Great Rebellion, but I'm a Loyalist

This book is great and very consistent with the setting of the original work. Unlike some people who scolded Luojia for being anti-human. Officially, Luojia replaced Dr. Angron and acted as a glue. When three people like Petula Bokoz and Angron were disgusted, Luojia comforted them. I understand a few of them. In the original work, they believed in the truth and loved humanity. They just believed that religion equals truth and faith can save people, so they are so subversive. In the original text, he did not think that the Chaos Gods were more powerful than his father, but he was just pretended to think that the Chaos Gods loved humans. At first, I almost figured it out, but I was deceived by the two brats next to me. I wandered in the Eye of Terror for more than ten years before being corrupted. Also, who do you think the Word Bearers are weak? The magic resistance is about the same as that of the Wolf Regiment. The psychic weapons rank second in the army. Chaos Special Attack. In that exam battle, half of them thought they were loyal. Half of them fought a lot of jump enemies, leaving only 50,000 new recruits.

As the fourth chapter leader🤓👆 this book is also very delicious. As a Warhammer player, the author has a very comprehensive understanding of the board game rules and background settings. The recommendation index is five stars, I, and there are no things that are spread by rumors. If you like to read it, you can read it.

It's quite novel. I used to read official novels from Black Library and basically didn't touch fan fiction, but the subject matter of this IF line really attracted me. It was the first 40K fan fiction I read. The human emperor and his successors in the official history did too many anthropomorphic things and missed many key historical windows, which led to the collapse of the empire like this, which is disappointing. I hope to see another possibility of the human empire through the author's parchment. Also, I don't know if it's because of my preconceived notion of "hammer written by Chinese people", but I feel that the taste of hammer is a bit off, so I give it a 4.7 Point score, but if I don't give a decimal point, I'll round it up to 5 points.

It is one of the few books in this software that gave me a high score. It is very suitable for hammer friends. The descriptions of many battle scenes are very exciting. Some plots may be a bit abrupt, but it does not matter if it is a fan. What is important is the image and psychological description of the Emperor, the Primarch, and the Space Marines. It is too good. In other books, it is like playing house with you, hugging each other, making jokes, smiling faces, eating and drinking, and having a family fun like a birthday banquet. Instead, it truly embodies a world in never-ending war, the indifference of the human empire, the divinity of the Emperor and the original body, and the hatred of aliens. Travelers come here not to eat, drink and have fun. In this high-pressure environment, in a divine body, driven by superhuman thinking, shrouded in the terrifying divinity of the emperor, and struggling in the dark and deep mud, they must embody the vantage point of knowing the story, understand the overall situation, control rationally, and face everything calmly. Commenting again, this book is very appealing to me, especially friends who have watched many war movies, such as All Quiet on the Western Front, Saving Private Ryan, etc. The author's description of the battlefield environment can almost make people imagine the same sense of seeing the movie scenes, the bloody and cruel battlefield environment, the sense of powerlessness of mortals in the face of death, the sense of sanctity that the power of the original body cannot be compared with, and the madness and arrogance of aliens. However, the reason for the rebellion of the Second Primarch is still too far-fetched. Saladin is just as wise and calm as the Khan. Emperor Randan can never be as powerful as the Emperor and the Four Gods of Chaos. The author uses a plot similar to the Horus Rebellion, with weird spiritual sacrifices, future vision, and bewitching voices, but Saladin Latin and Ran Dan have been fighting for a long time, and they should not understand that Ran Dan has no humanity for the enslavement of other aliens. The reason for Saladin's rebellion should be a little deeper, but it is not harmful. After all, the author cannot write a novel like a biblical epic like a GW writer, otherwise it will be very uncomfortable for both parties. I support the author very much. Believe me, read this book with tolerance and don't expect it to be perfect. You will like it.

The writing is very good, but I felt a little uncomfortable when I was having an affair with that iron man. I feel like I don't have the vigilance I should have. And there is no ambiguity about the heroine.

Strongly recommended to be good-looking, the Messenger of Golden Words, a different Luojia, an even more extraordinary style of play, the emperor is known as Little Luojia [laughing evilly]

