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Generally speaking, the heroine is a very gentle Slytherin, but the overall emotional control and the ending of some characters are not ideal. The heroine in the early stage will be braver, and in the middle and later stages, she will be in a state of being outside the plot but entangled, so it looks weird (? But it is actually understandable, but if you mainly want to enjoy watching the fanfiction, this will not count. In the later stage, it is a bit subtly aggrieved. Anyway, I was jumping to read it. , The overall cp line is a bit confusing. For example, Cedric's ambiguous description with Qiu Zhang after he separated from the heroine and the emphasis on the fact that the heroine doesn't care are not necessary. If it is a simple cp of Xiaoduo, I can watch this, but the author is a bit partial to Xiaoduo and if other male protagonists are included, there is no need to emphasize the emotions in the main plot that have nothing to do with the heroine. But overall it is okay, it is a logical article.

Teacher, each chapter should be about 2,000 words, no more than 3,000 words. The Tomato recommendation mechanism is very special. If you squeeze too much content into a chapter, you may not get better exposure.

The heroine is quite strange

Very prettyヾ(*ΦωΦ)ツ

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Finished watching it. It's great. Love it.