Scheming Aesthetics: the Perfect Performance of Cannon Fodder

This book has good points and bad points, so let's write about the bad points first, so as to provide readers with lightning protection and the author's writing suggestions. 1. The author is too obsessed with ideological education and ignores literary construction. Many images and beautiful creations have been abandoned and filled with the psychological description of the heroine, resulting in too much rational narrative content, insufficient literary quality, and a sense of AI. (It is not excluded to use AI to generate outlines or polish continuations, etc., But it is more likely that the author's rational thinking is more developed, and the language style is more rational, resulting in a strong sense of AI) 2. The author's awareness of female awakening is too strong, which sometimes makes the heroine unable to stand up, and the author sometimes uses the heroine's mouth to express his own opinions. (The author doesn't know if he has read Liu Qing's "History of Entrepreneurship", which is a bit similar to his problem. However, Liu Qing's problem is that he has to write according to policy requirements. The author has a strong will to express his heart and has to write.) As a result, the heroine is half the heroine and half the symbol incarnation expected by the author. 3. The author is too obsessed with explaining clearly and emphasizing, which leads to a somewhat long-winded preaching feeling. Arrange some descriptions of the heroine's major psychological changes that will be memorable to readers, and smoothly pass through key nodes, which can improve the rhythm and reduce repetitions. Advantages 1. Double-edged sword. The author is a very idealistic writer, and this book is not confusing at all. The character and description of the heroine are absolutely female-centered. Blessed are those who like women's awakening, it's the trumpet sound that opens the way. 2. Double-edged sword. The author's psychological portrayal of the heroine is meticulous and even verbose, and there is also a kind of tolerance, which makes the heroine flesh and blood. It is considered a success in shaping the heroine in the online article. The full score is 100, and I give it 85 points. (The points deduction items are mainly the above shortcomings 2) 3. There is innovation in the soil. It can be said that it touches your heart and you discover something new at the same time. It's a bit like potato chips with a cucumber flavor. Although everyone is used to eating potato chips, cucumber flavor is rare.

The author portrays the psychology of the characters and the details very well, and is particularly empathetic. I feel sorry for the heroine, but they are strong, independent, and clear-headed. They do not lose themselves or reinvent themselves for love. In their new life, they can quickly make plans to be their own heroines. Love is also there, which is great. Girls should not lose themselves in relationships and shine. Good love will be attracted. The premise of loving others must be to love yourself, and the male protagonist never learned how to love others and learned how to love his wife. I highly recommend everyone to take a look. It is very delicate and fast to wear. It is very beautiful. A different kind of quick travel story

I really feel that the writing is very good, very thoughtful, and not cliche at all. Most novels are from God's perspective. This is different. It is written from the perspective of the male and female protagonists. There are more inner monologues, and the emotions are delicate and the characters are three-dimensional. Some people think that the heroine is greedy. She obviously chose her own first life, but people's hearts are uncontrollable. This is really the case with secret love. Some people think that the heroine is greedy. She didn't do anything for the male protagonist, but the female protagonist has done everything she can. Secret love is what I want to do for you, but I don't know what I can do for you, or what you need. In the second life of the female protagonist, she must repeatedly confirm the male protagonist's emotions, because she is too afraid that the male protagonist is only temporary and has only a little emotion for her, not as deep as her emotions. Anyway, it is very good-looking

It's beautiful, and the writing is really good. The first world where the heroine lectures is really great. Although I haven't finished the first world yet, I really like this story. So what if I choose the male protagonist again in my new life? The male protagonist can bring resources to the female protagonist and even the entire family, and it is also an obsession in the past and present life. Since I haven't finished watching it yet, I think the female protagonist's feelings for the male protagonist are more like obsession, and of course there is love. The scenes where the heroine gets along with her family are also very good. Isn't that what Chinese families are like? Parents' love is like wet clothes. It gets colder if you don't wear cold clothes. The heroine's mother's strict education to her is such that when she gets married, she should be careful. As well as the complex feelings the heroine has for Gu, although there are only a few words, I can't help but wonder if she has also thought about another possibility, but this kind of emotion is not enough to defeat the resources that the male protagonist can bring and her obsession with him. The author's writing is really good, the writing style is great! !

One sentence comment is Heroine: Forget about the hardships of love, I don't want the hardships of life In the first world, in fact, even if the heroine has a "love brain", she really has a status, wealth and status that others dare not even dream of. Even if she compares her "tragic past life", it is not tragic (the ending of the heroine's previous life is a big HE in the "rebirth novel" and does not need to be repeated at all. Even if she has plotted against the male protagonist many times, she still puts a veil on herself as "unable to love" and makes herself very pitiful. It gives me a Versailles feeling of "I own the country but I am lonely" hahahaha, another cool novel! ! ! ! !

