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It's good-looking. There's no deviation in the character setting, and the plot is good, but it goes by too fast. I feel that the central story in the book is only between Lin Qiye and Mu Li, and most of them are biased toward Mu Li [Personal opinion]. Although I know it's a dual male protagonist, I think it would be better if there were some micro-group portraits, and the story is very novel, and the development of their emotional line is unhurried, just right. By the way, is Mu Li a magician who only has cards, or is he a magician himself? If, as he said, the cards are just tools, then when will his own magic be revealed? And if I remember correctly, there is also a great magician in Lin Qiye's mental hospital, right? If he comes out, who is stronger with Mu Li? Although the magician is still a mental patient, I am just curious. The author's writing is good, but for those who haven't watched Zhan Shen, or have watched it, I think the plot should not be too hasty, it is too fast, and I think Mu Li will definitely be stronger in the future. Personal guess

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘Yes God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so cute that I cry From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😈 So beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It makes me realize that God does exist, I am so good that my tears will not stop, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

It's so good to watch. I tied it in two days. The protagonist is not a cliché who knows the plot through time travel. The emotional lines are also very delicate, which makes up for a lot of regrets. Mu Li is also very vividly portrayed, and he is handsome. This kind of character that is usually lazy but very handsome and a little bit pretentious when fighting really pokes me [shy][shy] Anyway, it's super good-looking, two strong characters, the protagonist is a fishing beauty, Lin Qiye is not OOC at all, and they have a crush on each other [laughs]. Among all the fanfics I have read, this one gives me the best feeling. Basically, there is nothing wrong with it. The logic is clear. I give it full marks out of 10. I recommend everyone to take a look [Please update][Please update]

Personally I feel very 🉑[shy] Xiao Li's character design is super 🉑, with a hint of seduction in his laziness, as if he can face anything with ease. He chooses to join the night watchman with Qiye to find the fun of life, and his relationship with his "little knight" grows all the way, and the interaction is super sweet [shy] Wow, she is a fishing beauty, we can be saved [laughs] Qiye carefully discovered that she likes Xiaoli, thinking it was a secret love, but she didn't expect that the other party is the hunter, and she is watching him fall into his arms step by step. It makes me feel so happy [laughs] "Real hunters often appear in the form of prey, little knight, do you like the gift I prepared for you?"

It's good to watch. I watched it because I saw a setting I liked. I happened to have watched Zhan Shen. The main character setting is delicious. I don't really have any feelings about the official version. The emotional line Too little, no matter what I say, this book is good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking😋 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋 😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋

Like it very much! The author is very active, but there may be a few typos, but overall it's very good! The protagonist is my favorite character, and even the weapons are my favorite. I usually rate the book after I have finished reading it, and I never post these comments when I rate it, but this one is really good-looking. Some people said that the author wrote a section that was not good, and the author also gave it a thumbs up. I really like it and have been following it for a while.

It's great. The design of Mu Li's Forbidden Realm is very creative, and the emotional description is also very delicate. The important thing is that the protagonist saves Zhao Kongcheng, Cangnan, and his aunt. I love watching the intervention plot. She is still guiding, very seductive, and very doting on Lin Qiye [Adoration]

I think this book is very good-looking. First of all, the characters are very distinct. I think I really like the character of the protagonist, Shou, who is kind of lazy. And Lin Qiye's character is not OOC, and they both have a bit of a double standard. Moreover, they dote on each other. The protagonist and Shou are not very weak, but are both strong. I like it very much.

It's super good-looking, and it's split between official and official roles. It's my favorite among the many God-destroying fanfics I've read. It has two male protagonists, Lin 1 and Mu 0. The plot develops in an unhurried and just right way, and the character descriptions are also very detailed. It doesn't seem to be broken yet.

Come on, author! I really like Mu Li's character design, he is so cute, a Li cat Where is my book? Why has it been taken off the shelves! ! !

How can I put it this way? This article is worth reading. Personally, I feel that some places would be better expressed in another way. It's not that I don't like nanny stories, but I can't always keep up and feel that I should do it. This is what the author needs to learn and improve. The essence of fan fiction is a way of expression that satisfies one's own desires. It's understandable to want a better ending. In the past, there was a system setting, and it didn't seem like rushing when performing tasks. This article has no system, so some scenes should be polished, and some detours may lead to the same destination. Maybe better writing will be unlocked.

