Quickly Wear: Let Long Aotian Be Fascinated by Me

It's really beautiful! Especially the first world, although there is a bit of sourness in the middle, the emotional transition is really amazing! At first, I just used data to record feelings for the task, but eventually I got stuck in it, and then I realized that feelings cannot be measured by data. After all, there are many uncertainties in feelings. It's a little sad and happy, a little sad and happy, this sour and astringent feeling that turns sweet at the end is just right.

It's okay, but it may not be too cold under control, and the strategy I receive is actually not in line with the fishing and teasing aspects, and is a serious pursuit of attack (in the early stage of the first world, it may still be fishing and teasing, but after that, it is purely about actively pursuing the strategy) The second world is also always pursuing, and attacking is not considered self-defeating (in my case, self-defeating should be that there is no trace of being teased, and attacking spontaneously falls in love). In fact, being pursued is very obvious. Compared with the word flirting, being pursued is more like chasing someone, and then attacking, temper The writing is more childish and the temper suddenly rises. Whether it is the first world or the second world, I don't know why it is the description. I feel that Gong's writing is not very pleasing. The temper of the second world is also a bit coquettish. I feel that Gong is nothing like Long Aotian. The reading sense is roughly like this. If you come in because the introduction says that you are good at teasing and attacking yourself, it will not be very friendly.

The teacher's emotional lines are so well written ~ I'm just very curious about whether Hanghang has any nostalgia for the previous world after ending a world... The teacher's writing of the first world is so good that I can't forget the existence of Lin Feng [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] I also asked quietly, is it a slice? The whole book looks like the process of letting Hanghang learn emotions. I'm curious about Hanghang's life before... How to create his current character [full] [full] [full] Teacher, come on [love] [love] [love]

I think I can also write book reviews to myself. I like each of my characters, whether they are protagonists or supporting characters, especially Tan Yunhang. Each of them was created by me after careful consideration. I will read everyone's opinions and respond seriously. I will continue to work hard, thank you all.

The plot is very interesting, and I love the characters, especially Shou [heartfelt], but the only reason may be my own fault. I am relatively controlled, and I particularly like sweet stories. I always feel that I am being abused in every aspect, and it feels a bit sadistic (I always feel that I am suffering, and the hurt I have received is relatively large) ᵕ᷄≀ ̠ᵕ᷅. In fact, there is one thing that can avoid lightning. For example, it is not very sweet, but it is still a bit sad. What I like to see most every time are the ones that are particularly sweet after the abuse, but at that time I feel distressed by the abuse, and it is a bit uncomfortable. [I really hope there will be less abuse and more sweetness] I really hope that Shou will really understand in the future. After loving the other person sincerely, everything will be sweet. If it weren't for Shou's character, he is so in love that he really wouldn't consider reading it no matter how cruel it is [face covering]

If I have to say it, I think this book is very interesting. However, the characters in one world are not well established. But the other worlds are quite interesting. Feelings are two-way. It is unfair for one person to give his sincere love while the other person does not give his sincere love. Tan Yunhang is still great, I love this character very much.

Well written 🥺, this delicate description makes people feel fully immersed (◍•ᴗ•◍). Although the first world is a little cold war, it is still sweet. You can also clearly feel the changes in Yun Yun, from completing the original task to slowly melting away later. The clumsy but sincere expression 🥰, the author is also a genius of creativity [blowing kiss], come on

This author is really good. I feel like I will read all the comments. He is a very gentle person and the writing is super good. Although some people may say that the image of the cold special assistant has collapsed, but I think Xiao Tan is not a machine, he is also a human being. Although he is very ambitious, he is not without emotion. I really, really like this article. The author is very gentle, very gentle, very gentle, very gentle, very gentle. I really like it.

Do you know the author? [Almost crying] [Almost crying] The introduction at the beginning is so attractive. The most efficient way is to make him fall in love with me. This sentence is really charming. When I first read it, I was still wondering why the introduction should be clearly changed. Now I understand. I hope the author can consider writing about this aspect in the future. I really want to watch it [crazy] [crazy] [crazy]

The author's writing style is remarkable, his description of emotions is very delicate, and it is very readable. The following is my personal view of the first world: In the first world, from my personal point of view, the teacher may want to write a two-way redemption process, but the emotional description of Shou is much greater than that of Gong. Especially after Shou's observation notes were discovered by Gong, I deeply felt Shou's pain, but I think the impact on Gong was very small. The anger between Gong and Shou is too great. Personally, I think it can increase the speculation about whether Gong and Shou have difficulties, especially when others say that Shou is "much better than the gloomy Tan Yunhang with unknown origins." His first reaction is not that Shou has helped him a lot and whether he has necessary difficulties. Shou did deceive him, but the help he received was tangible. It made people feel that he was ungrateful.

