Why Did All the Calamities I Created Turn into Monster Girls?

Give myself a score, one point for my book and four points for my persistence. Even if the writing is indeed not good enough, I want to finish this story. I don't know whether it is good or bad for everyone. I don't know. I just want to plant this seed for every character in the book and keep watering it until I can see the leaves spreading.

The look and feel is still good, the writing is not bad, and the character setting is relatively good. So far, I have only seen the part where the academy was invaded and the school was invaded. I feel that there are villains with online IQs in each team and distinct personalities. Secondly, the setting. I feel that the setting is still very good. The author still controls the rhythm of the protagonist opening cheats very well. But in the early stage, I felt that the role of Ghost Shadow was not very great. At present, it played a prominent role in the college invasion I saw. At other times, it was fed by one of the protagonists, which made me feel a little bit empty (even if the protagonist's plug-in can supplement it). I also want to ask the author one thing, do all disasters need to be level 2 to speak? After all, Youying didn't speak until she reached the second level. I still have a few immature suggestions: 1. You can give full play to the protagonist's subjective initiative in creating disasters, and let them go outside to search for resources and intelligence, so as to lay a solid foundation for their power (it can also reduce the pressure on the protagonist's resources, and also adds a lot of story lines) 2. Currently I have come across two churches, one is the Church of Calamity (it seems to be) and the other seems to be Aurora or some other church. I feel that the ideas in the second church are still acceptable, but the idea of the first church is to completely destroy mankind? You can set the church to be controlled by a humanoid intelligent disaster,! After all, there are countless disasters, but there are still many poisonous spots. I feel that the school being invaded is too sudden, and Chapter 49 "Run", sacrificing ordinary students to divert attention? Just to protect the people of the four major families? I didn't read this thoroughly, and I didn't understand it either. Moreover, even if the front line of such a huge school is tight, it can't be unguarded, right? At present, I only see the place where the academy invades. If there are any settings added by the author above, I probably didn't see it or missed it. Don't comment, thank you. Overall, it is a very good novel. I give it four stars. Come on, the author is great! I remember it wrong, it's not Youying but Youye

Although I can't stand it, I still give it 4 stars. It seems to be written by a newbie. First of all, the inner drama is a bit too much. The most important thing is to do more than talk than think, or simply integrate the inner drama into the "narration". The second point is that the setting is a bit rushed at the beginning. The law enforcer knocks on the door and comes in, and there is no reaction time. The plot advancement in Chapter 1 and Chapter 2 is a bit delayed. I feel that I can start from the creation, and write that the protagonist knows that the original owner has created a group. Weaving, and then the primary purpose is not to be exposed, and then make money through various methods, and finally create the first disaster, and then the female law enforcer joins the protagonist organization, and some of the principles of the creation of the disaster can also be roughly written. (It feels like the author's plot and introduction are fighting, and the introduction feels that the female law enforcer was almost added around chapter 30. The female law enforcer can be written in detail) That's it for the time being, because I haven't watched much, but there are too many inner scenes and I can't stand it, and I haven't mastered the rhythm well.

When will disaster be able to speak? Just smile, it's scary Why is the place where herbs are grown called grassland?

Author, I hope you can continue writing. In fact, you don't need to care about those bad book reviews. It means nothing to you. It is difficult for one person to take advantage of hundreds of people. You only need to pay attention to the readers who like your books. Keep going. Come on.

Yes, but the plot is slow. Nowadays, most of them are fast-paced novels. Generally, 300,000-400,000 words are enough, but this one must be at least 500,000 words, right? It's quite interesting, but I don't know if it will be a single heroine, multiple heroines, or no heroines. I've been reading books for a month and it's still not enough.

Not bad, not bad. The author has a profound background. Each supporting character is very intelligent and has a distinct independent personality. There is only a stance, no villain, and it is slightly biased toward micro-group portraits. But I have a question, why haven't I seen anyone inside using a mobile phone?

Not bad, we found what we like to watch 🙂

Don't use the sword, good author Fake, the knife was issued

It's pretty cool, why is it rated so low?