The First Sword of Rebirth Is to Kill Bai Yueguang First!

Overall it's okay. I gave it five stars at the beginning. This time I re-evaluated it and now give it four stars for several reasons. 1 There are already too many female characters, and two of them are a bit repetitive. 2The appearances of some female characters are rather blunt. 3. The protagonist has already begun to go in the direction of scum, so be careful if you don't like it. . . At present, I personally think that the best characters created are the heroine Qin Yue (I fell in love with this role because of this role, and the five stars were given to her because of it), and the female supporting character Qingmei Su Wanyin. The author must have put a lot of effort into the conception of these two characters. If you want to watch these two female characters, it is worth watching, especially the heroine Qin Yue. [Like] I hope the author can control the quantity and quality of female characters. Too many female characters will make the main line of the work appear confusing, and the content will easily become homogeneous. I can give 5 stars to the part between Qin Yue and Su Wanyin in the current plot, but I will give 4 stars to the overall story. The whole work is of high quality and worth watching! My little suggestion, I hope the author can polish it into a better work.

If you don't open a harem, there is a high probability that you and Qingmei will never be together. The selfless emotions in the previous life are too full for Qingmei to realize what he has paid for. The relationship between the career and the unknown school is too difficult and he cannot take the road of fast success in famous companies. In terms of character, he will not lick the Qingmei family to use resources to rise. The halo fades, time passes, and the bloody plot is thrown away. Qingmei will probably improve the family business. Returning from rebirth, wearing black stockings that cover her buttocks, the slightly mature lady who is salty and sweet and can moan is so fragrant.

I don't know why the ratings are getting lower and lower. In fact, it's quite good. It satisfies a man's desire to have both. It's suitable for men. Their tastes are different. Don't rate it low if you don't like it. The author also wants to live.

I don't know how many chapters it takes to know the reason why Qingmei left. Apart from this, another thing that made me look forward to in this book is whether the childhood sweethearts can be together, not whether the teacher can be together.

No stallion! Don't love too much! There is ambiguity, not cliché!

At present, everything seems to be good for Qingmei. There is no problem in principle. Please give me a reason for leaving without saying goodbye. The little green plum girl written like this is quite cute. Emmm I found one, the kind of little green tea that is just a classmate, but the writing in the next few pictures is too fierce, a little cute

This book is beautiful!

Sweet love story

Not bad, good-looking

It looks good, love to watch more [smile][snicker][snicker][snicker]

It's okay, but there are too many people. Ordinary people's kidneys are not good.

Really nice, nice, nice. I hope the author will keep writing [shy]

It's great. I love reading it. I like reading it. The author writes so well (remember to delete the parentheses for 50 cents per article).

It looks pretty good so far, worth a look

A pretty good new book, worth reading

The description and setting of the teacher are very good, mature, gentle and arrogant, very good

The emotional description is delicate and the plot is good. I just feel that the author is too realistic and it is difficult to deal with the Shura field in the later period. I have read several other books by the author and hope to put more effort into this one. It will be interesting.

This book should be popular

Overall, it's okay. I just hope the author will accept Su Wanyin more.