The writing is good and the emotions are delicate. The protagonist in each world has learned a little bit about how to use sincerity, but in the new world, this feature is not obvious, or there is no focus on showing it. The protagonist still does not know how to use sincerity, or only understands the surface, which leads to emotional difficulties. People It will change little by little, and you will understand it little by little. There will be a process, but I don't have a good grasp of this degree. As a result, people who are not emotionally delicate will misunderstand what I express (ahem, can this be said), so I can only try my best to explain. The article is really good, and misunderstanding is really inevitable! After reading it, I also read a lot of reviews and comments. I feel that there should be a problem at this point. Later, I can guide the protagonist little by little to understand what true sincerity is and how to deal with it. Well, my expression skills are not very good. I don't know if you can understand what I am talking about, haha. All in all, all in all, the writing is really good. I have been short of books for a while, and I finally found another book that I can follow. Don't give up. We will slowly correct the bad things. I support you! (If I keep whispering, I feel very lucky. All of them are watching carefully, but half of them are people who don't understand it well. In the end, they posted some slanderous words, and then lowered the rating. I am heartbroken.) (Note, I didn't mention anyone who seriously commented and pointed out problems.) (Finally, if the above content makes you feel uncomfortable, please come and scold me. It is all your own thoughts and has nothing to do with the author of this book. If you scold them for this, then you are really li ji, bi shi you.)

Watching the various confrontations between Hanghang and the male protagonist, from being cold and ruthless at the beginning to becoming more and more humane later on, the desolate and barren heart gradually bloomed with flowers, as if I saw a seed slowly sprouting and blooming. Recommended, I hope you can see the author's much better works [shy]

This book is really great. The author is great! The protagonist's personality and characteristics. The characters in each world are really delicate. The emotions in the middle are also very good. Ahhhhhh. It's great. As a book lover, it's really great! Ahhhhhhhhh

The author really writes well, especially the emotional pull between two people and some psychological descriptions, especially the second world, which feels very much like a psychiatrist and his patient. The two people are always redeeming each other. . I was originally attracted to Long Aotian because of the explanation, but later I was attracted by the plot and completely forgot about the label Long Aotian. Although the author sometimes reminds me, I just get immersed in the plot and completely forget about Long Aotian [shy]. Two people are good in every world. From the beginning, Tan Yunhang felt like a loser, and now he is a very good baby. I hope the two of you can stay this happy forever. I don't know why the author hasn't updated it for a long time. Maybe something happened, but of course I still hope that nature can continue to update without affecting itself. 🥺I hope the author can be happy every day and everything goes well.

It's not bad, it's pretty good-looking. The early stage of the first world is very good-looking, very engaging, and very immersive. If the whole book can maintain the rhythm of the early and middle stages of the first world, it will definitely become a god. Now, in fact, the first world felt a bit weak and weak in the later stages, not to mention that the second world ended in just a few chapters. I've only watched the first world, the author, try your best to find out your feelings.

It's very interesting, and the writing is good. The emotional part is very good if you read it as a unit article, but it's a little weird if you read it as a quick travel story. I have just finished reading the forensic chapter and personally feel that "Hang"'s personal line in the first few worlds is a bit weird (not complete, but I can't think of a more suitable word). The forensic chapter mentions that "Hang" understands the purpose of the system task "Love one person for life" to a certain extent (I can't think of a better word), but in fact, neither the same discipline chapter, the entertainment circle chapter nor the forensic chapter describe "Hang"'s thoughts on this matter. To put it simply, the fellow chapter describes the calculation process and a little psychological description of "voyage" in detail, and then the entertainment circle chapter has no insights and everything goes with the flow. When the forensic chapter starts to write calculations and subsequent insights, it feels like the order is reversed. In terms of writing method, it is more suitable to follow the forensic chapter and then the entertainment chapter, which will be more smooth. Of course, the above is just a personal feeling. The story is a good one, and I hope it can be updated steadily in the future.

