At this time, the plot connection is very smooth. But when there is no fighting, the ending of each chapter is a mess.
It's pretty good, come on
I really like this kind of team fighting
After reading it, record it
The book is very good, why is the rating not high?
This novel is too detailed, let's make a real-life side story
It doesn't feel too big, but it looks pretty.
It's really beautiful and the heroine is so European
I really like the heroine's luck. It's so good. If I had that kind of luck, I would be so lucky. I envy, envy, envy.
I really don't want to poke it, please update more, wow, urge me to update [eat melon] [full]
I've read the first three chapters, and the writing is good, embodying the protagonist's super luck and the grand scene of grabbing monsters in the early stages of the game. But as for the male protagonist, there can be a male protagonist who struggles with the female protagonist. I also agree that a high-tech male protagonist can help the female protagonist, but I don't want the emotional line to be too blunt. At the same time, the biggest opponent of this kind of online game writing: the collapse of combat power, and I don't see any solution from the author now.
The male and female protagonists suddenly fell in love with each other. The female protagonist is lucky and has a coy personality. She plays games with her best friends and then there are no girlfriend scenes. The male protagonist doesn't talk much. In the early stage, she said she was afraid of the male protagonist and then suddenly emmm. The author is suitable for writing stories without emotional lines.
Author update soon The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. The heart of the curse: The Supreme Lord's decree will transcend your lonely soul. You can just recite these eight characters. If you can add: escape from the sea of suffering and reincarnate as an adult
The plot is very exciting, the writing is very good, the heroine is also intelligent, and the blessing of luck is very exciting. It will be updated very quickly. I have learned to block the prologue, and I suggest the author to start the prologue. One scene after another, the whole curtain will be drawn.
It's pretty good to watch, but I feel like the emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are a bit poorly written. I feel like I suddenly fell in love with it.
I can't help it anymore. The more I read, the more I get addicted. In fact, there were a few places where I felt uncomfortable watching it at the beginning. But I thought I would finish it first and see what happens next. I found that the more I read, the more addictive I became. Very well written! If there were no bad points at the beginning, it would be a really good book! !
The author is a newcomer. He is good at writing battle scenes, but not good at emotional dramas. There were some parts in the early stage that made me uncomfortable. However, the author made rapid progress and I enjoyed reading it later. The plot is also good. I have to praise the author for his greatness. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
Yes, come on, author [Like]
Not bad, but most of them are games [thoughts]
The battle scenes are good. The author is really good at writing games. At this time, the plot connection is very smooth. But when there is no fighting, the ending of each chapter is a mess.
It's pretty good, come on
I really like this kind of team fighting
After reading it, record it
The book is very good, why is the rating not high?
This novel is too detailed, let's make a real-life side story
It doesn't feel too big, but it looks pretty.
It's really beautiful and the heroine is so European
I really like the heroine's luck. It's so good. If I had that kind of luck, I would be so lucky. I envy, envy, envy.
I really don't want to poke it, please update more, wow, urge me to update [eat melon] [full]