Urban Cultivation: Invincible from the Golden Elixir Stage
I want to read a book similar to "Urban Cultivation of Immortality: Invincible from the Golden Elixir Stage". Chapter 3 Kicked out of the house Weekend. Zhang Jingren usually works in the hospital, so he leaves early and comes home late every day, often not seeing anyone for several days in a row. It's rare for him to have a rest today, Aunt Lin
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The beginning is quite interesting, but the deputy CPs, who are the protagonist's father and the boss, hope that the scenes will be less and they can be written separately. I am the protagonist controller, and I hope that everything will focus on the protagonist.
The overall content of this book is very good. The protagonist takes revenge on the junior brothers who tortured him. It is very enjoyable to read and the plot is also very relaxing. It's just that the emotional line is very abrupt. The master's feelings are a bit inexplicable. Just because the master became a child and followed the protagonist for a while, he fell in love with the protagonist, and he didn't have much contact. In my opinion, the feelings are still inexplicable. So far, they are all written around the protagonist. The emotional lines are relatively few and have been made clear. In the early stage, I was very confused. I didn't know who the protagonist's lover was. Later, I felt that the master's feelings came out of nowhere and felt like they were forcibly bound. However, the plot is very good, so I can only give it a 4 points.
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