Magical Girl: She Has a Grudge, but Becomes More and More Clingy the More She Nurtures Her?

The writing is quite touching. At first, the protagonist thought she was a cold and rational elder sister, but she turned out to be a little blockhead [face covering]. In fact, I quite like this one. From the current situation, I feel that there may be a possibility of a knife protagonist, and I can look forward to a plot that will explode the vest in the future. I hope I won't stop updating [laughing] Seeing now, let me make a complaint, author, how do you manage to update twice a day without breaking out? Do you know how heartbroken I am when I see it? ! Now that I'm done complaining, let's talk about my feelings after watching it so far. It's like the feeling of powerlessness you feel when you first thought you were eating ordinary Malatang, but found it was very delicious and started eating it every day, only to find out in the end that it was because of the added ice. It was so weird to watch when Jiang Cheng and Xiao Su were crazy about flga before the conflict broke out [facepalm]. In the middle, Jiang Cheng was bullied by the world and rejected by the people he liked. On the contrary, only Xia Ying, who hated the agency, believed in her (although it was also the fault of An Lu, a coward, for not clarifying her intentions). The feeling of powerlessness was so real, and it was so exciting for the wife chasing after her. Next is the meeting to criticize Anlu😡, fw Anlu, the Shunfeng game can be like this😡, what can you do with Xiao Su if you take the initiative? ! 😡How dare you teach Xiao Su how to chase Jiang Cheng? Can you reflect on what you have done? ! ! Fw Anlu😡

After reading it, I didn't know what to say. I haven't felt lost for a long time... This book is absolutely high-quality, and the characters are vividly imagined, which left a deep memory for me. The plot is sweet in the early stage, bitter in the middle stage, and bitter-sweet in the later stage. The emotions are Sydney, and there are not too many unreasonable elements. Although there are some cases where I don't open my mouth, it is basically reasonable and consistent with the character. It is convincing. The author's writing has improved a lot compared to the previous book. I still feel reluctant to leave after reading it. However, the ending is a bit rushed, and there are many things that can be explained. If you don't believe me, it is not a loss to invest in.

I am also a bookworm, and I highly recommend it to those who like to read magical girl themes. The tug-of-war and love-hate relationship between Yue Rin and Lao Cheng really impressed me! The supporting characters are also very vivid and vivid, and every character can be related to the plot, especially the plot where Yue Rin discovers that Lao Cheng is a magical girl. I cried to death and felt so distressed! Woohoo, but now Xiao Yue Rin has started chasing his wife. Xiao Chengcheng's arrogant look makes people laugh! Looking forward to the follow-up plot. The author's writing style and wild imagination are really too strong. I'm already twisting into maggots on the bed. I really want to lock the author in a small dark room day and night and train her into a code girl [Dark and Twisted Crawl]

There are actually a lot of poisonous points, but most of them are bearable. It's a very interesting book. First, emotional arousal, this is a major problem. Even after watching the ending, I feel that Jiang Cheng's injustice is greater, not balanced enough, and some of the emotional changes are too abrupt. In addition, the related climaxes and exciting points can actually be more detailed and extreme, such as the collapse of the protagonist and Su's pain. Second, logic and rationality, to a large extent, give up some rationality for the sake of content. For example, a country's mobilization in the face of extreme threats is extremely terrifying, but it is not written out. The mental illness and mental illness of the protagonist in the article obviously cannot be cured by releasing it. Is there no clear transition from extreme to calm? Third, the world view. This may be a word count issue. This article focuses on describing the emotions of the protagonist, but the related world view is extremely vague, and the special features of this world are not reflected from different people. Generally speaking, the poisonous spots are not very painful, and most of them can be tolerated, which is actually relatively rare in Persimmon. Although the Wife Chasing Crematorium is not enough to relieve the anger, it can still bring a lot of attractions. Finally, I wish the author to write his most satisfying work. "Excellent work of inferior quality"