The heroine's inner activities are very delicate. Duckweed in her previous life rushed desperately to the habitat she expected, eager to get a little love. In the world of love, be like a child, like a baby bird. The intertwining of love and hate after rebirth, and the scheming are not like the girls in the real world who cannot get love in their original families, who only get candy when they cry. There is no need to plan step by step in the world of love. Every step is too painful. The first story is very close to most of the psychological activities that lack love in the real world. Tai Chi creates two emotions, and hate is the ultimate love. The first story can be savored in detail

Let me talk about the content first. It is very fascinating and well-written. It can easily bring your emotions into it. The theme is also very clear - dare to love, dare to hate, and dare to admit it. In fact, I think this is very good. We need different perspectives to interpret the thoughts and pursuits of girls, and give countless confused readers more choices to think about. As for the word "preaching" that someone mentioned in the comments, I think it varies from person to person. Everyone's understanding may be different. It is understandable that the author hopes to arouse more resonance by exporting his own opinions. As long as it plays a positive role, it is valuable for us who read the book to feel that we are thinking! Finally, I would like to say what is valuable about this book. In the era of online writing where AI creation is rampant, characters are portrayed in various models and templates, and you can guess the development after reading it, the author is clumsily outputting his opinions, trying hard to portray the protagonist, and expressing the theme seriously. This is a kind of sincerity hidden under the clumsiness, eager to output and eager to be understood. I feel the soul of an author. The content can be different from the mainstream public, but true feelings are always the surefire way. It is precisely because of this sincere feeling that a very lazy reader (myself) is willing to be thoughtful and eloquent. I also hope that babies will treat this book with a more peaceful attitude! [Love][love][love]

The writing is very good. I couldn't bear to read the first world after holding my breath. My voice was hoarse from crying. I didn't even cry when I gave birth to the baby in the delivery room. I cried while reading a novel and doubted my life. It's really no good. As you get older, you have to pay attention to your health.

Every story has a very good life teaching significance. Especially regarding the outlook on life and love, the story in this book tells you that "love brain" is not terrible. You can have a deep obsession with a person in love, and you can also pay the price you think is necessary for this obsession. But you must have the ability to bear these costs. At the same time, this is just the foundation that supports everything, the foundation on which you can achieve your goals. It is the foundation on which you can freely extend, acquire resources, improve yourself, and achieve your goals. This is not a case of self-pity here. Instead, plan carefully for where you want to go and enrich yourself. This book also tells you. Maybe there is some pain that makes you no longer sure whether you still love anything. But it doesn't matter, what you need to make sure is that you love yourself and put your will first

The whole story is the author's self-expression, which overwhelms the story. After reading the first story, I still sigh, but the second story is just sighing. The author can express his own thoughts through stories, but it is best not to try to teach readers anything. Tell a good story, and the rest of the readers can make their own judgments. It does not read like a novel or a lesson plan.

The first two actually meet my expectations quite well. I have always liked articles like this, just because I can't accept them, so I like them. I know they are right, but I will resonate with them, and then I will be very unhappy. Anyway, it's well written, I like the tone. I just felt that the title of the book was too tacky, and I would usually forgo it when I saw this kind of book title. I didn't like to read this so-called counterattack against White Moonlight, but this book is not about that, so I clicked on it with the intention of casually flipping through it, and then read on.

I have read two volumes so far, from Yu Xinwan in the first volume to Yi He in the second volume. Thank you for using your beautiful writing to create such a vivid and tough female image ₍ᵔ･•･ᵔ₎. Every woman has awakened. From relying on others to self-growth, every step is gradual, very good! Their love for the male protagonist continues into the second life. They may not understand it at first, but Da Da's inner monologue is really good. The ray of light caught in the self-pain can easily make people fall into it. Ms. Yi He in the second volume really shocked me (ps: Yu Xinwan is also great, but Su Dada describes Yi He's entire life at the beginning, which makes people feel more distressed and understand her pain and desolation). She slowly accepts herself in the darkness and has her own career. At the same time, she maintains a sense of boundaries with the male protagonist and does not indulge in the tender cobwebs. Yi He was confused and had thoughts of acceptance, but she knew that she was the most important. She was very happy that she chose to leave at the end. It was as if she had come alive at that moment. Her childhood experience made it impossible for her to "love" her children easily, so it was really persevering to abandon her decisively and pursue her dream! The writing style of Dada is really good, and it can be seen from the analysis of each volume that Dada is thinking about the character characteristics of each person and what the direction of the plot should be. Every character has flesh and blood. It is said to be love, but it is about self-love. I am very happy that I found this article. The writing talent of Da Da is really good. I also gained energy from it while watching it. Thank you very much, Da Da ʕ•͈⚇•͈ʔ ps: The stories in both units are very interesting, but after reading one volume, I will rest for a few days before reading the new one, so my memory will be a little blurry~

It's good-looking, in line with my xp, and the views are reasonable. However, the writing style is a bit suspended, and the didactic meaning is a bit heavy. Some chapters are followed by the author's appreciation. I feel that the author is giving me reading comprehension [laughing and crying]

It looks good. I feel that the author is very good at analyzing the psychology and psychological changes of the characters. I hope that the heroine will love what she loves in the end. I can't read sadistic stories. The second half of the first world is sweet. The psychology of the characters in each stage is very clear. From cannon fodder counterattack to Bai Yueguang, I like it so much.

