Little Girl Struggles in the 19Th Century

This article is the best derivative of a Western classic that I have come across. The protagonist has no prototype, the male protagonist is basically original, and most of the content is the author's idea. But the main line and logical content of the article are very clear. This is a relatively obvious heroine novel. What is rare is that the heroine is not swayed by love, but she is not an unreasonable person. She has her own desires, but she can control them well. Although this book is a career novel, some of its ambiguous plots are also very tense. People like me who like to watch big heroines can't stop laughing. Moreover, the author updates steadily about two or three articles a day. As far as I am concerned, I see that there are no clues now, but to clear up the clues for others, this article is a stock buying article in the early stage, and a male protagonist was decided later.

I voted for Mr. Holmes, it's already a novel, can't you think about it?

It's tied, it looks pretty good. No spoilers for Amway, the plot is set up appropriately, and I feel that people who have never read the original work can read it without any difficulty. The characters are basically not OOC, and the logic of the characters' behavior is very reasonable so far. Moreover, even the minor supporting characters are portrayed with changes in thoughts and emotions, and even a sense of growth. They are not shy about being sophisticated and tactful, and are full-dimensional and three-dimensional which is extremely rare in fan fiction. Enough to make jj. Regarding some plot suggestions, my personal opinion is that the author of the emotional line should follow his own ideas. The main thing is to write the plot of the rise of entrepreneurship. Watch the heroine's career rise step by step, personal status and family status. Maintaining the highlight of the protagonist is the most important. Of course, there are small setbacks that can reflect the personality charm of the protagonist (because so far, the author's overall plot arrangement is quite good. Don't let the paragraph comment affect the feel. But it's better to weigh it up. For example, consider writing lightning protection points at the beginning of the introduction and the first chapter. Of course, you can also write a tactful warning if you haven't thought about it. It is very important to declare in advance. In fact, you can also write it without removing the official version. Although it is just a background board, it is good to display the positioning and the audience clearly, at least the official version party will like it at first sight.

It's really good-looking. Although it's said to be set in the world of Pride and Prejudice, it feels like it borrows a world view. It's really good-looking. The heroine's character is also very good and the plot is smooth. I don't know why the rating is so low.

The writing is great. I was hesitant to read it when I first read it. The rating was only over 7 points. But I was really interested in this kind of subject matter and the author had a lot of code words, so I read it. After reading it, I found that it is really good. There is nothing terrible about it. The heroine is not a love-minded person. She ends it when she needs to. She is also very organized in everything she does and the writing flows. Chang, the overall writing style is relatively down-to-earth, and there is no mention of deliberately exaggerating the depth. The problem with many such writings is that they deliberately think that they can change the general environment at that time without relevant conditions. In fact, they do not solve the problem. It is just that the author thought it was possible at the beginning. This book is just right. I highly recommend it [Like][Like][Like]

Mary Sue's time travel history carries a lot of modern skills, but the background is changed to 19th-century England. Frankly speaking, it is quite interesting at the beginning. Although the writing is a bit sluggish in many cases, the heroine and her parents do not want to rely on marriage, male-female ambiguity, etc., And focus on pursuing a career and working hard to improve their class. Although it is also very suave, it must be more enjoyable to read. Although the male protagonist Samuel soon appeared and the interaction was pretty good, I, a person who likes to read about career stories, didn't find it objectionable. But as more and more male characters appeared later, every male who was slightly similar had a crush on the heroine. At first, there was not much description space, and I glanced at it and thought it was not there. Later, there were more and more descriptions of "everyone loves Mary Sue". I don't know whether it was the author's outline or the influence of the reviews. An additional emotional line was added, and a male protagonist, Sherlock Holmes, was added (I was really inspired by this setting)... I started reading the comments with the thought that the ambiguous interaction with Sherlock Holmes would be a fluke in these two or three chapters, and then I saw a screenshot of the author's reply in the comment area, saying that he would write two love lines, one for love and one for happiness. I really felt like I was struck by lightning. I really admired such a big thunder. Why didn't you arrange it in advance? Obviously the introduction is about writing about the history of women's struggle instead of romance, but the main text spends a lot of space on how everyone loves the heroine. This doesn't match the introduction, right? It is recommended that the author change the introduction and mark 1v2 in advance, otherwise I believe there will be many people like me who are frustrated by the plot and will be tempted to write negative reviews. I actually really want to give it three stars, but forget it...

Give Samuel a thumbs up, he really smells like the fermented chocolate from the aqua toilet next door.