This type is indeed rare within the framework of magical girls. There are some foreshadowings for the emergence of conflicts. And as the attitude of the heroine's rescue of Su is not explained in words but expressed in actions (such as the airplane scene), it is obvious that the character is more three-dimensional. On the one hand, the resentment of the heroine's loss of control and causing her sister's accident is also grateful for helping herself (a bit twisted). This kind of contradiction. So when does it fall off the horse's lips [crazy] [crazy] First of all, congratulations on finishing the book. The later stage was too bland, changing from a simple harmonic motion with ups and downs of emotions to a linear function (?). The ending was too rushed, but overall it was good. (Minor spoilers below) It feels like there are still many places that have not been told, including Meimei's family; the origin of lust; Jiang's past, that is, Xia Weiwan's stories. Lan Duo asked Su to ask Jiang about those stories, but they were not told at the end. The only dissatisfied part of the whole story is the ending. After successfully chasing my wife, I went straight to the main plot leading to the ending without much progress. The twists and turns are completely a straight line. There is no foreshadowing or ups and downs like at the beginning.

The emotional description is delicate, the two heroines are very easy to talk to each other, the main plot is interesting, and the plot is clever. The two are currently in the quarrel stage. I hope they will not forgive each other and let themselves go until the point of no return.

A superb novel, the full text has an online logic and IQ, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the characters have their own characteristics, some are exciting and some are sadistic. The chapters of Black Kite's transformation into a witch really hit my taste and resonated with my emotions. My whole body and mind was involved in the emotional transformation of Black Kite's despair and laziness after being betrayed and abandoned. The subsequent plot in the crematorium was also completely refreshing. Each rejection of Yue was not a momentary insult from a superior, but a rejection after rational and careful consideration, which made people like Jiang Cheng's lazy character even more. The subsequent reconciliation was not a sudden and brainless emotional release, but the ice of emotion slowly melted under Yue's gentle impact again and again. The heart-wrenching feeling left me with endless aftertaste. It is an indisputable five-star praise.

Jiang Cheng and Su Linyue are very addicted, and the emotional descriptions in this novel are delicate. The pace is steady and the ending is happy. From sister to wife, she was almost imprisoned without a wife. Moreover, the supporting characters have distinct personalities, and there is no such thing as a tool person. The sinister book Xia x lustful Su Qingning, Shen Zhuo is not only edible, but also simple but revealing the truth. An Lu is the ex-wife's sister and the promoter of Su Linyue and Jiang Cheng's relationship. He is gentle and kind to Jiang Cheng, and luckily he has a good home. Gentle and arrogant sister Jiang Cheng x well-behaved and sinister Su Linyue The best choice to watch the double heroine (the comments below may contain spoilers, so read with caution) And it's really cool. The early stage mainly describes Jiang Cheng's psychology and the conflict between the two of them due to Su Qingning's coma. Lao Cheng has been wondering whether he should confess. A big one exploded in the mid-game, and Kongtang ripped off Jiang Cheng's vest. The conflict between Jiang Cheng and Su Linyue breaks out, and the psychological description of Jiang Cheng's darkening is very tense. In the later period, Su Linyue understood her own feelings and had the courage to admit her mistakes and pursue them bravely. Lovers will eventually get married, and only the love given to each other can best withstand the test. There were many regrets in the past, but Jiang Cheng completed the transformation with the expectations of his friends and had his own unique love.

Nice, no surprises. The main CPs are pretty complete, but I'm a bit confused. Also, I want to see Dongxue and the ranger fall in love. I really like Dongxue's character design. I also want to see the Shen sisters. Can the author publish two more extra chapters? Urgent.

The first part is barely readable, but it starts to get a bit interesting in the middle. The later parts get better and better. The distortion and sweetness are well controlled, and then there is a slight bitterness. The sweetness after tasting the plot is even more fascinating, and the flavor is very unique.

It's even better than the previous one, with very delicate writing. It's just that the people in the article are too kind-hearted, both positive and negative. I'm used to seeing people fighting and killing people, but I'm not used to it. Overall, it's very good.

