Travel Quickly, After Redeeming the Villain, I Became Bai Yueguang

This book is really enjoyable to read, but the second world is a bit repetitive. What impressed me most was the bird in the first world. In the end, there was no explanation of his whereabouts, but I think he shouldn't be there either.

The plot is pretty good, but I would like to make a small suggestion. Although readers know that the heroine's behavior will have a lot of theatrical elements, it should not be a fake disguise when written, at least it should be real enough that the hero cannot see it. After the heroine senses the hero's distrust and temptation, she will feel aggrieved and fearful of many, many complicated emotions. Even if she doesn't dare to explode, it is difficult to hide it so that a person as sensitive as the hero will not notice it. If it really happens, it will look like a perfect dummy. On the contrary, she will be more suspicious. Only when the hero discovers appropriate grievances can it better catalyze the subsequent crematorium. The narrative is still a bit flat, and the characters' inner emotional ups and downs and expressions are a bit simpler. It seems that there are only very bland fluctuations such as "being moved by her actions and a ripple in my heart." The plot is okay After watching The Second World, I think the heroine is an M. . I saw some comments saying that the characters in the second world are more full-bodied than the first world, but I think it is a kind of thinness that seems full, as if it is just for pile-up. The male protagonist is just miserable, one honey poison is followed by another, the routine is even very similar. Excessive misery is actually a kind of flatness. The female protagonist's feelings for the male protagonist are only because he is so miserable, so she understands his ruthlessness. Is it love generated from pity and heartache? In fact, it is a bit difficult to understand. Can a person really "know that he is taking advantage of another person but be happy to do so" because of his past sympathy for another person? The explanation of the emotional line between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is even more vague. There may be none, but there are quite a few, but it is indeed unclear and unreasonable. It's okay but there's a lot of room for improvement.

This book should have the best plot among all the fast-traveling novels I have read. I recommend it. It is very logical [shy]

It's good to watch! And the plot is also very exciting, [adoration][adoration][adoration], cheers for you

I like the first story very much, support the author, come on author

Come on, come on, look good, look good

Come on, come on, it looks good

The writing is super good. I really like the passion of the boy who saved the country during the Republic of China and the depth of the theme.

Nice looking, nice looking

It's pretty cool, but I don't have any ratings.

It's so beautiful and beautiful, please give the author a big boost [sending my heart][sending my heart]