The End of the World: the Beauty Is Alluring, but My Sister Can't Control It

It's quite good, I hope it won't be discontinued or unfinished (I usually see this selfishness in the male protagonists, but it's the first time I saw it in the female protagonist, I can only say that it's great, everyone loves this selfish character [sending my heart])

Nice! The heroine kills decisively and satisfactorily, and kills when she is in the way. She is not the kind of person who is unjustly accused and makes excuses even though she is very powerful, but she is in a low-key manner. Survivors from all over the world are also worry-free and smart, unlike other civilizations who go out to provoke the heroine even though they know that she is strong or mentally retarded. Some troubles in the early stage were quickly resolved, and the development was logical. It's just that Lily [palms face] It's a pity that I didn't get used to it the first time I read Lily's article. But it's pretty good. If the heroine is strong and the plot is good, it's OK. If the heroine is strong enough, it doesn't matter if she likes men or women. Just do whatever you want~

I didn't look carefully at the introduction. I watched the two girls kissing each other [covering my face]. Come out and take a closer look. Lily. To be honest, she looks good. She looks great. Highly recommended [Shy]

The setting of this book is very interesting, coupled with the character of the protagonist, it is especially suitable for no CP. It is delicious even if it is over 100. Multiple female protagonists are better and more delicious. It is not suitable for 1V1 and does not fit the character of the protagonist. The plot is interesting. According to the current pace, I will start with a million no matter what. It can be seen that the author loves the protagonist very much and gives all the good things to the protagonist. My mother has certified it. Usually when I read villain stories, I feel that the protagonist could be more ruthless. The ruthlessness in the story is not sharp enough, and the killing is not clean. It is too uncomfortable. I always leave people to drag out the plot. One or two times is fine, but the third time seems a bit mother-in-law. In the early stage, ordinary people always look for the extraordinary person in the protagonist. The problem was that the protagonist was downgraded, but it got better later on. I read this cool article two days ago. The ending of this kind of best was summarized in one sentence, and the plot that provoked negative emotions was directly mentioned. After reading it, I only saw the coolness of the protagonist who doesn't say much. Why don't you try this way of writing? Emotionally, the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine has progressed too fast. The other heroine has a mullet head. She looks like a girl and looks like a boy. She is superficial and has no characteristics. This is the first heroine with a mullet head that I have seen. The advantage of the heroine in the article is that it does not overpower the protagonist. The disadvantage is that it is too ordinary (in my opinion). Maybe there are too many mullet heads now, and it can be used on the way to get out of class. If you meet one or two, there is a possibility that she is one of the heroines, and there will be better heroines waiting for the protagonist to unlock. I don't believe that the protagonist's character will only love someone who does not match his own strength. Generally speaking, Lei Dian's writing is not that shocking, so it can be ignored. The main plot is good for readers who like to watch the protagonist without CP and knocking Lily.

The quality of the writing is good. The protagonist appears to be lovable and wants to bully her, but in reality she is very capable (ruthless, greedy, picky) and is difficult to mess with. The ancestor's treasure chest can have space to store things, and by eating it, you can get energy points to upgrade to meet various needs. It is a very comprehensive cheat. The battle aspect is also good, and there are also "more posts and sweets with the cold beauty. There is a lot of merit in reading the plot and world view, keep up the good work, and update more~

It's pretty good-looking, I'd rate it 9 or above, but I don't like the emotional line very much. I don't know if it's a pure lily or for both men and women. I hope Qi is a tool person, or has more CP.

It's a mess. I didn't want to give it 5 stars originally, but the author was sanctioned by Shen He, so I might as well give it 5 stars to encourage it. I have a few suggestions. If the author wants to write about a female protagonist, don't write an intimate scene too early, and don't mark 1v1 in the introduction. You can try changing it to a female protagonist, a stock buying article, or no fixed CP, etc. Don't write intimate scenes. You can focus more on stream of consciousness or ambiguous [laughs] atmosphere, and try out the sequel in the extras or the finale. The heroine is really not suitable for 1v1 (I'm not saying that 1v1 is bad, nor that the author's heroines are bad), but Sang Che's character and principles of life don't seem like she will commit to love for a lifetime. The only things that can bind Sang Che are interests, becoming stronger, and protecting her and the treasure box that will make her stronger together. Upgrade stories are suitable for writing without cp because the heroine has a golden finger, and if the other one doesn't, it will lead to the inability to keep up with the protagonist's strength. If it is not handled well, it will be like poverty alleviation. Many people in the apocalypse don't have enough to eat and their lives are in danger, but falling in love has to be a necessity [laughing and crying]. Adults are somewhat sincere. It's all about you and me. There is no everlasting and unswerving love. Sang Che is truly sober. She understands that love is just a seasoning. She originally expected the author to write "Amidst Thousands of Flowers", a sober enjoyment, a promise that does not need to be announced. It's a pity The author's first book is well written, with a tight plot and good descriptions of skills, imagination, and combat. I hope to see more works from the author, come on! When will the author open a fan group? If I want to see the previous version without any changes, post it and post it!