I really like Pride and Prejudice, but most of the fanfics focus on Darcy, so I finally found a different one. The only flaw is that the author's language style is not very Western.

It's good to watch, and the plot is pretty good. I like all the characters that have appeared so far, but I still like Sherlock Holmes more. I can't help it, this surname is so attractive [I learned it]

It's a very interesting, well-written and logical fanfic, with good character development and plot advancement! At present, we see that Samuel is being forced to a dead end, and Holmes is about to appear [laughing] Although everyone likes Sherlock Holmes, I really can't see any sparks between the heroine and him. Being with him is not tiring enough. I guess everything I do will be scrutinized, and his family seems to have more real power than Samuel's family. He has not revealed his thoughts, which is very suspenseful. I want to support a new male protagonist [sending my heart] I have a little suggestion. If there are new collaborators later and they are male, can you not write something that has a vague meaning towards the heroine? Is it better to just appreciate the talent and courage of the heroine? In fact, Sherlock Holmes is a very good collaborator, but he has changed [almost crying]. You can also write about female collaborators. I feel that in the 19th century, there was definitely no shortage of awakened ladies who were ambitious and out to do things.

Vote for Sherlock Holmes, who is more mature, stable, respects the heroine as an equal and treats the heroine as an independent individual. It is really rare to meet a man like this in this era, and Samuel is obviously dwarfed by him.

The plot is actually very good and can be watched smoothly... The heroine is awesome, has a great career, and has a very charming personality. The environment is relatively realistic, so when a new partner pops up, the heroine basically has to spend some effort to prove herself... It is indeed reasonable. This is also the only way to fight for her own power, and the heroine can also handle it well. But I feel very tired... Especially when it comes to the emotional line. The original male protagonist has a lot of weird family members, which is very annoying... Holmes was originally very good, and it was normal to see him having disputes and conflicts with the female protagonist... But a new person appeared in the conflict and chased the female protagonist with questions and doubts... It was too strenuous. People's pride and prejudice are the male and female protagonists. This female protagonist has to deal with the pride and prejudice of almost everyone... Although I understand that this was the case in that era, the author actually did a good job in portraying the heroine, and the heroine almost always finds a place for herself... But it still feels very depressing. Moreover, the heroine is a very rational and profit-oriented person. In fact, I think this is a very good quality. Generally strong people have this change in thinking... But readers (mainly me) are not, so every time I see the heroine being questioned, misunderstood, and involved in messy things, it is very annoying. It's not a good read, but it's still a good book. You may have to read it intermittently.

I don't know which Mr. Holmes it is here. I'm looking forward to it. It's better to know Mr. Holmes, whom we met not long ago, than Samuel. He knows the heroine's character [eating melon]

Can't find meal replacement of the same type. What attracts me most is the character of the heroine, who is beautiful, intelligent, and always sober and independent. Regarding the original work, I am not discrediting anyone, and it is not OOC. In fact, I hesitated when I clicked in because of the rating, but the author conquered me with his ingenious plot ideas and wonderful writing style (ps: I really like the description of some details of life in the Regency period, and it feels like I am personally there. This is also a great pleasure of reading novels) [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

In fact, I rarely read novels with a Tomato score of 8 or below, because some books have low ratings for no reason, but the reviews under the introduction were very good, so I tried to read them. I have a lot of books on my bookshelf, and I couldn't stand a few books that I couldn't stand after reading half of them. It's hard to say whether they were broken or something. But this book has nothing interesting so far. I like the character of the heroine very much, and the plot is not trivial. My wife did not treat the readers as fools when she wrote the article, which is great! I don't really like writing reviews. I usually read the article silently and don't like to quit directly. However, this novel is so beautiful but the rating is not high, so I might as well leave a review to encourage it! I hope my wife will continue to work hard! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's very interesting. I don't know why the rating is low, but I've been following it. It's really better than some of the ones I've seen that have a rating of 9 or more. She's not a delicate and dependent kind of independent heroine. You must stick to it.

It's super, super, super good to watch. There are no basic novels that are as good as this one. I stayed up all night reading it. I'm still not satisfied. Both the plot and the characters are great.

It's a very good book. The app recommended it to me for three or four days but I didn't read it. Today I opened it casually and couldn't help myself. The content is not a regular female video about a strong woman and a strong man. There is no expression of pretending to be weak, cowardly or charming, and there is no youthful pain of recalling the past life all the time. This is the story of a mature woman who continued to develop and weave a self-centered interest network in the 19th century when the start was not too bad. The environment could not give her enough security, but she could already bring herself a sense of security. She loves herself, her family, and her relatives and friends. She is measured, not blindly obedient, and has a sense of being alive. She has met the right friends, and now she has an official strategic partner with whom we can go on together.

