Ye Luo************

It looks great, the main cast finally looks a lot more normal [the original plot was so small and the romance was a bit dramatic], and some of the problems are very realistic, but not particularly cruel. It's so good. I hope the official writes like this 😭 Wang Mo in this book has a warm heart and is not fake. He has a sense of being alive and is very youthful in his daily life. This is the Ye Luoli I want to read.

When my wife is tired from studying, she will read a few chapters to relax, when she is full after eating, she will read a few chapters to smooth her stomach, a few chapters before going to bed, a few chapters after waking up, a few chapters on the way to school, a few chapters on the way home from school, a few chapters while riding a bicycle, and a few chapters while using the toilet [crying]

Author, you are so awesome! ! The writing is self-contained with humor, and you can read it with a smile when you click on a paragraph without any reading burden; what's even more amazing is the character creation, there is no one who is just a tool for blackness, everyone's behavior logic is self-consistent, and it is very comfortable to watch; and the rhythm of the plot is super smooth, and you can catch up to the end in one breath, and there has never been an awkward scene that makes you dig your toes into the ground. The most surprising thing is that I changed the part of the original work, and changed all the unreasonable plots that made people frown into things that normal people would do. It not only adheres to the spirit of the original work but also fixes the logical bugs. This skill is really amazing! !

It's so cool, the main characters are super smart! Moreover, the large text is both humorous and interesting. It is the most beautiful Ye Luoli fanfic I have ever read, and it is really super well written silently. The female protagonist is super super happy, eh [shy][shy][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Wc, this book exceeded my expectations. I read Ye Luoli's fanfics just for fun. I originally looked at the rows of cps in the introduction and thought it was just another logical thing that is inconsistent with the original work. I didn't expect that the author seriously repaired the loopholes in the original work in terms of increasing his age, and made the overall story more reasonable and normal without greatly changing the plot direction. It's amazing.

So interesting! ! [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] I don't know how the author did it. The personality of each character has not changed much. Instead, it is based on the original character and filled in with the identity in the respective text, making each character seem to have come alive. I hope that Ye Luoli's animation will be based on this! ! ! I read Ye Luoli's fanfics a bit mixed. I read the main character Wen Qian and Wang Mo, and the main character Wang Mo and Wen Qian, and the main character Luo Li, and other human fairies, and even made my own new characters. Recently, I read the main character Wang Mo before reading this one. I thought it would be similar to what I had read before, but it turned out! ! Unbelievably beautiful! I really like some of the dialogues between Wang Mo and Luo Li. They always have a touch of humor and are so funny [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] Anyway, highly recommended! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

I like this Momo so much [shy][shy][shy]

I tied it in one go and it was a blast to watch! The author's writing is superb. Give the author a thumbs up [Like]. I was tortured so much by the anime plot that was full of leaks like stocking nets. The author simply knitted stocking nets into woolen pants! I will keep following the book in the future. Meeting this book is the happiest thing for me today!

So pretty! ! ! Everyone has a brain, and Wang Mo is also very good. He is one of the few people who does not hate the protagonist group [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The writing is really great [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Hahaha😂, so lifelike

I like this book. Good luck to the author.

This book is really cute [give me heart] I can't explain what I saw and felt in just a few words, but everyone in it is so cute. It's really my favorite Ye Luoli fanfic🥰🥰

Finally I can see Ye Luoliwen who is not embarrassed

The author has so many great jokes💥, each chapter is like watching a funny family episode, the characters have their own personalities, top quality! Worth recommending

Good-looking (♥∀♥) Oh, it looks innovative.

Good-looking, good-looking, like it

I like your book very much. I hope the teacher can work harder to write books, and the teacher's writing style is very good and humorous.

It's very well written, and everyone's character is very reasonable.

It looks good, everyone is a good person, and they all have their own growth.

Nothing to say, the setting is very good and interesting.

Nice! Everyone is so kind, so nice!

It's well written, logical, and not shady.

The author's ideas are very clear, his views are very correct, and it's super beautiful.

It's very beautiful, really very beautiful. Everyone in it has a brain and I'm not criticizing anyone. So when will you update it? I'm going to starve to death π_π