In my opinion, the most basic thing about a novel is that it can move readers. This novel moved me, and I can see the author's seriousness in choosing words and sentences. It brings me back to the feeling of reading online articles many years ago, secretly downloading it and hiding under the bed, closing the door and reading it all night long, and then I couldn't sleep at night. I have read the first two stories so far. The protagonists are both gentle and kind. The whole story is biased towards the description of the psychological process. Great support for the author [Sending my heart] "She once hid all the mountains, rivers and years in the look at him; later, she turned her affectionate thoughts into a heart-breaking chess game." "She walked towards him with the scars in her dream, thinking about stepping back every step of the way, until his warmth was more real than the pain of the past." Rather than pursuing the illusory love of the "previous life" again, the heroines are more inclined to learn self-love, smash and reorganize their past selves, and use everything to create a new self. All external things will leave her, but she is the only one who does not give up on herself. What a person can ultimately save is his or her heart, and the only way to save the heart is to feel hope. When they are out of the original predicament, they feel the hope, and ultimately save themselves.

The book is very well written. This book is not a very intense plot conflict, but more of a warm and gentle flow. And each heroine has her own opinions and determination, is determined, very charming, and super beautiful! ! !

It's very good-looking, even though I have read many articles, some good and some bad. It can be said that this is my favorite novel. The characters are very delicate. The daughter of a minor official and the prince of the Hou family in the front made me burst into tears. There are many inner monologues between men and women. I really like this article. The author's writing style is very good. The plot is not love at first sight. It is the kind of restrained and step-by-step design. I like to read the kind of articles that are not silly and sweet. I like the heroine who has a plan. You can take a look. It's really beautiful😁

The author's writing is very good, very serious, and the emotions are conveyed well. I evaluated it after watching the second world. To be honest, it made my liver hurt from the abuse (personal feeling). I thought it was a relaxing little world, but I ended up wanting to cry throughout the whole process. This shows that the character creation is very successful. In short, it is highly recommended. Come on, author!

I like the second story very much. It is not about who is saved by whom. Yi He will not escape because of his past life, but will work hard to plan himself and let himself shine🌟. Yi He has not received love, but he can love himself. There is no vulgar perfection, but the persistence and planning to pursue self-worth.

The last story is particularly delicate and gentle, the kind of ordinary happiness, the kind of stability and tacit understanding, the kind of reality that seems unrealistic at the same time. After reading it, I will gently say to myself: Be kinder to yourself.

I just finished reading the first story, and I was pleasantly surprised by the content and characters. Many of the psychological descriptions are very delicate, and the character's tenderness, sensitivity, inferiority, and sourness in love are all well portrayed, and the characters stand out. As for the "preaching" in some readers' comments, I personally feel that it is not to this extent. The author will more or less integrate his own ideas and thoughts in the creative process, but in this novel, the "output of values" may be relatively more obvious and straightforward. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The author's own creative ideas appear too much in the text, and the sudden switch from third-person to first-person perspective is very confusing for readers. At this point, the reading experience is relatively poor.

The heroine's inner activities were described very well, and I was very excited to watch it. It's just that there is too little written and not enough to read. The author, please keep writing, please update online [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The author's writing is very good, the emotional description is delicate, and the inner transformation of the character is reasonable. The heroine dreams about the pain and despair in the previous life and the entanglement of love and hate in this life. The difficulty in letting go under the desire for revenge turns into a love that can tolerate everything. She finally understands that the other person in this life is the reality. The hatred in the past is just hurting each other. There is still time in this life, everything is still fine, and they can have a good relationship [Love]

A unique article with profound insights into life, a clear spring in the world of online articles. It's rare to see a novel with profound literary connotation and romance at the same time. The author is so amazing [laughing][laughing][adoration][adoration] Come on, don't give up updating, your writing is really great [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The writing style of the book is superb, with a sourness like still water flowing deep, and it deeply dissects the psychological activities of each character. It is not earth-shattering, and it is not earth-shattering, but the story is unforgettable, just like the passage of time and the love in every drop. Definitely an underrated article, every word has been carefully considered.

Every heroine lacks love and doesn't like this style very much. The heroine wants too much love from the hero.

The author writes very well. Life is not just about chasing love, but settling down and being a better version of yourself. In this process, you can naturally feel love better and gain love. Loving ourselves is an important topic in life. How we love ourselves is vividly reflected in the author's book.

It's been a long time since I've found a novel that appeals to my taste. The difference in how people treat men and women's "love brains" mentioned by the author at the beginning of the first world is touching and thought-provoking. It's really interesting and can't be described in words. I continued to read it! ! ! [Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss] Author, cheers [Like][Like]

It smells like a long stream of water [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss], author, come on, baby! [Understood][Understood][Understood] Come on, author, you write well! ! ! [Note][Note][Note]

The character of the heroine is imperfect. In reality, each of us is also imperfect. It is this imperfection that creates this reality. I can't say anything about it. If you like it, you can take a look. You won't be disappointed.