It's a very cliche plot, but I just love to watch it. The writing is very green at best, and the details in the writing are not very exciting at worst. The dialogue between the characters is too stiff, especially the emotions between the characters. It's too short and can't be expressed at all. Although the timeline goes by very quickly, you write very little [face covering] This kind of writing even in Tomato is very interesting to me. I have a feeling at the end. I relied on my own brain to conceive and add the plot. The writing of half a million words feels too sloppy. I feel that these half a million words are more like an outline. If someone else expands it, I should be able to write more than two million words from this short half million words. But I have to say that I just like to watch this kind of plot. Please work hard to improve your writing skills. I look forward to your next works. I will give you five stars.

It looks good, I want to see Jiang Cheng being taught a lesson by Su Yuelin after his identity is exposed [sneaky smile] It's finally finished. It can be regarded as catching up from beginning to end. The happy ending is really sweet [laughs] What kind of book will the author plan to write in the future? It must be about girls [laughs]

(Personal opinion) Jiang Cheng is well portrayed. He rarely kills enemies and you can tell that he is a gentle person. He is often naive when getting along with people he is familiar with. He has a strong sense of propriety when getting along with people he is not familiar with, and he often sees the malice of others. In short, he is a person who is cold on the outside but hot on the inside, hard-mouthed and soft-hearted, and values ​​love and justice.

I can write well, but it doesn't tell how the magical girl came into being. The other settings and world view are quite complete. I have good reviews, and the posts also have good reviews. I like Jiang Cheng's character, good reviews, and the descriptions of various details are also very delicate. Good reviews, good reviews, and a perfect product. Recommended, apply to revive Kongtang and Kongning. Xia Weiwan can continue to live in his memory. Speaking of which, the "Xia Weiwan" in Arrogance Tinder has also disappeared. I thought there would be sparks with Kongtang, but I didn't expect that he died and fainted.

Let's talk about my feelings. I don't really have high requirements for the plot of Lily's current work. Lily's development process is still too short, and there are things like turning into a hundred to fill in the gaps. However, this work has the most complete world view and the most vivid plot I have ever seen. I really feel Jiang Cheng's fatigue, but the writing is still a bit immature. The plot is very tense. I like to update it quickly (too slow). Also, I hope that the author who writes Lily with care will get better and better.

The average book lover can read the medium-length book in one week, or three days if possible. I have to say that I never get tired of watching magical girl themes. Who doesn't like to watch pure and beautiful magical girls fight with gravity twisting ( The ending is a semi-happy ending. After all, someone has to leave. Considering the complexity of the characters, this is also the best way to deal with it. The main characters have basically achieved happiness, the pace is good, and the ending is not too rushed. I want to recommend it, but when I think about it, it's really good. I might recommend it just by smelling it, and I don't need anyone to recommend it (laughs)

The core tension of the story is very strong. Jiang Cheng accidentally became the "murderer" who indirectly killed Su Yuelin's sister. He took care of each other amid guilt and responsibility, and developed a dependence on each other day and night, but he broke up after his identity was exposed. The sweet daily life in the early stage, the darkening and antagonism in the middle stage, and the crematorium of chasing his wife in the later stage, the rhythm is particularly well controlled, with a mixture of sweetness and abuse, with a slightly bitter aftertaste, and the stamina is particularly strong ど⁰̷̴͈꒨⁰̷̴͈う♡ The author's portrayal of the characters' emotions is very delicate, and the pulling feeling of "having a grudge on his lips, but can't help but stick to it" is particularly poignant. The bond and sense of fate between the two heroines are full of tension. It is a treasure unearthed recently!

I came from the previous book where a daughter fell in love with a villain, and I like the setting of this one even more! The author is getting better and better as he writes [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]. I look forward to the two of them pulling each other after Xiao Chengcheng takes off his vest or chasing his wife in the crematorium [Note] [Note]

There really aren't many good books about this kind of magical girl, and the writing style is quite good. Although there are still some minor flaws, they are innocuous. It can definitely be regarded as a five-star book among online novels (the only shortcoming is that there are too few, not enough to read). The author has written each character in a three-dimensional way, and the character creation is also successful in all aspects, and it breaks away from the systematic route of conventional online novels, making it really comfortable to watch. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I will read other books by the author. [Love]

It's really good to read, and compared to the previous book, the plot is smoother, and the potentially poisonous parts are basically avoided. It's a pity that the ending is a bit fast, and some plots feel like they could be expanded on a little more - but this is not bad, it lands smoothly and leaves everyone with some plot reveries.

