A Young Woman’s Struggle in the 19Th Century

This article is the best derivative of a Western classic that I have come across. The protagonist has no prototype, the male protagonist is basically original, and most of the content is the author's idea. But the main line and logical content of the article are very clear. This is a relatively obvious heroine novel. What is rare is that the heroine is not swayed by love, but she is not an unreasonable person. She has her own desires, but she can control them well. Although this book is a career novel, some of its ambiguous plots are also very tense. People like me who like to watch big heroines can't stop laughing. Moreover, the author updates steadily about two or three articles a day. As far as I am concerned, I see that there are no clues now, but to clear up the clues for others, this article is a stock buying article in the early stage, and a male protagonist was decided later.

I voted for Mr. Holmes, it's already a novel, can't you think about it?

It's tied, it looks pretty good. No spoilers for Amway, the plot is set up appropriately, and I feel that people who have never read the original work can read it without any difficulty. The characters are basically not OOC, and the logic of the characters' behavior is very reasonable so far. Moreover, even the minor supporting characters are portrayed with changes in thoughts and emotions, and even a sense of growth. They are not shy about being sophisticated and tactful, and are full-dimensional and three-dimensional which is extremely rare in fan fiction. Enough to make jj. Regarding some plot suggestions, my personal opinion is that the author of the emotional line should follow his own ideas. The main thing is to write the plot of the rise of entrepreneurship. Watch the heroine's career rise step by step, personal status and family status. Maintaining the highlight of the protagonist is the most important. Of course, there are small setbacks that can reflect the personality charm of the protagonist (because so far, the author's overall plot arrangement is quite good. Don't let the paragraph comment affect the feel. But it's better to weigh it up. For example, consider writing lightning protection points at the beginning of the introduction and the first chapter. Of course, you can also write a tactful warning if you haven't thought about it. It is very important to declare in advance. In fact, you can also write it without removing the official version. Although it is just a background board, it is good to display the positioning and the audience clearly, at least the official version party will like it at first sight.

It's really good-looking. Although it's said to be set in the world of Pride and Prejudice, it feels like it borrows a world view. It's really good-looking. The heroine's character is also very good and the plot is smooth. I don't know why the rating is so low.

Mary Sue's time travel history carries a lot of modern skills, but the background is changed to 19th-century England. Frankly speaking, it is quite interesting at the beginning. Although the writing is a bit sluggish in many cases, the heroine and her parents do not want to rely on marriage, male-female ambiguity, etc., And focus on pursuing a career and working hard to improve their class. Although it is also very suave, it must be more enjoyable to read. Although the male protagonist Samuel soon appeared and the interaction was pretty good, I, a person who likes to read about career stories, didn't find it objectionable. But as more and more male characters appeared later, every male who was slightly similar had a crush on the heroine. At first, there was not much description space, and I glanced at it and thought it was not there. Later, there were more and more descriptions of "everyone loves Mary Sue". I don't know whether it was the author's outline or the influence of the reviews. An additional emotional line was added, and a male protagonist, Sherlock Holmes, was added (I was really inspired by this setting)... I started reading the comments with the thought that the ambiguous interaction with Sherlock Holmes would be a fluke in these two or three chapters, and then I saw a screenshot of the author's reply in the comment area, saying that he would write two love lines, one for love and one for happiness. I really felt like I was struck by lightning. I really admired such a big thunder. Why didn't you arrange it in advance? Obviously the introduction is about writing about the history of women's struggle instead of romance, but the main text spends a lot of space on how everyone loves the heroine. This doesn't match the introduction, right? It is recommended that the author change the introduction and mark 1v2 in advance, otherwise I believe there will be many people like me who are frustrated by the plot and will be tempted to write negative reviews. I actually really want to give it three stars, but forget it...

The writing is great. I was hesitant to read it when I first read it. The rating was only over 7 points. But I was really interested in this kind of subject matter and the author had a lot of code words, so I read it. After reading it, I found that it is really good. There is nothing terrible about it. The heroine is not a love-minded person. She ends it when she needs to. She is also very organized in everything she does and the writing flows. Chang, the overall writing style is relatively down-to-earth, and there is no mention of deliberately exaggerating the depth. The problem with many such writings is that they deliberately think that they can change the general environment at that time without relevant conditions. In fact, they do not solve the problem. It is just that the author thought it was possible at the beginning. This book is just right. I highly recommend it [Like][Like][Like]

It's a very interesting, well-written and logical fanfic, with good character development and plot advancement! At present, we see that Samuel is being forced to a dead end, and Holmes is about to appear [laughing] Although everyone likes Sherlock Holmes, I really can't see any sparks between the heroine and him. Being with him is not tiring enough. I guess everything I do will be scrutinized, and his family seems to have more real power than Samuel's family. He has not revealed his thoughts, which is very suspenseful. I want to support a new male protagonist [sending my heart] I have a little suggestion. If there are new collaborators later and they are male, can you not write something that has a vague meaning towards the heroine? Is it better to just appreciate the talent and courage of the heroine? In fact, Sherlock Holmes is a very good collaborator, but he has changed [almost crying]. You can also write about female collaborators. I feel that in the 19th century, there was definitely no shortage of awakened ladies who were ambitious and out to do things.

It's good to watch, and the plot is pretty good. I like all the characters that have appeared so far, but I still like Sherlock Holmes more. I can't help it, this surname is so attractive [I learned it]

I really like Pride and Prejudice, but most of the fanfics focus on Darcy, so I finally found a different one. The only flaw is that the author's language style is not very Western.

Give Samuel a thumbs up, he really smells like the fermented chocolate from the aqua toilet next door.