After reading the introduction of this book, the characters are novel and I am interested in it. After reading the first few worlds, they were good but there were some minor flaws. After completing each world, Shou Bao was misunderstood by Gong Bao. After the misunderstanding, Shou Bao ran away. I'm going to tell you my own opinion and see if it can be of any help to the author. From the previous to the trainer, there are almost similar misunderstandings. I think the character design is novel and the plot is also good. There are just some minor flaws in the emotional arrangement. The second world is really good and it really has a sense of redemption. It may feel out of subject, but it really fits the character. The Shou Bao is really great. Slowly guide the Gong Bao and let him accept it. If you are a novice, the author's writing is already great. If there is an emotional pull between two people, it is better to avoid misunderstanding or to be more natural. Seeing that there was a situation where Gong Bao was forced to misunderstand and then both parties escaped, the pull is a bit unnatural, similar to two people pulling together forcefully. My vocabulary is shallow and if it's hard to understand, just treat it as a review and give it a good review. In summary, the previous worlds have repetitive routines, and the characters in the small worlds have been greatly filled in, so that there will be no collisions, and it will increase the desire to read more. The latest world looks pretty good, so I will continue to play. Thank you for reading so many words.

Much like a long stream of water, when you look at it, your heart is sometimes sweet; sometimes bitter; sometimes excited. This is an emotion that I cannot describe in words. This is a love that is sometimes unspeakable but silent, just like the details in life... (I only finished the first world in my time. I like it very much. I hope the author will work hard~)

It's a very good book to read. The author's writing style has been improving and there are no surprises. The character of the protagonist is very special, and it's a bit like AI intelligence gradually possessing human emotions. The system cats are also super cute [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] I am the kind of person who reads the article silently and doesn't comment much. Dear author, you must insist on it [Blow kiss] [Flow kiss] [Flow kiss]

Watch it well, watch it well, especially the first world, which is like a white moonlight, and the description of the protagonist's emotions is very delicate. The same goes for the next few worlds, which look great! Great work, can't wait to see what happens next!

I didn't want to read it because of the low rating, but after reading it, I found that the writing is very good. Although there are some flaws in some places, the author is making progress little by little. It's difficult for everyone to agree with me about the negative reviews. This book is very well-written, so don't let it sink in just because of the rating.

I was super disappointed at first. I wanted to read One Sided Fall Control from the beginning, and I came in because of the introduction. But I think the author is very powerful. Even if what he wrote is different from the introduction, I was still attracted to it. Really, the writing is really good, I highly recommend it! As a student, I won't lie to you [Sending my heart]

The writing is very good, and the characters of Shou were not changed abruptly for the sake of the plot. [Adoration] The early stage was recorded like a small machine.

Super, super, super, super, invincible. The author's description of emotions is super delicate. It's really beautiful. I hope more people can see it. It's just that there are too few of them now. It's not enough. I hope the author will make more updates. It's really good.

Ahhhh! It's really good-looking [Shy] Teacher, come on! The characters are very interesting, and the plot has a long-lasting and comfortable feeling, mixed with a little bit of sourness. The young couple just want to be happy [Sending my heart] (Can the teacher add a few more chapters?)

I just finished watching the first world and can't wait to rate it. I really never watch sadistic movies. 🥹I cried while watching it and I lost half a pack of paper🥹It's really good, but people who watch it are betting on it. When I saw that the author said that I would start watching the fifth world but couldn't bear to leave the first four worlds, I had snot and tears. It's really good! ! ! Big cheers for the author [love] [love] [love]

It's good-looking, but I was controlled [face-covering] and it didn't quite meet my expectations. Emmm, it felt a bit abusive to the protagonist [face-covering]

I just finished reading the second Small World, but I really want to say that the second Small World is really better written than the first Small World. In short, it feels like there has been a lot of progress, and the emotional descriptions are much more delicate, without too many fancy descriptions. Although some book friends may have ambiguities about the title of The Second Small World and the entire book, I would like to say that this is really a big improvement, and I also hope that the author can continue to bring better works.

It's really beautiful! ! ! Five-star praise~[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Love] You won't lose money by investing in the shares. It's really sweet and reassuring~ [Love] Come on! Looking forward to more planes, come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on come on! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's really rare to see a main story that feels so good now. Oh my God, it's like a drug. The more I watch it, the more addictive it becomes. Every aspect is so good to watch. Once you get this good point, you'll never look back.