It is very well written and a masterpiece. Among the novels with this theme, this is the best one I have read. The content is life-oriented, but because of the early foreshadowing, life in the later period is not boring. The characters are very distinct. After reading it, it gives people a sense of melancholy. The inner changes of the characters are very clear and can give readers empathy.

OK, I've caught up to the end, so let's add a review~ This novel is generally good, but the ending is a bit sudden, but it is also a happy ending. If you like leisure, you can read it. The overall feeling is ordinary and bland, but there are not many daily posts. It was completed within a few days after Xiao Yue Rin caught up with his wife. Well, it is a bit unfinished. I look forward to the author's next work~ [laughing]

It's so good, I watched it so many times that I forgot to rate it. So let's evaluate it: It's not very distorted, the two heroines are pretty normal, and I didn't even notice a slight distortion. The author wrote the emotional drama very well, and the split scene was really exciting! ! This is what I want to watch, sweet and very sweet. The setting is a very normal magical world, the plot is not too bad, there are many emotional scenes, and the strengths are used to avoid weaknesses. Summary: A+ for the author! Damn it, how come my reading time is only five hours? Oh, I watched it in turn, so I'll give it two good reviews later!

I stayed up late for a few days to finish reading it, and I felt a little reluctant to leave it. How should I put it, I originally came here to add a little bit of abuse to Lily's sweet story, but it turned out that there was nothing sweet about it. There was no space to describe the two people together after they got together. In other words, more than two hundred chapters are about the two people realizing that they are together and talking about it. Personally, I think it's a bit poisonous. Jiang isn't sure if it's Jie, and she doesn't know if she likes Xia. To be honest, the relationship is a bit complicated. It even needs to be mentioned again at the end, including An Lu. They are just good friends. She has to write that she liked her before, which makes the relationship weird. In addition, although she is a girl, she has too much physical contact with other people, especially Sister Su and Jiang. I don't know what you Lily think. I am a little concerned about Lily and BG. Putting aside these things, this is a work with relatively delicate emotions. Everyone is well portrayed. , Even if Sora appears less, I still think it is very impressive, but the interaction between the two protagonists in the middle and later stages is too little. I have been counting how many chapters are left and wondering how much candy I can read. Overall, it is a good work. Except for the relationship between the two protagonists, other aspects are very good.

The whole book is very beautiful, the daily descriptions and emotional descriptions are extra points, and the writing techniques are also very suitable. But can there be a better way to deal with the blackening section? That section feels a bit mediocre compared to other parts. Also, aren't the magic agencies too weak? They really don't look like an official organization. I feel that the administrative professionalism is not as good as that of the village committee (´•.• `)

Personally Tomato's favorite book. The world view is relatively complete, but the story line basically revolves around a small area where the heroine is. The level of cruelty and sweetness is just right, and it will not appear pretentious or unreasonable. I hope it will be a HE with some twists and turns but will not affect the outcome.

There are very few articles that suit my taste so well. The straight-ball idol in the lower year and the escapist Xianyu in the upper year are a perfect match, okay? ! The other deputy CPs are also very good. Each character has his own personality charm. He is really sweet, and he is ruthless when he cuts. But fortunately, the ending is he (the most important thing is! This book is the main attack, which is really strange. Big data, please recommend this to me!)

I feel that there are actually quite a few points that could be detailed and expanded upon, and the pace is a bit rushed, but it is indeed an improvement compared to the previous book, and the emotions are really well written. Looking forward to more extras and new works [Please update] (Why does my stupid dragon have no role anymore [crying])

It's a very good book. I personally regret that it contains many pairs of secondary lilies. I feel that those lily groups can be longer, but I don't think they are long enough. Secondly, the full text can be longer. I feel that I can write a lot of sweet daily life and I haven't had enough of it. This is my selfish feeling that it is not enough [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]