Although I haven't finished reading it, combined with the comment section, I just want the heroine to have a simple and happy married life (or even not). Daily life is full of calculations and weighing the pros and cons. Marriage allows another person to enter your intimate relationship/private space, and you have to constantly fend off hidden arrows while sleeping at night. That is too tiring. Great author! Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh role role role in writing love line, buys the stock and bought something I like! ! !

It's a really great book, but why is it rated so low? The heroine Isabella is really what I ideally want to be. She is calm and rational, smart and sober. The author's writing style is also improving. You can clearly see the author's thinking. I feel that if it were not limited by fan fiction, this book would really deserve a high score and be published. There are many contents in it that are worth thinking about for us girls. The shortcoming is that the plot progress is a bit slow. Maybe I am impatient, but the author only writes according to her own ideas, and there is too little else! Want more!

This is the best "Pride and Prejudice" fanfic I've seen so far. The heroine no longer revolves around the original character Darcy, and many new characters have been developed. Each character's image is three-dimensional and full of emotions. The dialogue is exquisite, the language is fluent, the story is eloquent, and the logic is strong. It makes people want to read on patiently. The heroine has very upright views, and her emotions are delicate and transparent without being abrupt. It's a very good novel

It is a very good book. Although it is a fanfic, it does not closely follow the story line of the original work. Instead, it selects the main characters and background of the original work. The author uses his own characters to tell a brand new story. The rhythm is compact, the logic is clear, the writing is fluent, and there is a degree of relaxation. It's better than many stories rated 9 or above, but the current rating is too low.

I was reading Haixi's book before, but I hadn't noticed that the author had just opened this new book. I clicked in to read it as recommended on the homepage. It seemed very interesting. Now I suddenly found out that it was the same author. Sure enough, people will fall in love with the same author [Blow kiss]

It stands out among other fans of the same genre. The heroine's career line is well established, she has not split her CP, and she is still buying stocks. It can be seen that the author has checked a lot of information very carefully, but the dialogue between these more professional characters can be made more natural, otherwise it will easily feel like popular science.

This novel is really excellent. The plot is compact, the narration is eloquent, and the characters' personalities are vivid and vivid. It's a rare high-quality Western fan novel! ! ! The teacher's updates are very stable, and they are constantly updated during the New Year. It makes me so happy (￣▽￣) and I tweet it! ! ! Come on, teacher! !

Although the reality faced by the heroine when she was weak in the early stage is a bit irritating, it is the reality. When describing the protagonist's family in the original book, she did not want her to care about these relatives. However, this book was a point of attraction in the early stage. The more I read, the more focused I am on the protagonist. The career and love lines are well developed. The more I read, the more enjoyable I follow it every day. Big cheers for the author

The author's novel is based on the famous 19th-century European novel Pride and Prejudice, but it is very different from previous Pride and Prejudice fan fiction. It breaks away from the main line of the novel and goes for a more macro narrative of 19th-century Europe. It talks about the current plight of women and their struggles. The heroine is smart and rational, and the layers are laid out, but the interspersed plots are a bit more exciting. It's logical and good-looking. It's obvious that the author wrote it after careful consideration. The emotions between the heroine and the hero are reasonable and evenly matched emotionally. It's not love at first sight, mindless love, or a bloody Korean drama. It's really the top one among the Pride and Prejudice fanfics I've ever read. I don't know why the rating is not high. It's a pity. It is recommended that the copywriting be more attractive and more people will read it.

After re-evaluating it, the score for the first 50 chapters is about 8, and as it gets better it can reach over 9. The career line, aristocratic line and political line are relatively solid, which I like better. In the first 50 chapters, all kinds of monsters, ghosts, snakes, gods, wives, and aunts came over and slapped her in the face quite intensively, which made my head feel a little buzzing. After being diluted by the strong business line, the look and feel will be much better.

Already tied, the heroine is clear-headed, has a clear purpose, focuses on her career in the early stage, and the supporting characters have clear and three-dimensional images. The plot development is also well controlled. If the level can be maintained or chapters can be written at a higher level, the future will be promising. [Like][Like][Like]

It's super good-looking. Although the heroine's behavior in some plots is a bit too "kind", the intelligence and vision she shows as a time traveler are still tenable. I look forward to it.