It's quite interesting. I like Luojia in this book very much. I also like the descriptions of some minor characters, especially some canned Word Bearers. I also like the interaction between Luojia and the Primarchs. It's very interesting. Luojia is so exciting. It's so refreshing to dip into the beans! I also like the plots of the Second Primarch and the Eleventh Primarch. I am looking forward to the plot of Turing emerging from the small black room. The interaction between Luojia and other Primarchs is just like playing tricks to increase Mu Shunshou's favorability. The Emperor feels that the whole article is secretly happy. Having a human U-card is so cool for you, Huang Pizi. Angron and Curze are the closest to Luojia, especially Angron, who is very attached to Luojia. He actually regards himself as Luojia's adjutant. He really likes the interaction between Luojia and Huang Pizi! The author must continue to strengthen Luojia's mouth and teeth like crazy! ! It's so cool to watch Luo Jia fight. My second favorite characters are Rockefeller and Hercules. When Luo Jia loses contact, Rockefeller is really a stress-resistant king hahahaha. The setting of Hercules is so cool. He is a humanoid with great luck. He follows his father in cutting and slashing. His personality is simple and honest (?), And he doesn't like to use his brain very much. I really like this character. But, uh, why is he still having an affair with Anna when there is obviously no heroine? Even though the author clearly stated that this is a weapon and not the heroine, the excessive description of Anna's appearance and some descriptions of her behavior made me very uncomfortable and even more uneasy. She is obviously a weapon and a comrade, but she plays the role of brother and sister, and there is nothing wrong with it. Luo Jia's ambiguous behavior towards Anna, but Angron and Coze's reaction when they heard the rumors was very uncomfortable. Later, Luo Jia's special attitude towards Anna was somewhat deliberately written, which is a big poisonous point for me. It's not that the heroine is better than the heroine. Lord, you can see that the chapters with Anna are always full of comments from book friends calling Anna wife. Even without Anna, Anna can be dragged out to compete for favors as a wife. If it were not marked as having no heroine, it would be a description of a heroine. It is uncomfortable anyway. Anna is a key role no matter how you look at it. If you hate Anna for this reason, I will find it difficult to read the rest of the plot. But excluding Anna, I really like this book.

What I have in front of me is an original Warhammer novel in which the traveler is the Primarch. It contains pure Warhammer elements, without the intrusion of other world views. In addition to the Primarch and the Astartes, there are also stories of mortals. It is a very good Warhammer portrait novel.

This book is very well written. According to me, I am also a Warhammer fan. Although I am a Silver Hammer, I think it is still very good. The content and plot are more in line with my personal taste. I just don't know what you think, but I personally still recommend it. The recommendation is only five stars. I personally hope that it can continue to be updated and not unfinished or interrupted.

Very well written, very Warhammer-like. Although there are some small flaws, the settings are not right. For example, the recruit surgery does not require the implantation of a second gene seed. But it's not a big problem, I recommend (๑>◡<๑)👍🏻

The second brush, currently updated to the beginning of the Great Rebellion, is considered the best among the free novels. The original body has a high starting point and does not have a long development period. It quickly enters the main line rhythm, and the subsequent plot lines do not deviate. It is very comfortable to watch. The protagonist has no scriptures and hair on his face. He has been upgraded and strengthened. Currently, he has Awakening + Golden Words + Pope. The rabbit head is very satisfied. Small flaws: One is that the character creation in the first few chapters is a bit confusing, but it is quickly adjusted back to acceptable, and the person is very serious; the other is that there is no heroine, but I just found that the description and shaping in the part from Gray Wind to finishing the Eldar Ark is a bit too much, and the description after the Iron Man comes into play seems much better (the author later issued a single chapter statement confirming that there is no heroine).

As a half-fan of Warhammer, I have read many Warhammer fanfics, but I feel that none of them are what I like. The writing is weird. Instead, this book made my eyes shine. It is currently the best Warhammer fanfic I have ever read. The author's update speed is also very fast. He is simply a donkey of the production team. I am not a bastard. I sincerely recommend [Chigua][Chigua][Punch Out] I have read more than 700 chapters so far, and the first part is pretty good. But after getting here, it feels strange. It was said at the beginning that there will be no female protagonist, but the scenes of Iron Man Anna in the back are all female protagonists, and they are very poisonous. If the first part is a tragic epic, then the second part will become a happy love story. I don't know what the author is thinking. I feel that there is no need for her to exist at all. Let's see how the author arranges it in the future. Anyway, I felt that the plot of Iron Man was a bit abstract.

This is one of the few good-looking Warhammer fanfics I found on Yang Persimmon [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] ][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] I really recommend it, and the author also let it go, he is the donkey of the production team, come on, the bald Shaodeng who wrote the book [Like][Like][Like][Like][Sneaky laugh]

It looks great. It's really fun to see the protagonist using Eldar aliens as paint to paint the walls, but he has to trample on the aliens' teeth.

I read a hundred chapters in one go, it was so exciting! The group portrait is quite interesting. If you find it slow, you can give it a try and read it all at once. I have gone to several platforms to pursue my articles. It is really hard to find hard-working authors who do not have to pay compulsorily. Some people really do not need to be too harsh. I hope the author doesn't pay too much attention to some bad comments. Your writing is really good. I love reading it! Come on! ! [Sending Hearts][Blowing Kisses]

The book is a good book, the plot is okay, and the nodes are well chosen. But I can't see how you can find so much of your own plot in a long introduction.