It's good to read, so good to read. If you really like the two male protagonists who kill gods, you should really read this book. The protagonist suffers from laziness and is a magician. He is both strong and powerful. Moreover, the protagonist does not know the development of the plot. If you like the protagonist but does not know the development of the plot, you should really read this book. Oops, it knocked me to death [laughs]

It's okay. The only drawback is that the storyline is downplayed. It looks a bit weird. For readers who haven't read Jingfeng, it may be a bit difficult to understand in some places. It would be better if the storyline and the worldview structure of the entire story were more complete.

It's super good-looking, the characters don't have OOC, and they don't look out of place because of the addition of a protagonist. I really like Mu Li~ Come on!

It's beautiful, come on, author, Mu Li is so lazy, but I like it so much [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss] Really beautiful, highly recommended

Although Qiye has an official counterpart in the original work, most people (including me) don't like the emotional line between Jialan and Qiye (I don't mean to hate it). This fandom has a relatively long acquaintance process, looks richer, and is more rigorous in terms of plot (it may also be from [Destiny]) The most important thing is that Qiye has one more person he cares about in this fanfic, and one more person who cares about him. Mo Li is also the strongest supporter behind Qiye, and can give him the best care when he is down. (If you don't like your personal opinion, please don't comment ´д` ;) (Big brother who loves to eat pears, cheers.) I wish the author will write better and better! Let's take a rest when we're tired! Happy every day! ┏ (^ω^)=

It's very interesting to watch, the plot is exciting, and the characters are well drawn. I just don't know who is left. I was on the side of Qiye at first, and then I became more and more unsure. I won't be on the other side😱

Very beautiful, the author writes very well Where are the books? Why is it gone? [Cry][cry][cry][cry] Do you want a rating? Then I'll change it quickly.

It's very interesting. It's one of the few God-killing novels that I like.

It's super good-looking and the author is diligent in updating. Xiao Li's Forbidden Ruins or his own ability is also super strong and lazy, but he is a top student and a magician. His abilities in all aspects are also very strong. I can't do it anymore. I'm super impressed by Xiao Li and Xiao Ye's double strength. I haven't finished it yet. Yeah, that's it.

Very beautiful! ! I read over a hundred chapters in less than one sitting in one day and the overall pace is very good! At first I almost turned my back on my position, but in the end I finally accepted that Mu was going down the forest or up, and it was very frustrating to "unintentionally" spread the dog food in the early stage. Coupled with the reactions and performances of Pangpang and Cao Yuan, it became even better! The author greatly appreciates the update! Finally, Lin Mu99 (I read many chapters before logging back into my previous account)

The author writes beautifully (♡ω♡) ~♪, [Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore ][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] Like to see, love to see, good-looking (♥∀♥)

This is one of the few books I've read that doesn't overwhelm the protagonist. It's to my liking. It's a great book with potential. Please keep updating the author [Please update]

I stayed up late to read it. It is one of the better ones among the many fanfics I have read. The emotional lines are very delicate and the flow of water is long. The character design is super interesting and it is very interesting. However, the progress is still very slow. I hope the author will continue to work hard! So far it's okay. I always feel that they are a bit awkward after they fall in love, a bit like artificial sugar. I always feel that it lacks a little meaning. Personally, I still like the ambiguous period (personal understanding) The plot is online. Five points is for the plot.

The book is very interesting, but I have some suggestions that the author could change the introduction, because I was dismissed once because of the introduction. I read this novel every day these days, which is very strange. So click in and take a look. The author really writes well and is worth reading₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

I really like Mu Li's character design. It's great. I've read so many fics of God-Decapitating. It's really rare to see one with Jialan. I hope the author can update it ten times a day (just kidding) [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

From my individualistic point of view, after reading so many articles, the core of this article is currently stable and interesting. The protagonist is very powerful, but it does not interfere too much. I like it~(¯▽¯~), poker Being a forbidden ruin is also a very good idea, and 71's 🩷 is also premeditated and step-by-step, naturally, everything comes naturally, really, I think it is good-looking, the great magician above the supreme god 🧙‍♂️ Saigao 🌹

Oh my god, this is such a beautiful novel. Why was it immediately removed from the shelves? [What?] Please tell me the details. [Shocked] I will wait for it to be on the shelves again [almost crying]

The content is very good, I like it very much, thank you very much [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Good-looking, very good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, don't ask why, just two words: good-looking! Why would I give a five-star review? It's because I was bribed by Brother Mu's pears.