It looks good, but many people didn't read the introduction, they marked it, and they keep talking about it because of it. [Cover face]

It's super good. I've read so many serial novels. This one is really good. Highly recommended. This novel still has two heroines, but the heroine is a bit selfish, but it is still understandable in the context of the apocalypse.

It's super worth watching. It's the first time I've seen such a novel plot with two female protagonists👀. I like the female protagonist more than I love myself. It's super engaging. Five-star praise!

Very nice! It is a rare novel that combines pure 100 + doomsday + highway + sequence + weirdness! There are no brainless plots, and a lot of weirdness is also high in IQ. The female protagonists are basically ruthless people who kill decisively, and are not virgins at all. The current male supporting characters (at least those who have been with the female protagonists all the way, and are not dead yet): the Taoist uncle and the official sequencer are all ruthless people who are decisive in killing and not virgins. In short, they are very good-looking! [Love][Like]

I feel like the two heroines don't have a great connection. Qi Xia's strength is not as strong as the heroine right now, and the gap will get bigger and bigger in the future. The help she can provide is just in life, helping to bring people back, and solving boredom. Because there are no other female supporting characters to watch, it's okay to watch.

It's nice, but I'm a little forgetful and groggy. I forgot what the name of Che's bestie is. I hope Sang Che and Qi Xia will have an afterlife. Some people say it's unfinished, but I actually feel good about it. After all, the characters have always been full of characters. I still hope the author will write a modern novel about Sang Che and Qi Xia, just treat it as an afterlife. I'm actually a bit nervous about this subject. [Face covering] The ancestors remembered to take it [shy]

When I saw that chapter 67 ended, I thought carefully about entering it because of the label introduction. Because in chapter 67, the author said that I might write about talking to a man. If it was just because of Lily, I thought carefully about it. I will give four stars first to see if it will be written about both men and women later.

Although the supporting characters are still nasty at the beginning, the killing is very good. I thought it was a novel with a light neon flavor when I looked at the cover, but the text turned out to be an out-and-out survival story. Although it was not in line with the expectations I clicked on, it was okay. I also like to read survival stories [Chigua]

It's so good to read, it's the first time I've seen such a strange treasure chest-themed article.

To be honest, after reading the introduction, I thought this article was about 1v1 and cp was the ancestor of the treasure chest. Later, I felt that it was the harem, and the CPs were Treasure Chest, Qi Xia and Qi Yi. Then, I looked at the comment section and found that the poor author was sanctioned by bad rules. . . The harem became 1v1. At that time, I was heartbroken. . .

It's a very good novel with a novel theme. I've read more than a hundred chapters, but I can't stand it. I can't stand it anymore, but the author writes it very well.

It feels a bit uncertain when the two heroines can trust each other, unless they form a contract or something (not to hurt each other or something)... There is another small question. After a night of kissing, Qi Xia wanted to take responsibility, but Sang refused. Later, after doing it, why did Qi Xia not want to take responsibility? And how could Qi Xia still believe Sang pretended to want her to take responsibility? The author wouldn't have forgotten the plot at the beginning, right?

It looks very good, the world view design is very good, and the character design is also good. I like the heroine Love Me's selfish character very much. It's just that the emotional line was a bit poorly written, and the ending was a condensed version of love. To be honest, it is difficult for two heroines to make money. If you want to make money, go to the non-CP track. (Because I like to watch selfish heroines without cp and sweet double heroines)

The content is pretty good, but Lily [face covering], can't it be done without CP?

I just noticed this book, but it's so well written that I feel like I haven't read it more times, which is a pity. The heroine pays attention to her career, and the ancestor Xiangxiang treats Sang well. The most important thing is the two heroines. The plot is particularly good, with the two heroines interacting in the middle.

The good thing [I learned] is that if you are a queen, huh~ it is best to have multiple ambiguous relationships before having a relationship, otherwise the reader will have a first love story (this is how the word should be used). But it's okay to be an absolute egoist [blowing kiss]

The world view and power system are well created, and various plot events are continuous and never boring. The author's writing style is also very solid, and the protagonist's character is eye-catching and interesting. After the Poseidon Festival in Chapter 200, you can see that the pace has obviously accelerated. I am still curious as to how it was completed in dozens of chapters. If this book were written by some of the famous authors from Qidian, there would be no problem with its popularity. Tomato is not suitable for this kind of writing. It has great potential, but it's a pity.

The writing is good, the protagonist is decisive in killing and has an online IQ.

This book is really great and the author's logical thinking is different from other survival books. There are so many things to see. Only now the rating is not high. The protagonist has a treasure chest. This treasure chest is magical. You will know it when you look at it. But it's a bit lily, and I highly recommend it to the accepted treasure.

I clicked 5☆ because I was afraid that the newbies wouldn't be able to see the whole story if I pushed it up. Run! ! !

So pretty! I look forward to it every day and can't get enough! I like the heroine's character very much

A little special, okay

Clear thinking and mature writing!