After careful consideration, I felt sincerely that this novel has a great look and feel. The most amazing thing is that Guan Yu fought hundreds of rounds with Nezha to fight for the Luoshen. However, Lin Daiyu's spells were outrageous. Fortunately, Yasuo counterattacked with the wind wall and steel flash, otherwise the AK fired continuously and wiped out everyone. What poked me the most was when Zhou Yu said to the small soldiers of the Dragon Tribe of the East China Sea: "If you are not very capable and have no arrogance, don't act arrogant in front of Governor Zhou." He was full of resentment after being flooded by the Dragon Prince's army camp. The overall story is logically logical, the foreshadowing is cleverly laid out, the passionate fighting scenes are full of tension, and the various characters are vivid and three-dimensional! ~Meow

This Warhammer is recommended by a 20-year-old bookworm. The unreasonable and unsettling plot can't be read for a minute, but this book can be read. Friends who have been reading for many years should know the feeling of finding a novel that can be read.

I have only joined the Warhammer circle in recent years. Pure Cloud Hammer has never been on the table, and there is no military watch, but I have read a few books. This one is really good. I really enjoyed reading it. Now I see Ran Dan. Not only is he not wrong at all, but the writing is also so interesting. It is really rare. The author himself is a big guy, so you can rest assured that there will be absolutely no surprises in reading. At least I haven't seen one until now. The character's social development and plot advancement are perfect. I am the number one fan in my heart.

It is rare to find a well-written book on Warhammer, not to mention that it is free. In theory, this kind of quality is likely to be available on a paid subscription platform, such as Qidian or Hedgehog Cat. There is nothing to fault. It is very good in terms of the logic of Warhammer, the plot structure of the original work, and respect for the character setting. From the current point of view, in the entire Tomato Platform Warhammer fandom, this book should be among the top few. But to say a few words, it is true that Warhammer novels or fan fiction are quite difficult to write to a certain extent, because whether it is from the original setting of the Warhammer IP and its essential space opera system type plot, writing it is equivalent to writing at least half of a science fiction novel of this type, which is quite difficult to write, not to mention that it also incorporates many other elements, such as religious systems, and some unique aesthetic themes from various cultures. IP fan restoration degree 7/10 Story quality 8/10 Detailed description 9/10

For those who know about Warhammer, this novel is very interesting and interesting. For newcomers, I suggest that the author can add some pictures, such as photos of various Astartes, Dreadnoughts, various battleships, and photos of various Primarchs, which will be more attractive to watch.

The writing is really good, and the balance of the factions is perfectly done. The original bodies are made into flesh-and-blood people, and the different choices they make in the face of corrosion. The other secondary characters add a different perspective to the book. Facing the actions of the Great Crusade, it is very comfortable to read. At first, I saw Iron Man and the protagonist doubting the heroine, but as I look back, I find that every character who appears has a purpose and is the ceiling of Tomato Warhammer. You must be patient and read it.

Here, we pay tribute to our legendary painter, lifelong enemy of the Eldar, and the Emperor's most trusted heir, Lorgar Aurelion!

Too hit! ! ! Already starting to reminisce! ! ! How shameless! ! ! ╭( ′• O •′ )╭☞This is the book! Too hit! ! ! After seeing this, I almost agreed to Huang Pizi's invitation to recruit soldiers. It's so good... I've become a fool who won't sleep until I read the update of this book... Hehehehe... Hehehe... Abba, Abba, Abaddon... Hehehehe... The Emperor... Long live the First Empire... Long live the Second Empire...

The best new Warhammer book written on Tomato

The fighting scenes were very detailed, and it made me happy to watch them fight🤓Although the beginning was a bit poorly written, it was acceptable within the normal range.

Could be a good Warhammer novel on Tomato.

It's super beautiful and has a lot of chapters. In the first half, the identity of the time traveler was emphasized many times, which felt a bit disharmonious, and some of the words spoken out loud were a bit out of place. However, the subsequent words fell into a good situation and made people ignore these problems😘 Anyway, Lord Luojia's kindness is not over yet [blowing kiss] And this world view is really not suitable for any cp The speeches in the comment area are also very harmonious, not bad (chew chew chew🥰) Like [blowing kiss][sending heart]

It looks good, and I plan to continue pursuing it. Even if Luojia's own gnostic mystical elements are gone, it is a pity (after all, it is because of these that I like Luojia the most), of course it does not hurt.

We meet again. Based on my experience in the last book, I give you five-star praise.